Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

by -Kashish- on September 15, 2010, 02:37:12 PM
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Ek pal tha woh jab hum saath the
Ek doosre ke haathon mein haath the
Kuch ehsaas kuch umeedein aur kuchkhwab paas the
Aaj tere jaane se mere armaano ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek din milne ki chaahat mein
Jaane kitni raatein aankhon hi aankhon mein guzaarte the
Kuch kahenge aur bohat kuch sunenge
Aaj teri khamoshi se meri baaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek hi jaise ehsaas mein jee rahe the
Ek jaise hi alfaaz keh rahe the
Kuch lamhe jo dono ko azeez the
Aaj teri ankahi sunkar mere jazbaaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tere saath tanha rehne ke liye
Jaane kitni mehfilein chod dete the
Kuch waqt tere saaye mein baith_te the
Aaj teri berukhi se meri nazron ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tujh mein bas rahi thi main
Aur ek tujhe hi dil mein basa rakha tha
Aaj tere anjaan hone se meri "kashish" ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...
 
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 03:11:47 PM »
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Quote from: -Kashish- on September 15, 2010, 02:37:12 PM
Ek pal tha woh jab hum saath the
Ek doosre ke haathon mein haath the
Kuch ehsaas kuch umeedein aur kuchkhwab paas the
Aaj tere jaane se mere armaano ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek din milne ki chaahat mein
Jaane kitni raatein aankhon hi aankhon mein guzaarte the
Kuch kahenge aur bohat kuch sunenge
Aaj teri khamoshi se meri baaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek hi jaise ehsaas mein jee rahe the
k jaise hi alfaaz keh rahe the
Kuch lamhe jo dono ko azeez the
Aaj teri ankahi sunkar mere jazbaaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tere saath tanha rehne ke liye
Jaane kitni mehfilein chod dete the
Kuch waqt tere saaye mein baith_te the
Aaj teri berukhi se meri nazron ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tujh mein bas rahi thi main
Aur ek tujhe hi dil mein basa rakha tha
Aaj tere anjaan hone se meri "kashish" ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...
 


Very Nice Poetry....Kashish Ji ! dil ko chhuute ehsaas ... bahut khoob rahi aapki peshkash ...dil se daad ...

aise hi likhte rahen ... aage bhi ...khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 03:12:23 PM »
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kya baat hai bhut hi khoob ehsaasoN se piroya hai aapne apni is tehreer ko...............so touchy daad qubool keejiye



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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 03:15:57 PM »
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Very Nice Poetry....Kashish Ji ! dil ko chhuute ehsaas ... bahut khoob rahi aapki peshkash ...dil se daad ...

aise hi likhte rahen ... aage bhi ...khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...

Bohat Bohat shukriya Anshumali ji
aapne apna waqt diya....aur dua'in woh to anmol hain notworthy
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 03:17:16 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on September 15, 2010, 03:12:23 PM
kya baat hai bhut hi khoob ehsaasoN se piroya hai aapne apni is tehreer ko...............so touchy daad qubool keejiye



aslam

Bohat Bohat shukriya Aslam Sahab
jo aap aaye aur saraaha... notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 03:30:25 PM »
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Waah Kya kehne kashish ji bohat khoob,.

Dair aaye durust aaye, Bohat behtareen kalaam hai,.

May Allah bless you,.
Khush rahein
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2010, 02:01:29 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Kashish Sahiba
ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe Ameen.
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2010, 02:02:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob Kashish jee..!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 02:10:21 AM »
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Aadaab Kashish Jee

aapne dard bhare khayaaloN ko behad achchel lafzoN meiN qaid kiya hai... Aik achchi kalaam per daad kabool kijye...

Likhate rahiye...
khush rahiye.....
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2010, 09:28:10 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Kashish ji... bahut pyaari poem hai... dil ko chhoo gayi aapki kavita... kuch likhe bina humse raha nahi gaya...



har aaina to kaanch ka hi hota hai,
mera dil bhi kisi kaanch se kam nahi,
jab tak tum the ye sheesh mahal lagta tha,
aaj tum nahi to ye kuch tukdon se kam nahi,
ek toofan ke aane se wo mahal dheh gaya,
aaj pyaar nahi aur koi sheeshmahal nahi,

kabhi tumse milne ko hum bhi betaab the,
aaj tumhaare jaane se wo betabi rahi nahi,
kal tak tumhse hi har kali mehekti thi,
aaj tum nahi to koi phool gulaabi rahi nahi,
aaj har phool murjhaa gaya hai,
kisi baag me aaj rahi bahaar nahi,

ehsaas to aaj bhi hamaare ek se hi hain,
alfaz bhi apne ab tak koi badle nahi,
fark bas itna hai kal pyaar tha aaj dard hai,
par aaj bhi tumhaari koi baat hum bhoole nahi,
har yaad seene me dard banke sama gaya hai,
aaj tum nahi to muskuraaane ki koi wajah nahi,

kal tumhaare saath tanha the, aaj akele hai tanha,
tanhaayi ka aalam kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi badla nahi,
kal tak har mehfil tumse hi sajti thi,
aaj mehfilon me waisi rounak nahi,
kal tak jeene ki ek umang thi dil me,
aaj tum nahi to koi umang bhi nahi,

dil me tum mere aaj bhi ho,
fark bas itna hai ki tum kareeb nahi,
chaaha tha tumko khud se badhke humne,
par shayad tumhaare dil me mere liye kuch nahi,
tumhaare jaane se tut chuka hai mera "Hriday",
aaj tum nahi paas to kuch bhi hum nahi...
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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2010, 09:31:37 AM »
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Bahut Bahut bahut Khoob Kashish ji..

Bahut Hi Gehre Jazbaat!!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aapko Yahan Dekhkar Bahutttt Khushi Hui hai..Yuhi Likhte Rahiye.. icon_flower
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Quote from: Azeem on September 15, 2010, 03:30:25 PM
Waah Kya kehne kashish ji bohat khoob,.

Dair aaye durust aaye, Bohat behtareen kalaam hai,.

May Allah bless you,.
Khush rahein

Bohat Bohat shukriya Azeem Sahab....
dua'on ke liye.......bohat zaroorat hai.....
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Quote from: HUM_DUM on September 16, 2010, 02:01:29 AM
Bohat Khoob Mohtarma Kashish Sahiba
ALLAH Pak Aapko Khush Rakhe Ameen.

Bohat Bohat shukriya
Allah aapko bhi hamesha khush rakhe'in....Ameen!!!
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Quote from: pandit on September 16, 2010, 02:02:27 AM
Bahut khoob Kashish jee..!!

Ji Shukriya...

Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 16, 2010, 02:10:21 AM
Aadaab Kashish Jee

aapne dard bhare khayaaloN ko behad achchel lafzoN meiN qaid kiya hai... Aik achchi kalaam per daad kabool kijye...

Likhate rahiye...
khush rahiye.....
khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         


Shukriya Janaab...
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Quote from: Shihab on September 16, 2010, 07:12:16 PM
Bahut Khub Behna.

ALLAH Pak Aapko Humesha Shad o Aabad Rakhe Aameen

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Bohat Bohat shukriya Majid Bhai.....
aapke aane ke liye
aur aapki dua'on ke liye...
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