Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai... -Panna 2:Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq

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«Reply #15 on: September 17, 2010, 10:30:30 AM »

Quote from: klaskar on September 17, 2010, 09:28:10 AM

Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Kashish ji... bahut pyaari poem hai... dil ko chhoo gayi aapki kavita... kuch likhe bina humse raha nahi gaya...

har aaina to kaanch ka hi hota hai,
mera dil bhi kisi kaanch se kam nahi,
jab tak tum the ye sheesh mahal lagta tha,
aaj tum nahi to ye kuch tukdon se kam nahi,
ek toofan ke aane se wo mahal dheh gaya,
aaj pyaar nahi aur koi sheeshmahal nahi,

kabhi tumse milne ko hum bhi betaab the,
aaj tumhaare jaane se wo betabi rahi nahi,
kal tak tumhse hi har kali mehekti thi,
aaj tum nahi to koi phool gulaabi rahi nahi,
aaj har phool murjhaa gaya hai,
kisi baag me aaj rahi bahaar nahi,

ehsaas to aaj bhi hamaare ek se hi hain,
alfaz bhi apne ab tak koi badle nahi,
fark bas itna hai kal pyaar tha aaj dard hai,
par aaj bhi tumhaari koi baat hum bhoole nahi,
har yaad seene me dard banke sama gaya hai,
aaj tum nahi to muskuraaane ki koi wajah nahi,

kal tumhaare saath tanha the, aaj akele hai tanha,
tanhaayi ka aalam kal bhi tha aur aaj bhi badla nahi,
kal tak har mehfil tumse hi sajti thi,
aaj mehfilon me waisi rounak nahi,
kal tak jeene ki ek umang thi dil me,
aaj tum nahi to koi umang bhi nahi,

dil me tum mere aaj bhi ho,
fark bas itna hai ki tum kareeb nahi,
chaaha tha tumko khud se badhke humne,
par shayad tumhaare dil me mere liye kuch nahi,
tumhaare jaane se tut chuka hai mera "Hriday",
aaj tum nahi paas to kuch bhi hum nahi...

Bohat hi umda kalaam likha hai aapne...
shukriya ki aapko humara likha hua pasand aaya...


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #16 on: September 17, 2010, 10:33:27 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on September 17, 2010, 09:31:37 AM

Bahut Bahut bahut Khoob Kashish ji..

Bahut Hi Gehre Jazbaat!!!!

Aapko Yahan Dekhkar Bahutttt Khushi Hui hai..Yuhi Likhte Rahiye..

Bohat Bohat shukriya Bhaiya ki aapko humein dekh kar khushi hui...
accha laga jaankar ki koi hai jise humri maujudgi se khushi milti hai...
saraahne ke liye bhi bohat bohat shukriya...


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #17 on: September 17, 2010, 10:36:38 AM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on September 17, 2010, 10:33:27 AM

Bohat Bohat shukriya Bhaiya ki aapko humein dekh kar khushi hui...
accha laga jaankar ki koi hai jise humri maujudgi se khushi milti hai...
saraahne ke liye bhi bohat bohat shukriya...

Kyon Naa Khushi Hogi Aapko Dekhkar Kashish..Itna Acha Likhte Ho Aap Aur Ab To Aapne Bhai kehkar Humse Ek Anmol Rishta Bhi Jod Liya..

Ab Iss Bhai ki Baat Humesha Maaniye Aur Yopar Humesha Active Rahiye


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #18 on: September 17, 2010, 01:37:00 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Kashish ji...!!!

Quote from: -Kashish- on September 17, 2010, 10:30:30 AM

Bohat hi umda kalaam likha hai aapne...
shukriya ki aapko humara likha hua pasand aaya...


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #19 on: September 19, 2010, 12:18:27 PM »

kashishji bahut khoob .


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #20 on: September 19, 2010, 12:34:07 PM »

Quote from: -Kashish- on September 15, 2010, 02:37:12 PM

Ek pal tha woh jab hum saath the
Ek doosre ke haathon mein haath the
Kuch ehsaas kuch umeedein aur kuchkhwab paas the
Aaj tere jaane se mere armaano ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek din milne ki chaahat mein
Jaane kitni raatein aankhon hi aankhon mein guzaarte the
Kuch kahenge aur bohat kuch sunenge
Aaj teri khamoshi se meri baaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek hi jaise ehsaas mein jee rahe the
Ek jaise hi alfaaz keh rahe the
Kuch lamhe jo dono ko azeez the
Aaj teri ankahi sunkar mere jazbaaton ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tere saath tanha rehne ke liye
Jaane kitni mehfilein chod dete the
Kuch waqt tere saaye mein baith_te the
Aaj teri berukhi se meri nazron ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

Ek tujh mein bas rahi thi main
Aur ek tujhe hi dil mein basa rakha tha
Aaj tere anjaan hone se meri "kashish" ka
Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

bahut khub kashish ji


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #21 on: September 24, 2010, 12:29:09 PM »

Kashish... Dard Ke Sath Mohabbat Ko Lafzon me Behad Khubsoorati Se Utaara Hai Aapne.. Zindgi Me Kya Kami Raha Gai.. Aapka Yeh Qalaam Padh Kar Humen Bhi Kuch Aisa Ehasaas Hua.. Aur Hum apne Dard se Phir Dil Laga Baithe..!!

Yaadon aur Mohabbat Bhare Lamhaaton Par likhe aapke yeh alfaaz Dil Tak utar Gaye.. Bahut hi Umda Peshkas hai...

Dil se Daad Kubool karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: Woh aaina ab toot gaya hai...

«Reply #22 on: September 24, 2010, 12:32:47 PM »

Wo Chup Hain, Khamosh Hain Par Tanha Nahi Hain,
Meri Yaadon Ke Saaye Jo Sath Hain, Har Lamha Unke....!!

**~** Mann **~**


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