woh aaye zindagi me.....

by punam on April 13, 2008, 06:13:04 AM
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woh aaye zindagi me kuch iss tarah
ke tanhaaiyan bhi mere gun gunane lagi
hawa bhi nayi geet sunane lagi..

sanse he meheki dharkane hain meheki
dil se ek nayi sada aane lagi...

tanhayion me toh yaad aati hai unki
mehfilon me bhi ab satane lagi..

ek bas unka chehra samaya hai dil me
her ek se nazren churane lagi..

neende hamari woh churane lage
karwaton me hi raat jane lagi...

khawbon me bhi dikhte hai sirf woh hi
surat unki iss kadar samane lagi...
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«Reply #1 on: April 13, 2008, 06:33:14 AM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai punam dear..
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punam
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«Reply #2 on: April 13, 2008, 06:46:17 AM »
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thanx majid ji...and Honey di...
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«Reply #3 on: April 13, 2008, 06:57:24 AM »
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Quote from: punam on April 13, 2008, 06:13:04 AM
woh aaye zindagi me kuch iss tarah
ke tanhaaiyan bhi mere gun gunane lagi
hawa bhi nayi geet sunane lagi..

sanse he meheki dharkane hain meheki
dil se ek nayi sada aane lagi...

tanhayion me toh yaad aati hai unki
mehfilon me bhi ab satane lagi..

ek bas unka chehra samaya hai dil me
her ek se nazren churane lagi..

neende hamari woh churane lage
karwaton me hi raat jane lagi...

khawbon me bhi dikhte hai sirf woh hi
surat unki iss kadar samane lagi...


Iss hasiiN gamgeen tarahi tehreer per hamar daad kabool kareiN punam ji.......iss per kutchhlikhna chahooNga...

bahoot gammgeen ghazal kehta hai
Dard shayar ka asal kehta hai

Baithha-baithha woh nazer bhar se,
Zarre-zarre per safer likhta hai.

NeeNde jab hammne chura lee uski
dil per hi mere Ghazal likhta hai

harash
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«Reply #4 on: April 13, 2008, 07:35:11 AM »
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Thanx..Harsh ji..aap ka shayari ka jawab nahi..bahot khoob...
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«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2008, 02:53:07 PM »
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PUNAM Dear Behad Khubsoorat Ehasaas Likhe Hain Tumne..!! Usual Smile Usual Smile
har Ek Line Aur ek Lafz me Ishq-e-Tadap Nazar aa Raha hai..!!  Applause Applause

Great Work.. !!

**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #6 on: April 13, 2008, 03:27:24 PM »
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bahoot khoob punam bahoot aachi lines hai Applause





Baadal
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«Reply #7 on: April 14, 2008, 10:08:43 PM »
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Quote from: punam on April 13, 2008, 06:13:04 AM
woh aaye zindagi me kuch iss tarah
ke tanhaaiyan bhi mere gun gunane lagi
hawa bhi nayi geet sunane lagi..

sanse he meheki dharkane hain meheki
dil se ek nayi sada aane lagi...

tanhayion me toh yaad aati hai unki
mehfilon me bhi ab satane lagi..

ek bas unka chehra samaya hai dil me
her ek se nazren churane lagi..

neende hamari woh churane lage
karwaton me hi raat jane lagi...

khawbon me bhi dikhte hai sirf woh hi
surat unki iss kadar samane lagi...


Nice one poonam ji....
kamaal hai........
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2008, 12:21:31 PM »
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Quote from: punam on April 13, 2008, 06:13:04 AM
woh aaye zindagi me kuch iss tarah
ke tanhaaiyan bhi mere gun gunane lagi
hawa bhi nayi geet sunane lagi..

sanse he meheki dharkane hain meheki
dil se ek nayi sada aane lagi...

tanhayion me toh yaad aati hai unki
mehfilon me bhi ab satane lagi..

ek bas unka chehra samaya hai dil me
her ek se nazren churane lagi..

neende hamari woh churane lage
karwaton me hi raat jane lagi...

khawbon me bhi dikhte hai sirf woh hi
surat unki iss kadar samane lagi...


Kya bat hai pooam ji.....

n jane kiskee talaas hai
intjaar kiska karte hai wo
rahte hai dil ke kareeb we
jinhe ajnabee mante hai wo..

netra...
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«Reply #9 on: April 17, 2008, 05:03:06 PM »
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bahoot khoob Punam and Shihab!!
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pandit
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«Reply #10 on: April 17, 2008, 06:40:08 PM »
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nice one Shihab.......
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punam
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2008, 11:16:37 AM »
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Thanx vicky ji and baadal ji...
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punam
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2008, 11:17:27 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on April 14, 2008, 05:18:20 AM
Patjhad Ke Mausam Main Bhi Aate Ho Bahaar Banke.
Hijr Main Bhi Dil Ko Sukoon Dete Ho Qaraar Banke.

Har Koi Aake Padh Leta Hai Ab Yun Chehre Ko Mere
Is Kadar Aankhon Main Samaye Ho Tun Intezaar Banke.

Haan Ab Mujhe Us Chand Ki Bhi Jarurat Nahi Rahi Hai
Jab Se Tum Samaye Ho Is Dil Main Ik Noor Banke.

Meri Duniya Yun Hi Sanwar Gayi Hai.E.HumDum Mere
Jabse Tum Aaye Ho Is Zindagi Main Pyaar Banke.

Nice one from u Majid ji...
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2008, 11:19:34 AM »
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Thanx pandit ji...Pooja di...

Netra ji Thanx chalo aap yehan aake padhe aur reply bhi kiye..
bahot khob likhe aap ne...thanx again..
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«Reply #14 on: April 19, 2008, 11:20:58 AM »
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Woh kaon hain,? nice one, good job.
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