--- Woh laut ayi -----

by BeNam on April 28, 2005, 11:16:53 AM
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BeNam
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Virano main baharon ki harkat hai,
Sub pe chha raha nashaey Mahobat hai,

Uske laut ane ki khabar mili hai,
Shayad usney meri fariyad suni hai,

Rok nahi payenge hum is dile bekarar ko,
Tarasta raha hain raha hai jo dilbar ke didar ko,
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dhadkan
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«Reply #1 on: April 28, 2005, 11:18:43 AM »
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Wah wah wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 :lol:
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BeNam
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2005, 11:35:50 AM »
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Dhadkanji aap kya din bhar isey tarah logon ke sher/ Gazals /poems padhati hai?
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vikas2210
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2005, 11:45:18 AM »
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laut kar tum aaogi malum ha mujhe
asar apne payar ka malum tha mujhe
door nahi rah paogi malum tha mujhe
tum mere siwa kisi na ho paoogi malum tha mujhe
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2005, 11:47:15 AM »
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laut kar tum aaogi malum ha mujhe
asar apne payar ka malum tha mujhe
door nahi rah paogi malum tha mujhe
tum mere siwa kisi na ho paoogi malum tha mujhe
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BeNam
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2005, 11:53:21 AM »
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You are too good Vikas! and thanks for the posting!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2005, 12:03:44 PM »
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thanks benam

laut ke jana jaroor hai
phir tumse milna zaroor hai
kal ka bharosa nahi
aaj hi milna zaroor hai.
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Meena
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2005, 03:24:21 PM »
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wowwwwwwww benam ji bohot hi acha likhte hai aap!!!!! really too gud!!!!!
aur vikas ji apke jawab bih bohot hi ache hai!!!!

 :D
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BeNam
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«Reply #8 on: April 29, 2005, 03:20:58 AM »
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Meena ji aur Vikas thanks for the comments, you guys are too encouraging!
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Meena
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2005, 02:33:55 PM »
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Quote from: "BeNam"
Meena ji aur Vikas thanks for the comments, you guys are too encouraging!


ur welcome, agar mujhe acha lagta hai tabhi mai tareef karti hoon!! keep it up!!

 :D
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apnaa_koi
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2005, 12:31:09 AM »
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BeNam.... vikas2210... bohat achay lagay Sher

Apnaa_koi
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2005, 03:23:47 AM »
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apna ji aap bhi koi likhoo an dear.................

mein wait kroon ga aap ki reply ka............................................... .............
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2005, 05:10:43 PM »
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wowooww good one!!
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BeNam
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2005, 05:16:13 PM »
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--- Thanks Poojaji ----

Arman hai ke milane ayegi tu,
Meri ruthi huey takdir jagayegi tu,
Mujhase se ruth kar jo chali hayi hai,
Woh mahobaat ki bahar le ayegi tu!

---- BENAM ------
Banda majboor hai mahobaat main teri,
Warna jhukana nahi fidarat main meri!
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: September 19, 2005, 05:17:51 PM »
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Good one!!

khuda se karegy dua ki payar apka apko naseeb ho
rahe her shaks is jahan mai payar ke sath
na kisi ko bhi, kisi ki judai naseeb ho!!!!!
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