woh masoom............

by salil2002 on October 03, 2008, 01:33:48 PM
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tum se tha jaana kya hai mohabbat
tum se mil k jaise khud se mulaqaat huyi thi
muskuraate tum toh jaisa khilta tha kamal
hansi tumhaari ek khilkhilaati nadi thi

hawa mein thi bas teri mohabbat ki khushboo
tujhe dekh kar ye ghatayein baras rahi thi
dekh kar jise maine jaana hai kya mohabbat
woh pariyon si masoom haan ek kali thi

ajab sa nasha tha hosh main mein kahaan tha
dekha tujhe aur dekhta hi raha tha
main kho sa gaya tha bahek sa gaya tha
main khud main nahin tha , main tujhme kaahin tha

woh ehsaas aisa ajab sa hua tha
thi shayad mohabbat ya main khwabon mein kaahin tha
mein na keh paaya kuch bas chup hi raha tha
yeh meri pehli mohabbat ka sab waakya tha
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2008, 02:00:27 PM »
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nice lines dude!
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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2008, 02:15:57 PM »
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thnks.......anjaan?
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 05:04:25 PM »
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pehli muhobat huh acha laga salil tumara poetry
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2008, 06:10:52 AM »
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chaliye aapko pasand to aaya ..............
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2008, 01:38:33 PM »
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jee? wats the ? for.....
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«Reply #6 on: October 07, 2008, 09:15:13 PM »
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jan ke mohbat ku
anjan rehne ki kasam khai he
pyar he or rahega
per chup rehne ki kasam khai he
wo chahta nahi muje
isliye dur rehne ki kasam khai he


just adding salil off the topic.
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2008, 02:49:26 PM »
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good lines kanta

kya pata tu na ho uske naseebmain
 tere koi aur hi raqeeb ho
bhool kar oose chal phir mohabbat kii galiyon main
 shayad mil jaaye woh jo sirf tera hi naseeb ho
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2008, 08:40:36 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on October 03, 2008, 01:33:48 PM
tum se tha jaana kya hai mohabbat
tum se mil k jaise khud se mulaqaat huyi thi
muskuraate tum toh jaisa khilta tha kamal
hansi tumhaari ek khilkhilaati nadi thi

hawa mein thi bas teri mohabbat ki khushboo
tujhe dekh kar ye ghatayein baras rahi thi
dekh kar jise maine jaana hai kya mohabbat
woh pariyon si masoom haan ek kali thi

ajab sa nasha tha hosh main mein kahaan tha
dekha tujhe aur dekhta hi raha tha
main kho sa gaya tha bahek sa gaya tha
main khud main nahin tha , main tujhme kaahin tha

woh ehsaas aisa ajab sa hua tha
thi shayad mohabbat ya main khwabon mein kaahin tha
mein na keh paaya kuch bas chup hi raha tha
yeh meri pehli mohabbat ka sab waakya tha

Bohot Khoob Salil   icon_thumleft
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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2008, 08:50:28 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on October 03, 2008, 01:33:48 PM
tum se tha jaana kya hai mohabbat
tum se mil k jaise khud se mulaqaat huyi thi
muskuraate tum toh jaisa khilta tha kamal
hansi tumhaari ek khilkhilaati nadi thi

hawa mein thi bas teri mohabbat ki khushboo
tujhe dekh kar ye ghatayein baras rahi thi
dekh kar jise maine jaana hai kya mohabbat
woh pariyon si masoom haan ek kali thi

ajab sa nasha tha hosh main mein kahaan tha
dekha tujhe aur dekhta hi raha tha
main kho sa gaya tha bahek sa gaya tha
main khud main nahin tha , main tujhme kaahin tha

woh ehsaas aisa ajab sa hua tha
thi shayad mohabbat ya main khwabon mein kaahin tha
mein na keh paaya kuch bas chup hi raha tha
yeh meri pehli mohabbat ka sab waakya tha

sundar aur saral panktiyon mein izhaar kiya he aapne.bahut khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: October 12, 2008, 05:45:50 AM »
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thnks prateek bhai ,,,,,,,,,,
aur celmira ji urf talat di ko salaam
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2008, 05:25:02 PM »
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beautiful likha he salil

esa nasib kyu banae
ke do dil ek na ho pae
khud badlege hum isku
nasib ku kyu bich mein lae
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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2008, 06:00:16 PM »
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Salil,
Kya dil pasand shayiri likhi hai, bahut umda.

Kanta saahiba,
Aap ki shayiri bhi khoob roshan hai.
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2009, 06:22:21 AM »
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Quote from: Kanta on October 12, 2008, 05:25:02 PM
beautiful likha he salil

esa nasib kyu banae
ke do dil ek na ho pae
khud badlege hum isku
nasib ku kyu bich mein lae
Quote from: syednaami on October 12, 2008, 06:00:16 PM
Salil,
Kya dil pasand shayiri likhi hai, bahut umda.

Kanta saahiba,
Aap ki shayiri bhi khoob roshan hai.

thnks kanta and syed bhai.....kanta once again nice lines from u
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«Reply #14 on: February 11, 2009, 10:58:39 AM »
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wah wah.. kya baat hai salil bahoot umda likha hai.. Good reply Kanta
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