Woh mujhsay sa yoon daaman churaane lagay

by Brijinder on August 07, 2010, 09:05:07 PM
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wo mujh se yoon daaman chuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lagay


jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay

lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lagay

pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo thay kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lagay

guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
vo sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lagay

jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lagay

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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2010, 02:17:28 AM »
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bahut bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aapki... bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2010, 12:17:43 PM »
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bahot khoob janaab wah ..khass kar ,pigal jaate .....aur guzishta shab ..yeh do ashaar to bahoot umda hai.. daad hi daad .
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«Reply #3 on: August 08, 2010, 01:12:19 PM »
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wo mujh se yoon daaman chuRaane lage
ki guzre huwe din fasaane lagay


jo kal tak muhabbat ka izhaar the
wahi ab hawas ke bahaane lagay

lagaa`o na pehre yooN khushbu`oN par
haiN haasil meN jin kay zamaane lagay

pighal jaate baahoN maiN jo thay kabhii
bahut faasle ab banaane lagay

guzishta jo shab ka hai aayaa khayaal
vo sharma ke ankheiN jhukaane lagay

jo poochhaa to keh daalii hai dil kii baat
na kehna tujhe ab rulaane lagay



Good One ...... Brijinder Ji....nice creation...yunhi likhte rahen...

duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #4 on: August 08, 2010, 09:03:35 PM »
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I am thankful to all of you for the kind words.
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