woh muskura diya....

by PRATIKKFEMILY on June 30, 2009, 03:59:26 AM
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sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya....
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya.....

lehje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhuaan...
chehra bata raha tha k kuch ganwa diya...

aawaz mein thayrao tha aankhoon mein nami thi...
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya....

jane kya us ko logon se thi shikayatein. ...
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya...

khud bhi woh hum se bichar kar adhura sa ho gaya....
mujh ko bhi itne logon mein tanha bana diya....
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«Reply #1 on: June 30, 2009, 06:03:02 AM »
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Wah wah Pratik ji very beautiful creation, Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 30, 2009, 06:15:54 AM »
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Wonderful creation Pratikji. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2009, 08:41:34 AM »
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Nice sharing...Pratikkfemily ji...
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2009, 11:42:26 AM »
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Nice one Pratik Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2009, 03:33:51 PM »
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sab se chupa kar dard jo woh muskura diya....
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya.....

lehje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka dhuaan...
chehra bata raha tha k kuch ganwa diya...

aawaz mein thayrao tha aankhoon mein nami thi...
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya....

jane kya us ko logon se thi shikayatein. ...
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya...

khud bhi woh hum se bichar kar adhura sa ho gaya....
mujh ko bhi itne logon mein tanha bana diya....


BAHUT KHOOB PRATIKKFEMILY..............
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2009, 06:41:02 AM »
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dil ko chhoo liyaa yaar
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2009, 07:13:38 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley icon_flower


 VERII NAAAICE PRATIK JI
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2009, 10:28:01 AM »
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very nice ...
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