Woh reet gaye; ham reet gaye!!

by abdbundeli on November 06, 2008, 02:29:25 PM
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Woh kahtey hain,"Ham jeet gaye!"
Ham kahtey hain "Tum jeet gaye!"
Takreereyn, fir bhi, jaaree hain:
Woh reet gaye; ham reet gaye!!

           -Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2008, 02:35:06 PM »
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Woh kahtey hain,"Ham jeet gaye!"
Ham kahtey hain "Tum jeet gaye!"
Takreereyn, fir bhi, jaaree hain:
Woh reet gaye; ham reet gaye!!

           -Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'

Very nice lines Abd Ji

Ek sher yaad aa gaya:

"Ye baazi Ishq ki baazi hai
Jo chaaho laga doi, dar kaisa
Gar jeet gaye to kya kehna,
Haare bhi to baazi maat nahin
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«Reply #2 on: November 06, 2008, 03:06:28 PM »
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Very nice lines Abd Ji

Ek sher yaad aa gaya:

"Ye baazi Ishq ki baazi hai
Jo chaaho laga doi, dar kaisa
Gar jeet gaye to kya kehna,
Haare bhi to baazi maat nahin
"
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Celmira ji!
Thanks a lot for the comments! Sher bhi bahut hi achchhaa lagaa! Yahee to haqeeqat bhi hai!

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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2008, 05:15:19 PM »
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Nice Abd ji and nice sharing Celmira
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2008, 05:30:11 PM »
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Celmira ji / Pooja ji!
Shukriyah!

Kabhi haar mein jeet hai;
Kabhi jeet mein haar!
Haar-jeet key kheyl mein:
Badhhtaa prati-pal pyaar!!

      Ram Prakash Garg 'abd bundeli'
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2008, 05:42:18 PM »
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Wonderful ABD Ji
Nice sharing Celmira Ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 07, 2008, 04:27:16 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Rajesh Harish ji!
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«Reply #7 on: November 07, 2008, 04:20:56 PM »
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Bahut Ache AbdBundeli saheb.. Applause Applause

Nice One Celmira.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 07, 2008, 04:30:26 PM »
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Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #9 on: November 07, 2008, 06:31:31 PM »
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Shukriya Abd Ji, Pooja, Khwaish, Rajesh

Haar kar bhi jeet jaayen hum pyaar main
Ek pyara dushman nazar aaye us yaar main !!
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2008, 03:20:36 AM »
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Celmira ji!
Woh baadshaah hain, jo pyaadey they!
Un key uunchey barhey iraadey they!
Eik Lailaa thee, eik majnoo thaa,
Ishq thaa, zindagee key wa'adey they!!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2008, 01:22:01 PM »
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Kya Khoob kaha Abd Ji

Ishq ki zameen par, mahal khwaabon ke hote hain
Chahat taj hoti hai, jab dilon main raj hote hain
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«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2008, 03:05:35 AM »
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Celmira ji!
The land of love is fertile right to the core!
One sows: but it requires all, more and more!!

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