Wohi Shakhs!!!

by Talat on December 15, 2004, 01:36:54 PM
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«Reply #45 on: December 18, 2004, 01:49:06 PM »
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Raasta mujh ko dikhata hai wohi shakhs
har gham me sath nibhata hai wohi shakhs
kya rishta hai mera usse khabar nahin mujhko
dunya me sabse zyada pyaara hai wohi shakhs!!!
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«Reply #46 on: December 18, 2004, 01:51:44 PM »
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kabhi main raaste me kahi bichad jau
mujhe sahi raaste me laata hai wohi shaks
kabhi main andheri galiyon me kho jau
mujhe ujale ki rah dikhata hai wohi shaks
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«Reply #47 on: December 18, 2004, 01:56:40 PM »
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tu apni manzil-e-maqsood ko pahunche
har pal ye dua maangta hai wohi shakhs
tere andhere bhi mile use tu rahe roshni me
gham bhi paas na aaye, ye chahta hai wo shakhs!!
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«Reply #48 on: December 18, 2004, 02:38:07 PM »
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Tremendous Poetry!!! Talat ji N Samnoj ji!!!!
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«Reply #49 on: December 18, 2004, 02:38:49 PM »
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Thank You Arunji!!!  :D
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«Reply #50 on: December 18, 2004, 02:49:47 PM »
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thanx sharma
aaj aap nahi likhege
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«Reply #51 on: December 18, 2004, 06:43:15 PM »
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thanx sharma
aaj aap nahi likhege



Are Samnoj ji Aap log itna Khoobsoorat Likh rahe hain
Ki padhne mein hi Itna maza aa raha hai ki
Hum likhna hi bhool gaye hain ji!!! :D
Waise bhi Mujhe kahaan aataa hai likhna ji!!!

You and Talat ji are really writing superb!!! Aap Dono ka koi jawaab nahin!!! ji! Pls Keep it up!!!!
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«Reply #52 on: December 19, 2004, 11:46:46 AM »
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thanx sharma
aaj aap nahi likhege



Are Samnoj ji Aap log itna Khoobsoorat Likh rahe hain
Ki padhne mein hi Itna maza aa raha hai ki
Hum likhna hi bhool gaye hain ji!!! :D
Waise bhi Mujhe kahaan aataa hai likhna ji!!!

You and Talat ji are really writing superb!!! Aap Dono ka koi jawaab nahin!!! ji! Pls Keep it up!!!!
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Thank You Arunji!!  :D  :D   Par maine to aap ka hi padh ke likhna seekha hai!!!!  :oops:  aap bhi likhye na!!!!
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«Reply #53 on: December 19, 2004, 12:14:15 PM »
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Meri palkon pe khwab sajata hai ek shakhs
Un khawabo ko cheen le jata hai wohi shakhs
dil ko mere bohot  tadpata hai wo shakhs
phir aankh ke ansu bhi churata hai wohi shakhs!!!
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«Reply #54 on: December 19, 2004, 03:37:11 PM »
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excellent work.........talat.......samnoj bhai......
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«Reply #55 on: December 19, 2004, 04:33:59 PM »
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Meri palkon pe khwab sajata hai ek shakhs
Un khawabo ko cheen le jata hai wohi shakhs
dil ko mere bohot  tadpata hai wo shakhs
phir aankh ke ansu bhi churata hai wohi shakhs!!!



Waaah! Ji Waaah! Very Nice!! Talat ji!! Kya kahne!!!

Aap ki Aankhon se aansoo churaata hai jo shakhs,
Aansuon ke samandar mein doob bhi jata hai wohi shakhs!
Ghamon se bezaar ho kar aathon pahar rota hai woh shakhs,
Aansuon ki oat se aap hi ki khatir Kahkahe lagata hai wohi shakhs!
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«Reply #56 on: December 20, 2004, 06:05:00 AM »
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Meri palkon pe khwab sajata hai ek shakhs
Un khawabo ko cheen le jata hai wohi shakhs
dil ko mere bohot  tadpata hai wo shakhs
phir aankh ke ansu bhi churata hai wohi shakhs!!!



Waaah! Ji Waaah! Very Nice!! Talat ji!! Kya kahne!!!

Aap ki Aankhon se aansoo churaata hai jo shakhs,
Aansuon ke samandar mein doob bhi jata hai wohi shakhs!
Ghamon se bezaar ho kar aathon pahar rota hai woh shakhs,
Aansuon ki oat se aap hi ki khatir Kahkahe lagata hai wohi shakhs!


wow..........excellent talat.............arun bhai........... :lol:  :lol:
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«Reply #57 on: December 20, 2004, 09:20:14 AM »
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Shukriya ji Waheed bhai!!!
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«Reply #58 on: December 20, 2004, 10:06:32 AM »
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nazar us chahre pe thahre to kis trah tahre
kabhi jo phool ban jaye kabhi gulzar ho jaye
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«Reply #59 on: December 20, 2004, 02:50:23 PM »
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Thanks Waheed :-_ happy9
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