Wohi Shakhs!!!

by Talat on December 15, 2004, 01:36:54 PM
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«Reply #60 on: December 20, 2004, 02:53:04 PM »
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Waaah! Ji Waaah! Very Nice!! Talat ji!! Kya kahne!!!

Aap ki Aankhon se aansoo churaata hai jo shakhs,
Aansuon ke samandar mein doob bhi jata hai wohi shakhs!
Ghamon se bezaar ho kar aathon pahar rota hai woh shakhs,
Aansuon ki oat se aap hi ki khatir Kahkahe lagata hai wohi shakhs!


Thanks Arunji!!  :D  :D  Very Good!!!! happy9

Jab is kadar us shakhs ko hai mera khayal
Kyun mujhko door nazar aata hai wo shakhs
Kabhi lagta hai wo khud apne se barh kar
Aur kabhi ajnabi sa mujhe lagta hai wo shakhs!!!!
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«Reply #61 on: December 20, 2004, 02:53:43 PM »
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bahut khoob sharma n sheru
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«Reply #62 on: December 20, 2004, 03:01:50 PM »
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nazar us chahre pe thahre to kis trah tahre
kabhi jo phool ban jaye kabhi gulzar ho jaye


Bohot khoob sheru..good start!!!!

kaise dekhoon main uske chehre ko ae dil
kabhi shabnam lage hai kabhi angaar ho jaaye!!!
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«Reply #63 on: December 20, 2004, 03:14:12 PM »
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kais dekhu main uske chahre ko ai dil
kabhi shabnum lage kabhi gulzaar ho jaye
nazar us chahre pe thare to kis trah tahre
kabhi wo phool bane kabhi gulzaar ho jaye

ye kaisa raha do no ka mila ker likha hai
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«Reply #64 on: December 20, 2004, 03:18:16 PM »
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achcha hai!!!!!

dekhne se uski ankhain ab darne lagi hoon main
ki dil na tadap uthe aur uska talabgar ho jaaye!!!
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«Reply #65 on: December 20, 2004, 03:21:20 PM »
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bahut khoob

sunne se uski baate kuch is trah se dil pe guzri hai
ab dil uske siwa kisi ki baatein sunne ko razi hi nahi
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«Reply #66 on: December 20, 2004, 03:25:36 PM »
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thanks!! n good one!!!!

uski baatain to khwaab hain jaise
kitna dilkash hai uska har andaz
parye bhi jaanti hoon main
ki hai wo mere liye ek sarab!!!!

(sarab = miraj; dhoka!!!!)
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«Reply #67 on: December 20, 2004, 06:55:09 PM »
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shaayari zyada aati nahi.all improvements r welcomed          

arz hai...

zindagi ki raah par chal rahein hain,
jo hamein chaahe aisa saath chahiye,
chalte-chalte dagmaga na jaayein,
jo hamein thaame aisa haath chahiye  
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«Reply #68 on: December 20, 2004, 08:40:59 PM »
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Thanks Talat ji!! N Samnoj ji!!
U Have written tremendous!!!!
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«Reply #69 on: December 21, 2004, 01:07:43 PM »
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shaayari zyada aati nahi.all improvements r welcomed          

arz hai...

zindagi ki raah par chal rahein hain,
jo hamein chaahe aisa saath chahiye,
chalte-chalte dagmaga na jaayein,
jo hamein thaame aisa haath chahiye  


Nice Dolly!!!!
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«Reply #70 on: December 21, 2004, 01:08:09 PM »
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Thanks Talat ji!! N Samnoj ji!!
you Have written tremendous!!!!


Thank You Arunji!!!  :D
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«Reply #71 on: December 21, 2004, 02:49:50 PM »
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thanx sharma
n bahut ache talat n dolly
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«Reply #72 on: December 21, 2004, 02:58:05 PM »
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Thx!
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«Reply #73 on: December 21, 2004, 04:47:29 PM »
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shaayari zyada aati nahi.all improvements r welcomed          

arz hai...

zindagi ki raah par chal rahein hain,
jo hamein chaahe aisa saath chahiye,
chalte-chalte dagmaga na jaayein,
jo hamein thaame aisa haath chahiye  



Wah! Dolly ji!!!Very Nice!

Yoon hi Chalte Rahna Ummeedon ke Chiragh liye,
Na ghabraana, Na Dagmagana, Hona Thak ke choor Nahin!
Mazboot Sa Haath milega Sunder sa ek saath milega,
Mazboot Hon Hausle, Manzilein Phir Door Nahin!
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«Reply #74 on: December 21, 2004, 05:44:39 PM »
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wah all.. Usual Smile
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