Yaad aata hai

by thycreator on June 08, 2007, 03:36:40 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 03, 2007, 05:48:50 PM »
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Nikki...........

Tum aankhon se dur the mere par dil ke kareeb the,
Tumse mil na paye itne dino, mere bure naseeb the,
Ab aayen hai yahan toh fir se silsila-e-guftagu hogi,
Mita denge ye sari duriyan jo apne rakeeb the....Usual Smile


so sweet of u THY...

aaj fir se baarish ka mausam yaad kuch dilata hai
woh mera khidki se bahar dekhna
aur tera chakkar laga kar guzar jaana yaad aata hai

woh din kitne haseen the
woh raatein bhi kamaal thi

din mein khoaab dekhte the hum
aur raaton ko jaaga karte the

na khud ka hosh tha
na zamaane ki fikar
har aahat pe darvaze ki orr bhaaga karte the

aaj sab kuch waisa to nahi hai
magar dil ko intzaar rehta hai
na jaane kab woh laut ke aa jaye
dhayaan aaj bhi khidki ke bahar rehta hai
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«Reply #31 on: July 04, 2007, 04:28:42 PM »
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very nice lines,,,,,,gud reply.

yun na dil ka haal bayaan karo tum,
ye palke yun jhuk si jaati hain,
yun na nazaro se sharaarat karo tum,
humko sharm si aa jaati hai.

is chandni raat mein,
ye lab khamosh rahen,
bas dedaar kare hum ek dooje ka,
ek dooje mein simte rahen.

****************************** jiya ....


Wah wah..........sahi hai..........Winking

Ye kya keh diya tumne, dil dhadak gaya mera,
Kabhi socha na wo khayal dil mein samane lage,
Tumhe hum jaan bhi na paaye ab talak phir bhi,
Tum kyu mere dil ke itne kareeb aane lage....tongue3


ahaaaa, amit ji kya baat hai ,,,, bohot khubsurat javab diya hai aapne. Usual Smile


dil se kaho apne ki na dhadke itna zor se,
kyunki ab wo aashiyaana humaara hai,
na jaahir karo tum apne khayaalo ko aise,
kyunki is dil mein aane waala har khayaal ab humaara hai.

tumhe jarurat hi nahin jaan-ne ki humko,
ye silsila to aankho se shuru hota hai,
dil mein samaane lagta hai koi chuke se,
aur phir ye dil apna chain khota hai.

kareeb to the hi hum tumhaare,
bas dil ke kareeb nahin the,
keh dena tha pehele hi jo ab kaha,
kya pehele ye pyaar ke mausan nahin the.

************************************* jiya ....
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«Reply #32 on: July 04, 2007, 05:19:47 PM »
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so sweet of u THY...

aaj fir se baarish ka mausam yaad kuch dilata hai
woh mera khidki se bahar dekhna
aur tera chakkar laga kar guzar jaana yaad aata hai

woh din kitne haseen the
woh raatein bhi kamaal thi

din mein khoaab dekhte the hum
aur raaton ko jaaga karte the

na khud ka hosh tha
na zamaane ki fikar
har aahat pe darvaze ki orr bhaaga karte the

aaj sab kuch waisa to nahi hai
magar dil ko intzaar rehta hai
na jaane kab woh laut ke aa jaye
dhayaan aaj bhi khidki ke bahar rehta hai


Wah wah.....kya bat hai nikki ji..........

Kiska hai ye khayal mera ye man mehka hai,
Uski ek bat se hi jaane kyu ye dil behka hai,
Koi batalaye hame ki ye pyar toh nahi hai,
Wo samne nahi hai, phir bhi ye tan dehka hai...
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«Reply #33 on: July 04, 2007, 05:26:07 PM »
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ahaaaa, amit ji kya baat hai ,,,, bohot khubsurat javab diya hai aapne. Usual Smile


dil se kaho apne ki na dhadke itna zor se,
kyunki ab wo aashiyaana humaara hai,
na jaahir karo tum apne khayaalo ko aise,
kyunki is dil mein aane waala har khayaal ab humaara hai.

tumhe jarurat hi nahin jaan-ne ki humko,
ye silsila to aankho se shuru hota hai,
dil mein samaane lagta hai koi chuke se,
aur phir ye dil apna chain khota hai.

kareeb to the hi hum tumhaare,
bas dil ke kareeb nahin the,
keh dena tha pehele hi jo ab kaha,
kya pehele ye pyaar ke mausan nahin the.

************************************* jiya ....


wah wah..........clean bowled ho gaya main toh...........tongue3

Keh bhi dete dil ki bat hum, inkaar se dar lagta tha,
Jubaan khamosh reh gayi, apni har se dar lagta tha,
Teri bholi si baton ki kashish mein jee rahe the hum,
Pyar juda na kar de tujhse, aise iqraar se dar lagta tha......Winking
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«Reply #34 on: July 05, 2007, 05:20:57 AM »
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Nice post one by one the....
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«Reply #35 on: July 07, 2007, 04:18:57 PM »
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ahaaaa, amit ji kya baat hai ,,,, bohot khubsurat javab diya hai aapne. Usual Smile


dil se kaho apne ki na dhadke itna zor se,
kyunki ab wo aashiyaana humaara hai,
na jaahir karo tum apne khayaalo ko aise,
kyunki is dil mein aane waala har khayaal ab humaara hai.

tumhe jarurat hi nahin jaan-ne ki humko,
ye silsila to aankho se shuru hota hai,
dil mein samaane lagta hai koi chuke se,
aur phir ye dil apna chain khota hai.

kareeb to the hi hum tumhaare,
bas dil ke kareeb nahin the,
keh dena tha pehele hi jo ab kaha,
kya pehele ye pyaar ke mausan nahin the.

************************************* jiya ....


wah wah..........clean bowled ho gaya main toh...........tongue3

Keh bhi dete dil ki bat hum, inkaar se dar lagta tha,
Jubaan khamosh reh gayi, apni har se dar lagta tha,
Teri bholi si baton ki kashish mein jee rahe the hum,
Pyar juda na kar de tujhse, aise iqraar se dar lagta tha......Winking



wah!!!! Amit ji bohot khub likha hai aapne,,,,,,, kaafi achha likhte hain aap.

mohabbat ka zasba rakhte ho agar, to inkaar se kya darna,
har haar ke baad jeet hoti hai,to phir haar se kya darna,
kashish baaton mein nahin aankho mein hoti hai sanam ki,
to ishq mein nazaron ke vaar se kya darna.

har din milte hain kai dil, bichhadte hain kai dil,
aise mein uski judaai se kya darna,
mohabbat to juda hone par hi parvaan chadti hai,
to mohabbat mein aisi judaai se kya darna.

jua hai ye to mohabbat ka,haar lo ya jeet lo ise,
ise kailne se kya darna,
pakka, haar ke bhi jeetoge is baazi ko,
to iqraar-e-mohabbat se kya darna.


******************************jiya ....
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«Reply #36 on: July 13, 2007, 10:08:28 PM »
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wah wah....jiya......irade kya hain apke...Winking
Sorry for late reply....was undergoing a transition phase in life......

Kya bat hai tum mein jo dil machal jata hai,
Kuch kehte nahi aur dil ko pata chal jata hai,
Ye dur se tadpane ka chalan kyu hua bhala,
Pas aao toh dil ka mausam hi badal jata hai..
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«Reply #37 on: July 16, 2007, 09:48:17 AM »
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wah wah....jiya......irade kya hain apke...Winking
Sorry for late reply....was undergoing a transition phase in life......

Kya bat hai tum mein jo dil machal jata hai,
Kuch kehte nahi aur dil ko pata chal jata hai,
Ye dur se tadpane ka chalan kyu hua bhala,
Pas aao toh dil ka mausam hi badal jata hai..


hi Amit ji, thanks once again,,,,,, nd by-thye-way,,,, u r also a very gud writer,,,,, aap bhi bohot  khubsurt shabdo ka use karte hain ,,,,, bohot hi achha likha hai aapne,,, nice.


machalta to tumhaara dil hai,
aur poochhte aap humse ho,
humko kya pata ki kya baat hai hum-mein,
aur dhundne ko humse kehete ho.

sab jaante huye humaara haale dil,
aise kyun anjaan bane rehete ho,
tadpaate khud ho hume tum yun sitam kar ke,
aur hume sitamgar ka khitaab dete ho.

ye mausam to kab ka badal diya humne,zara dekho na,
tum to bas humaari aankhon mein hi khoye rehete ho,
tumko to thaam hi humne rakhaa hai baahon mein apni,
aur tum aur paas aane ki baat karte ho.

************************************* jiya ....
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«Reply #38 on: July 17, 2007, 12:23:24 AM »
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Wah wah......lagta hai jaan lekar hi chodogi aap.....Usual Smile

Such keh rahe ho tum ki hum deewane ho gaye,
Tum shama bano bhale na, hum parwane ho gaye,
Mar bhi jate gar keh dete ek bar ye bat labon se,
Ab toh jinda hi humari ulfat ke afsaane ho gaye......Winking
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«Reply #39 on: July 17, 2007, 05:22:50 AM »
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Fantastic Amit...Jiya....!!!!

Teri Subehon me likhi Dhoop bana le mujhko......
Yaad aati hai teri kuch iss kadar Sanam......

Ke apni Yaadon me hee basa le mujhko......

Khuda gawah hai kabhi teri hansta yeh chehra dekha nahi kisi ne......
Apne Hotoan ki Muskurahat or Dil ka chain bana le mujhko......

Doori tujhse aur sahi nahi jaati ab humse Sanam.......
Ke apni Yaadon me hee basa le mujhko........!!!!!!!
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«Reply #40 on: July 21, 2007, 10:33:50 AM »
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Wah wah......lagta hai jaan lekar hi chodogi aap.....Usual Smile

Such keh rahe ho tum ki hum deewane ho gaye,
Tum shama bano bhale na, hum parwane ho gaye,
Mar bhi jate gar keh dete ek bar ye bat labon se,
Ab toh jinda hi humari ulfat ke afsaane ho gaye......Winking


kya baat hai Amit ji ,,, bohot hi khubsurat javaab diya hai aapne.


aapki jaan to azeez hai hume khud se bhi jyaada,
bhala hum kyun aapki jaan lene lage,
saara kasoor in kaatil nigaaho ka hai humaari janaab,
par aap to hume hi kaatil karaar dene lage.

waise in kaatil nigaahon ke waar se,
koi laakh chahe par koi bach na saka,
parawaane aur deewaane kai aye gaye,
par dil ki baat koi humse keh na saka.

hum kaise apni jaan ko apne se juda kar sakte hain,
jiski ek jhalak ke liye hum din-raat tadapaa karte hain,
har waqt aapki yaad mein in aankho se ashkh bahaate hain,
hume mohabbat hai aapse, aur zindagi aapke saath guzaarna chahte hain.


**************************************** jiya....
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«Reply #41 on: July 21, 2007, 10:54:59 AM »
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Fantastic Amit...Jiya....!!!!

Teri Subehon me likhi Dhoop bana le mujhko......
Yaad aati hai teri kuch iss kadar Sanam......

Ke apni Yaadon me hee basa le mujhko......

Khuda gawah hai kabhi teri hansta yeh chehra dekha nahi kisi ne......
Apne Hotoan ki Muskurahat or Dil ka chain bana le mujhko......

Doori tujhse aur sahi nahi jaati ab humse Sanam.......
Ke apni Yaadon me hee basa le mujhko........!!!!!!!



Wah!!!!!! Gaurav ji very nice lines,,,, Usual Smile nd thanks..


yaado mein meri sirf tum ho,
aur is dil mein ho tum hi tum,
palke mundun to tum dikhte ho,
kholu palke to dikhte ho tum hi tum.

tum meri har saans mein ho,
har yaad mein meri ehesaas tumhaara hai,
khoyi reheti hun bas tumhi mein ab to,
is dil mein aashiyaana tumhaara hai.


******************************* jiya ....
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«Reply #42 on: July 23, 2007, 02:44:46 PM »
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good jiya jee..........!!!

mere khyalo ke aaine mein tum the
sahar ki har roshni ka ehsaas tum the
yaad aate hai wo manjar
mere har kadam k saath tumhare kadam the
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