Yaad

by transit42 on October 26, 2009, 10:50:18 PM
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A frind of mine sent me a few lines which ended with BUS TERI YAADON MAIN JIYE JA RAJA HOON...I think I did not like the whole idea....here are four lines in response to that..
PATHJHAD MAIN PHOOL KHILTA HAI KYA
BAARISH MAIN LOHA PIGHALTA HAI KYA
PASCHIM SE SURAJ NIKALTA HAI KYA
YUN YADON MAIN JEENE SE MILTA HAI KYA?
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2009, 01:57:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob Transit ji,beautiful creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2009, 02:15:17 AM »
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A frind of mine sent me a few lines which ended with BUS TERI YAADON MAIN JIYE JA RAJA HOON...I think I did not like the whole idea....here are four lines in response to that..
PATHJHAD MAIN PHOOL KHILTA HAI KYA
BAARISH MAIN LOHA PIGHALTA HAI KYA
PASCHIM SE SURAJ NIKALTA HAI KYA
YUN YADON MAIN JEENE SE MILTA HAI KYA?


Wah Transit bahut sahi jawab mein likha hai aapne.  Applause Applause
Bahut hi accha laga padkar.


Yaadon mein jeeta yahan koyi nahi
Kehne ko toh kehte hai teri yaad seene se laga rakha hai
Magar, Din beete Aisa koyi rehta nahi
Tha umr saat dene ka wada ek taraf
Kuch din me hi wada bhul jaate, nibata koyi nahi
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2009, 02:30:48 PM »
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Nice Creation Applause Applause Applause Applause
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