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«Reply #45 on: October 01, 2004, 10:52:06 AM » |
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Jo aag lagaai thi tum ne us ko to bujhaaya ashkon ne
Jo ashkon ne bharhkaai hai us aag ko thanda kaun kare
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«Reply #46 on: October 04, 2004, 05:46:11 AM » |
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Very Nice...Talat
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«Reply #47 on: October 04, 2004, 05:50:53 AM » |
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Jo aag lagaai thi tum ne us ko to bujhaaya ashkon ne
Jo ashkon ne bharhkaai hai us aag ko thanda kaun kare jo baat dabi thi is dil me usko to bataya nigahon ne ab nazaren bhi dhoka de baithe ab kispe bahrosa kaun kare |
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«Reply #48 on: October 04, 2004, 07:27:10 AM » |
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good both
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«Reply #49 on: October 04, 2004, 09:06:34 AM » |
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jo baat dabi thi is dil me usko to bataya nigahon ne
ab nazaren bhi dhoka de baithe ab kispe bahrosa kaun kare
Thanks Raman & Nishita.. Nazar main dhal ke ubharte hain dil ke afasane Ye aur baat hai duniya nazar na pehchane |
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«Reply #50 on: October 05, 2004, 06:06:03 AM » |
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minnaten lakh maine ki nazar se unke nazar kee
sunenge wo meree fariyad ab wo to kab jaane
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«Reply #51 on: October 05, 2004, 06:58:40 AM » |
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nazar mila na sake us se us nigaah ke baad
wahi hai haal humara jo ho gunaah ke baad
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«Reply #52 on: October 06, 2004, 01:41:11 PM » |
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #53 on: October 06, 2004, 01:47:45 PM » |
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Thanks "Mateen"
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«Reply #54 on: October 07, 2004, 03:34:51 AM » |
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bahut khoob All
yeh likhna to ek bahana hai
irada to apka ek lamha churana hai.
aap chahe humse baat karo ya na karo phir bhi
aapki yaadon main humara aana jana hai.
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«Reply #55 on: October 07, 2004, 05:22:22 AM » |
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nice...........mateen..................talat..... ...diljale...............
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«Reply #56 on: October 07, 2004, 05:27:45 AM » |
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Justujoo Jis Ki Thi Us Ko To Na Paaya Hum Ne
Iss Bahaane Se Magar Dekh Li Duniya Hum Ne
Tujh Ko Ruswaa Na Kiya,Khud Bhi Pashemaan Na Huwe
Ishq Ki Rasm Ko Istarha Nibhaaya Hum Ne
Kab Milli Thi Kahaan Bichri Thi,Humain Yaad Nahin
Zindagi Tujhko To Bass Khwaab Main Dekha Hum Ne
Aye Dost Aur Sunaiyain Bhi To Kia Haal Apna
Umer Ka Lambaa Safar Tai Kia Tanha Humne..................
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«Reply #57 on: October 07, 2004, 06:35:43 AM » |
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Nice Diljala ..Waheed i would like to correct your ghazal..
aap ka last sher ghalat hai...sahi ye hai:
ai 'Ada' aur sunaaye bhii to kyaa haal apanaa
umr kaa lambaa safar tay kiyaa tanhaa ham ne
ye ghazal 'Shahryar' ki hai jo film 'Umraojaan' main bhi gaayi gayi thi...
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«Reply #58 on: October 07, 2004, 06:56:19 AM » |
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yaad nahin kya kya dekha tha saare manzar bhool gaye
us ki galiyon se jab laute apna bhi ghar bhool gaye
tujh ko bhi jab apni qasmain apne waade yaad nahin
hum bhi apne khwaab teri aankhon main rakh kar bhool gaye!! (NM)
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«Reply #59 on: October 07, 2004, 09:57:25 AM » |
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Great one"
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tasavvur mein teri tasveer liye baithe hai
yadon ko teri hum dil mein liye baithe hai
sab kuch hai hamare paas sirf tu hi nahi
mere"sanam" isliye hum udaas baithe hai
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Good one.. Yasir..
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