Yaar ki batein....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on May 25, 2010, 08:26:35 PM
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Kaise kare bayaa.N hum, yaar ki batein
Hai mehboob se mansoob, beshumar si batein

Kabhi zakhm hai koi, kabhi marham hai woh mera
Kabhi dard ki, to hai kabhi qarar ki batein

Kabhi khoobiyaa.N ginaye, kabhi badnamiyaa.N woh meri
Kabhi karam kare humpar, kabhi takraar ki batein

Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein

Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar ki batein

Na Ghayel ko sikhao, sabak aashiqui ka koi
Nibhayee hai zamane me, usi ne pyaar ki batein

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: May 25, 2010, 09:04:37 PM »
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Wah wah Ghayel ji bahut baddiya likha aapne,mindblowing creation.excellent,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 01:20:02 AM »
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   Waah waah Sajid ji hamesha ki tarah behatareen hi likha hai, Aapke baaki kalamo se kuch alag likha hai ye aapne,accha laga padh kar.Dhero daad aapko.  Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2010, 05:19:56 AM »
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As salamu alaikum
Hmm sajid bhai  bohat kuch sikhne ko mile ga Aapse
 notworthy dil ko lagi batien
shukriya  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: May 26, 2010, 02:58:50 PM »
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Wah Bhai Sajid Saheb kya kahene ,, Hazaro Dad Hazir hain Qubool Karen ,, Taqir ke liye Mazrath Khaw hon .. Allah apko khush rakhe..

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«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2010, 01:23:50 AM »
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ISHQ KI BAATEN KAREN YA HAAL E DIL BAYAAN KARE
JAB ROOBARU TUM ILM NAHI KYA MERI ZUBAAN KARE
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«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 01:27:36 AM »
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 SAJID JI BEHAD DILKASH ANDAZ HI AAP KA .
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 27, 2010, 10:13:14 AM »
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  andaaz mukhtaleef hai sabkey bayaan kaa ghayel,
  kartey hain sabhi magar 'oosi' pyaar ki baatein........! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2010, 09:16:44 PM »
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bahot khoob janaab sajid bhai..khass kar yeh  ashaar ,kya kehne ,.wah .umda

Sar ko jhukaye hum, tasleem karte hai
Kuch is kadar hai meethi, sarkaar ki batein

Unke nashe me hardam, hosh hi na aaya
Hum jante nahi hai, khumaar ki batein
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2010, 10:00:51 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 25, 2010, 09:04:37 PM
Wah wah Ghayel ji bahut baddiya likha aapne,mindblowing creation.excellent,bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Madhu for your never ending support.
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2010, 10:31:20 PM »
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nice bro.
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2010, 04:39:10 AM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on May 26, 2010, 01:20:02 AM

   Waah waah Sajid ji hamesha ki tarah behatareen hi likha hai, Aapke baaki kalamo se kuch alag likha hai ye aapne,accha laga padh kar.Dhero daad aapko.  Applause Applause

Jee badi meharbani Tamanna jee jo aapne apna waqt diya, aur sahi mehsoos kiya aapne ke mere baki kalamo se alag hai yeh peshkash.........itna romantic main kabhi nahi likhta main anadi kya janu mohabbat ki batein bayaa.N karna.
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«Reply #12 on: October 25, 2010, 04:48:24 AM »
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waahhhhh sajid ji waahhhhhh mastam romantic post wo bhi aapka ek aur alag andaaz ..too gud ji..lijiye hum majbur ho gaye padhke kuch likhne ko...dekhiye kaisa lagta hai aapko....

Pyaar se saji hai manuhaar ki baatein
Kaise Karen hum bayaan tere pyaar ki baatein

Dard me dubi kabhi shokh rang me saji
Bht hi lubhaati hain hume tere pyaar ki baatein

Sheron me sajkar aur bhi nikharti hai
Chahe hon bojhal kabhi tere pyaar ki baatein

Ghane andhere me bhi ujaale ki kiran si hain
Nai roshni bikherti hain tere pyaar ki batein

Kasak uthti hai mithi si  mere dil me reh reh kar
Jab bhi tu karta hai mujhse tere pyaar ki baatein…!!!
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«Reply #13 on: October 27, 2010, 08:32:26 AM »
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Janab Sajid Sahab... Aapki Is Khubsoorat aur Dilkash Peshkash Ke liye Dil Se daad haazir Hai.. kubool Farmaaiyega..!! Applause Applause

Anamika ji aapne bhi Bahut Khoooob Likha hai.. Applause



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«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2010, 08:37:46 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi Ache Anuji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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