Yado.N ka karwan..

by nashwani on June 13, 2013, 11:16:55 PM
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Do pal saath chal ek fasana de do
Zindagi jeene ka ek bahana de do..

Dard-e-dil ka tohfa de kar hi sahi
Ek muskurahat ka nazrana de do..

Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me ab thikana de do..

Aadha hai abhi sath ka vaada yaara
Vaade se vaade ka jud jana de do..

Kyun khwabo.N me jagte ho tum
Khuli ankho.N me ab afsana de do..

Yado.N ka karwan thama hai do pal
Ise apna ithlana, balkhana de do..
Nazre jhukhana, sharmana de do..
Iss karwan ko ek zamana de do..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2013, 11:23:31 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Umda........ khaas yeh do para
"Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me thikana de do..

Kyun khwabo.N me jagte ho tum
Khuli ankho.N me ab afsana de do.."

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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2013, 11:37:43 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2013, 12:51:00 AM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Nashwaani ji

Bahut umdaa.Really nice.
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2013, 01:15:22 AM »
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Do pal saath chal ek fasana de do
Zindagi jeene ka ek bahana de do..
                                   ... Wah, Wah janb !
                                       
Dard-e-dil ka tohfa de kar hi sahi
Ek muskurahat ka nazrana de do..
                                  . . . Mesmerizing Couplet .
               
Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me thikana de do..
                                     . . .  Excellent Poetic Xpression !
 
                                                       
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«Reply #5 on: June 14, 2013, 03:57:11 AM »
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Do pal saath chal ek fasana de do
Zindagi jeene ka ek bahana de do..

Dard-e-dil ka tohfa de kar hi sahi
Ek muskurahat ka nazrana de do..

Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me ab thikana de do..

Aadha hai abhi sath ka vaada yaara
Vaade se vaade ka jud jana de do..

Kyun khwabo.N me jagte ho tum
Khuli ankho.N me ab afsana de do..

Yado.N ka karwan thama hai do pal
Ise apna ithlana, balkhana de do..
Nazre jhukhana, sharmana de do..
Iss karwan ko ek zamana de do..!!! Ñ


sab kuch le lo ge to phir mere paas kya rah jaaye ga Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard....!  bahut bahut khoob.....!
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2013, 12:17:34 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2013, 12:25:28 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2013, 07:24:38 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut bahut khoob ji. badi achchi kalaam rahi.dili daad qubool kare.
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2013, 08:59:52 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Umda........ khaas yeh do para
"Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me thikana de do..

Kyun khwabo.N me jagte ho tum
Khuli ankho.N me ab afsana de do.."

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Thanks a ton bhupinder jee..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: June 14, 2013, 09:00:37 PM »
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Thank u saxena jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 14, 2013, 09:01:31 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Wah Nashwaani ji

Bahut umdaa.Really nice.

Tahe dil se shukriya sudhir jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 14, 2013, 09:02:30 PM »
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Do pal saath chal ek fasana de do
Zindagi jeene ka ek bahana de do..
                                   ... Wah, Wah janb !
                                       
Dard-e-dil ka tohfa de kar hi sahi
Ek muskurahat ka nazrana de do..
                                  . . . Mesmerizing Couplet .
               
Dil me ehsaso.N ka bojh bahut hai
Inhe apne dil me thikana de do..
                                     . . .  Excellent Poetic Xpression !
 
                                                       

Thank u very much arghya jee 4 ur valuable comments..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: June 14, 2013, 09:03:15 PM »
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sab kuch le lo ge to phir mere paas kya rah jaaye ga Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard....!  bahut bahut khoob.....!

Sheba jee bahut bahut shukriya..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: June 14, 2013, 09:04:16 PM »
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Applause Applause

Hausla afzai ke liye dhanyawaad hasan jee..happy9
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