Yakeen Hai Mujhko!!! (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on September 24, 2008, 08:36:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: September 24, 2008, 06:54:00 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Mahiya..Beautiful as always Applause  Applause Applause

Your poem has reminded me of song from
film 36 China Town

Jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
Jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
Jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa
Jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
Jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
Jab kabhi meri mushkil ho dagar tum sang chaloge naa
Jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa

Jab kabhi de aawaz dil tum sun loge naa
Jab kabhi toote khwaab toh tum bun loge naa
Jab kabhi mujhse ho khata mujhe baksh doge naa
Jab kabhi meri nam ho nazar mujhe pyar doge naa

Jab kabhi hum na aye sanam tum bula loge naa
Jab kabhi mere aansu bahen unhe poch loge naa
Jab kabhi umr dhal jaayegi mujhe yun hi chahoge naa
Lo kasam kuchh bhi ho sanam tum durr jaaoge naa


Lovely contributions Sanjeev, Saurabh and Abd Ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #16 on: September 24, 2008, 08:10:02 PM »
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GOOD WORK
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«Reply #17 on: September 24, 2008, 08:11:08 PM »
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good sharing talat
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«Reply #18 on: September 24, 2008, 10:38:33 PM »
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Bohat hi khoob Shikha..
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«Reply #19 on: September 25, 2008, 01:55:20 AM »
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Its very very very gooooood Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: September 25, 2008, 01:58:49 AM »
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Bohat khub mahiya  Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: October 01, 2008, 11:37:32 AM »
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Wonderful Shikha... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: October 01, 2008, 01:17:19 PM »
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Dosto!
EId ka din hai, gulaaboun sey khiley hain cheyhrey;
Zaraa-see laalee shafaq ki usey laa dogey na:
Jis key cheyhrey pai aaj bhi hai gamoun ki zardee;
Jis key beytey ko, kiyaa hai supurd-e-khak abhi;
Jis key beytey ney kiyaa thaa koyi gunaah naheen;
Jis ko mazhab key naam par kiyaa gayaa hai qatl;
EId key waasitey saamaan gayaa thaa leyney:
Raastey mein milaa thaa jis ko mout kaa saamaan,
Chhorh kar bhaag gaye they jisey shaitaan wahaan,
Bheerh rahtee thee jahaan roz beygunaahoun ki,
Koyi khidmat mein thaa maa ki, to koyi bahinoun ki,
Koyi bachchoun key liye ley rahaa thaa gubbaarey!!
Aaiye, un ki EID mein bhi, kareyn ham shirkat!
Marham-e-ashk-e-jigar, chaarahgar, laa dogey na?
                                 - abd bundeli


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«Reply #23 on: October 01, 2008, 01:57:37 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on September 24, 2008, 08:36:42 AM


Wah wah Mahi... Superb.... Applause   Applause   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #24 on: October 01, 2008, 02:15:54 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Saurabh, HoneyRose, Abd ji, Anjaan ji, Sanya, Celmira, Hashimoto, Aryaan, Khushi4Pari, Jagdish and Roja...   notworthy  notworthy  notworthy
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«Reply #25 on: October 01, 2008, 02:19:31 PM »
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mujhe to itna colourful shukriya kabhi nahi kaha aapne?Huh?
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«Reply #26 on: October 01, 2008, 02:25:02 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on September 24, 2008, 10:08:33 AM
ek baar fir bahoot khoob

ghatyen jo ghere kabhi, chand ko to,
zulfon ko chehre se, hata loge na,
gar jo me roothun bina baat ke to,
mujhe tum fir se, mana loge na

Waah waah... Bahut Khoob Sanjeev ji... Applause

Quote from: bekarar on October 01, 2008, 02:19:31 PM
mujhe to itna colourful shukriya kabhi nahi kaha aapne?Huh?

Happy Now.... NaNaNa  Usual Smile

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«Reply #27 on: October 01, 2008, 02:27:20 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on September 24, 2008, 10:38:35 AM
Bahut hi khoobsoorat Mahiya ji.... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Daaman mera bheega sirf mere ansuon se nahi hai,
Daastaan teri wafa ki mera dil bhi sun raha tha.

Beautiful One... Saurabh..   Thumbs UP
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«Reply #28 on: October 01, 2008, 02:28:18 PM »
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je baat hui na......bekarar khush hua  Laughing hard Laughing hard
Quote from: Mahiya on October 01, 2008, 02:25:02 PM
Waah waah... Bahut Khoob Sanjeev ji... Applause

Happy Now.... NaNaNa  Usual Smile


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«Reply #29 on: October 01, 2008, 02:31:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on September 24, 2008, 12:10:37 PM
Mahiya/Shikha ji!  Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
 Tah-e-dil sey niklee aawaaz, tah-e-dil tak pahunchtee bhi hai! Mubaarak ho! Ijaazat chaahtey huye, arz hai:

Eik jhonka, khizaan ko chaahiye bahaaroun kaa:
Aakhri dour pai manzil key, bulaa dogey naa!!
Nisf shab mein bhi neend, gar, naheen aayee ham ko;
Thapkiyaan dey key dharhkanoun keen, sulaa dogey naa!!
                                - abd bundeli

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 24, 2008, 02:34:24 PM
hello anjaan dharkan ji,
Sunee hai, yoon to, andaleeb ki sadaa ham ney!
Aur, deykhaa hai, shabo-o-roz, maykadaa ham ney!
Yeh sadaa doosaree hai, aayee hai tah-e-jaw sey:
Baad-e-magrib ko kiyaa shukriah adaa ham ney!
                             - abd bundeli

Quote from: abdbundeli on October 01, 2008, 01:17:19 PM
Dosto!
EId ka din hai, gulaaboun sey khiley hain cheyhrey;
Zaraa-see laalee shafaq ki usey laa dogey na:
Jis key cheyhrey pai aaj bhi hai gamoun ki zardee;
Jis key beytey ko, kiyaa hai supurd-e-khak abhi;
Jis key beytey ney kiyaa thaa koyi gunaah naheen;
Jis ko mazhab key naam par kiyaa gayaa hai qatl;
EId key waasitey saamaan gayaa thaa leyney:
Raastey mein milaa thaa jis ko mout kaa saamaan,
Chhorh kar bhaag gaye they jisey shaitaan wahaan,
Bheerh rahtee thee jahaan roz beygunaahoun ki,
Koyi khidmat mein thaa maa ki, to koyi bahinoun ki,
Koyi bachchoun key liye ley rahaa thaa gubbaarey!!
Aaiye, un ki EID mein bhi, kareyn ham shirqat!
Marham-e-ashk-jigar chaarahgar laa dogey na?
                                 - abd bundeli





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I feel so honored to get a reply by you on my post... and that too.. such a lovely reply.

Bahut achha likha hai aapne... Abd Ji..   Applause  Applause
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