Ye Dil..

by nashwani on June 12, 2013, 02:51:31 PM
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Ye dil parwane sa uda karta hai,,
Jalti shama pe ye mara karta hai..

Jawan-e-sarhad sa lagta hai ab ye,,
Goliyo.N se bhi na dara karta hai..

Dhadkta hai ye mere seene me,,
Aur uski aahat se tez hua karta hai..

Kitna samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai..

Iss dil ki khata maaf karu.N to kaise,,
Rooh ko meri jism se alag ye kiya karta hai..

Jeene ka sahara kya banega mera ye,,
Kambakht gham yahi to diya karta hai..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2013, 03:23:41 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Nashwani ji yeh para bahut khoob hai
"na samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai.."
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2013, 04:30:28 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on June 12, 2013, 02:51:31 PM
Ye dil parwane sa uda karta hai,,
Jalti shama pe ye mara karta hai..

Jawan-e-sarhad sa lagta hai ab ye,,
Goliyo.N se bhi na dara karta hai..

Dhadkta hai ye mere seene me,,
Aur uski aahat se tez hua karta hai..

Kitna samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai..

Iss dil ki khata maaf karu.N to kaise,,
Rooh ko meri jism se alag ye kiya karta hai..

Jeene ka sahara kya banega mera ye,,
Kambakht gham yahi to diya karta hai..!!! Ñ
WAAH WAAH NASHWANI JI BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI ,
ZABARDAST PESHKASH..
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2013, 05:02:12 PM »
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bohat khoob,.............
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2013, 06:53:50 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2013, 07:10:33 PM »
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waah waah. bahut khoob likhe ho aap. dheron daad.

Kitna samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai..
yeh sher kaafi achcha laga.  Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2013, 07:50:04 PM »
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Nice1
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2013, 12:15:39 AM »
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 Jawan-e-sarhad sa lagta hai ab ye,,
 Goliyo.N se bhi na dara karta hai..

     
                   . . .Wahtareen aur Naya andaz hain yeh  Hats off to you!

 Kitna samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
 Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai..

                                                                                                       . . . Bahaut achha khyal hain    Applause  Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2013, 12:39:40 AM »
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Bahut bahutbkibkhoob ji
wahvwah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2013, 01:28:35 PM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on June 12, 2013, 03:23:41 PM
WaaH WaaH Nashwani ji yeh para bahut khoob hai
"na samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai.."
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot bhupinder jee..happy9
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2013, 01:29:29 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on June 12, 2013, 04:30:28 PM
WAAH WAAH NASHWANI JI BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI ,
ZABARDAST PESHKASH..
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

Tahe dil se shukriya sahal jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2013, 01:30:01 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 12, 2013, 05:02:12 PM
bohat khoob,.............

Thanks laaiba jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2013, 01:30:39 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 12, 2013, 06:53:50 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thank u sirjee..happy9
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«Reply #13 on: June 13, 2013, 01:31:23 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on June 12, 2013, 07:10:33 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah. bahut khoob likhe ho aap. dheron daad.

Kitna samjhaya ki ab jawa.N hai tu,,
Phir bhi bachkani harkate.N kiya karta hai..
yeh sher kaafi achcha laga.  Applause Applause

Thank u very much aqsh jee..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: June 13, 2013, 01:31:59 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 12, 2013, 07:50:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Nice1

Thanks ravi jee..happy9
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