YE KAH RAHE HAIN CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL

by haan on October 11, 2010, 07:12:48 PM
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ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE YUN DEEWANAWAR AAE ! EK FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE !! YE KAH RAHE HAIN CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU  UN PAR BAHAAR AAE !! KISKE INTEZAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !KOI TO KISHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE !! KABHI DEKHUN USE JO EK NAZAR  "TANHAA"! DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR AAE !!  
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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2010, 07:49:08 PM »
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Quote from: haan on October 11, 2010, 07:12:48 PM
ABB KE TERE SHAHER SE YUN DEEWANAWAR AAE ! EK FAQAT DIL THA APNA WO BHI HAAR AAE !! YE KAH RAHE HAIN CHAMAN KE SUKHE HUE PHOOL !DEKHE JO EK NAZAR TU  UN PAR BAHAAR AAE !! KISKE INTEZAR ME HAIN DARIYA PE NIGAHEN !KOI TO KISHTI GUZRE KOI TO PAAR AAE !! KABHI DEKHUN USE JO EK NAZAR  "TANHAA"! DIL E BEQARAAR KO KUCHH TO QARAAR AAE !!  
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 04:21:58 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 05:51:17 PM »
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shukriya muzammil bhai
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 06:03:25 PM »
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EK LAMHA THAER KAR WO WAPAS CHALA GAYA !GHAR MAHEKTA HAI ABB TAKK GULABON KI TARHAN !!EK UMMEED JO TUTI MILI UMMEED NAI !PANI ME BANTE HUE HUBAABON KI TARHAN !!YE UMAR GUZRI INTEZAR ME JISKE ! WO SHAQS MILA MUJHKO KHWABON KI TARHAN!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 06:08:19 PM »
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good work Haan sb likhte rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2010, 06:22:15 PM »
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YASMEEN JI ADAB ,MAIN REHAN BAREILLY SE AAP KI ZARRA NAWAZI KA SHUKRIYA ADA KARTA HOON .REHAN MUBARAK "TANHAA' .
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2013, 04:01:48 PM »
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1.  kis kis n kis kis ko kiss kiya,tumhi wo shaks ho jisne har kiss ko miss kiya har miss ko kiss kiya.
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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2013, 11:36:05 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai janab, lekin agar ashaar distinct hote to parhne mein zyada lutf aata.
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«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2013, 11:44:40 PM »
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Siddiqui sahab ne sahi advise di hai Haan sahab .. shaar distinct rakhen padhne me aasaani hoti hai..

bahut achhe ashaar hain badhaai
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