"ye kaisa nafa kar baithay"

by aaina on April 18, 2009, 10:48:52 AM
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apne haatho hi muqaddar ko fana kar baithay
hum jise chahte thay usii ko khafa kar baithay

baat ye aaj ki nahi ek umar ka pachtawa hai
jab usne kaha haan, tab hum mana kar baithay

socha to ye tha ke bewafa sirf wo hi nhi ho skta
jaane kiya yaad, aur phir se wafa kar baithay

ye kaisi sitamzareefi dikhaaii hai mere saath
mere hi zakhm, aur muskurane ki dua kar baithay

wo to ab bhi reshmi nashtar chubhota jaata hai
jabke baqaya karz hum kabke ada kar baithay

khud hi chod diya apna watan chand sikko ke liyn
koi poochay to zara, aslam ye kaisa nafa kar baithay
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«Reply #1 on: April 18, 2009, 11:21:06 AM »
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 iss mohabbat main   nafaa kyaa nuksaan kyaa

 jitey to saari duniya, warnaa wajood kyaa jaan kyaa.

  waah bhai bahaut khoob..


   K_A
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«Reply #2 on: April 18, 2009, 01:13:24 PM »
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aainaji achha likha hai aapne..... Applause Applause Applause

Khud apne paav pe kulhadi maar baithee
Ay aaina ye tum pyaar main kya kar baithee
Karna tha ikraar per inkaar kar baithee
Kismat k saath ye kaisa khel kar baithee

apne haatho hi muqaddar ko fana kar baithay
hum jise chahte thay usii ko khafa kar baithay

baat ye aaj ki nahi ek umar ka pachtawa hai
jab usne kaha haan, tab hum mana kar baithay

socha to ye tha ke bewafa sirf wo hi nhi ho skta
jaane kiya yaad, aur phir se wafa kar baithay

ye kaisi sitamzareefi dikhaaii hai mere saath
mere hi zakhm, aur mukurane ki dua kar baithay

wo to ab bhi reshmi nashtar chubhota jaata hai
jabke baqaya karz hum kabke ada kar baithay

khud hi chod diya apna watan chand sikko ke liyn
koi poochay to zara, aslam ye kaisa nafa kar baithay
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«Reply #3 on: April 18, 2009, 02:42:09 PM »
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apne haatho hi muqaddar ko fana kar baithay
hum jise chahte thay usii ko khafa kar baithay

baat ye aaj ki nahi ek umar ka pachtawa hai
jab usne kaha haan, tab hum mana kar baithay

socha to ye tha ke bewafa sirf wo hi nhi ho skta
jaane kiya yaad, aur phir se wafa kar baithay

ye kaisi sitamzareefi dikhaaii hai mere saath
mere hi zakhm, aur mukurane ki dua kar baithay

wo to ab bhi reshmi nashtar chubhota jaata hai
jabke baqaya karz hum kabke ada kar baithay

khud hi chod diya apna watan chand sikko ke liyn
koi poochay to zara, aslam ye kaisa nafa kar baithay
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bohat bohat khoob aslam ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bohat hi umda aur lajawaab kalam aapki taraf se..... har ek sher behtareen Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: April 18, 2009, 09:44:13 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Aslam Saheb...Kamal ka likha hai apne...
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2009, 10:32:00 AM »
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Bahut khub Aaina ji Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2009, 11:02:37 AM »
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apne haatho hi muqaddar ko fana kar baithay
hum jise chahte thay usii ko khafa kar baithay

baat ye aaj ki nahi ek umar ka pachtawa hai
jab usne kaha haan, tab hum mana kar baithay

socha to ye tha ke bewafa sirf wo hi nhi ho skta
jaane kiya yaad, aur phir se wafa kar baithay

ye kaisi sitamzareefi dikhaaii hai mere saath
mere hi zakhm, aur mukurane ki dua kar baithay

wo to ab bhi reshmi nashtar chubhota jaata hai
jabke baqaya karz hum kabke ada kar baithay

khud hi chod diya apna watan chand sikko ke liyn
koi poochay to zara, aslam ye kaisa nafa kar baithay
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Dil main utar gayi aapki ye ghazal Aslam Ji..Bohot Khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2009, 07:28:17 AM »
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iss mohabbat main   nafaa kyaa nuksaan kyaa

 jitey to saari duniya, warnaa wajood kyaa jaan kyaa.

  waah bhai bahaut khoob..


   K_A


bhut skukriya k_A aur sahi kaha aapne bhi..................
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2009, 07:31:14 AM »
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aainaji achha likha hai aapne..... Applause Applause Applause

Khud apne paav pe kulhadi maar baithee
Ay aaina ye tum pyaar main kya kar baithee
Karna tha ikraar per inkaar kar baithee
Kismat k saath ye kaisa khel kar baithee


ha ha ha.....ab kya kiya jaye anaam ji.............thnxx
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2009, 07:33:19 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob aslam ji... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bohat hi umda aur lajawaab kalam aapki taraf se..... har ek sher behtareen Clapping Smiley

bhut bhut shukriya tanha ji...............thnxxx for ur appriciation
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«Reply #10 on: April 20, 2009, 07:35:08 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Aslam Saheb...Kamal ka likha hai apne...

thnxxxxxxx dead heart...........apko pasnd isse ziyada khushi ki aur kya baat ho skti hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 20, 2009, 07:36:32 AM »
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Bahut khub Aaina ji Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxx so much jannatjahan ji........................
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«Reply #12 on: April 20, 2009, 07:39:21 AM »
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Dil main utar gayi aapki ye ghazal Aslam Ji..Bohot Khoob.

shukriya celmira ji.........ghazal ki tareef isse behtar aur kya ho skti hai.........bhut bhut shukriya
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2009, 11:15:40 AM »
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Matla aur Makhta jab dono hi mazboot ho to use kehte hain ek kamyaab peshkash......Bohat khoob Aslam...
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2009, 09:49:50 AM »
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Matla aur Makhta jab dono hi mazboot ho to use kehte hain ek kamyaab peshkash......Bohat khoob Aslam...

sajid sahab aapki zarra nawaazi hai.............thnxxx so much
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