" Ye Raat"......,,,,,,,,,,,,........tanowar

by Tanowar Jahan on August 31, 2012, 05:28:12 PM
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Ye raat aaj fir unka ahsas dilane lagi..
Jese mere ruh me unka ruh samane lagi..
Khamosh is raat ko hum sine se lagane lage.,
wo to na aye hamare khuwab me v,,
lekin unk ahsaso ko ye nadan dil,,
apne aagosh me le kar khud ko behlane lagi....
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«Reply #1 on: August 31, 2012, 05:30:28 PM »
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waah boht khub
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«Reply #2 on: August 31, 2012, 05:40:55 PM »
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Shukriya Saaaahillll ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 31, 2012, 05:44:09 PM »
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Good one.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2012, 05:51:28 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tanowar ji... khoobsurat ehsaas... khoobsurat bayaani...!!! Aate rahiye... likhte rahiye....!!!


yun meri yaad me apni aansuon ko naa lutaao tum
aaye baarish to poori tarhaa bheeg jaao tum
baarish ki koi boond banke main tumhe chho jaaunga
karlo mehsoos mujhe, mere sparsh se mukuraaao tum
dekh tumhaari aansuon ko dard hota hai mujhe
yun naaa mere dil ko chot pahuchaao tum
bheegi si barsaaton me kuch is tarha bheeg jaao tum...
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2012, 06:05:39 PM »
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Bheeg jaye is tarha hum in barishon me,
ke khud har ek bund ban jaye hum..
Tum v ana in badalo me chup kar in khubsurt barish ki tarha,
ke teri mulakato ka silsila ban jaye hum...

thanks hridy ji
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2012, 06:36:20 PM »
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bahut khoob Tanowar ji.. Usual Smile

ek chhota sa sher ish raat ke liye jarur kehna chahunga...

Mat Poochh Ke Kya Din Aur Kya Raat Aaj Kal.,

Rooh Ko Bhigo De Kaha Aisi Barsaat Aaj Kal...

Koun Kise Kab Chhu Jaye Ya Kab Chhod Jaye Tanha.,

Jane-Anjane Chehro Se Kaha Gayi Woh Baat Aaj Kal..

Shukriya... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2012, 08:52:41 PM »
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bahut khoob  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2012, 08:53:46 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 31, 2012, 05:51:28 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Tanowar ji... khoobsurat ehsaas... khoobsurat bayaani...!!! Aate rahiye... likhte rahiye....!!!


yun meri yaad me apni aansuon ko naa lutaao tum
aaye baarish to poori tarhaa bheeg jaao tum
baarish ki koi boond banke main tumhe chho jaaunga
karlo mehsoos mujhe, mere sparsh se mukuraaao tum
dekh tumhaari aansuon ko dard hota hai mujhe
yun naaa mere dil ko chot pahuchaao tum
bheegi si barsaaton me kuch is tarha bheeg jaao tum...

geet ko sangeet mil jaye bhala kya chahiye
Aansuwon ko preet mil jaye bhala kya chahiye ?
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«Reply #9 on: August 31, 2012, 08:56:35 PM »
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Quote from: Tanowar Jahan on August 31, 2012, 06:05:39 PM
Bheeg jaye is tarha hum in barishon me,
ke khud har ek bund ban jaye hum..
Tum v ana in badalo me chup kar in khubsurt barish ki tarha,
ke teri mulakato ka silsila ban jaye hum...

thanks hridy ji

nice  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2012, 09:00:15 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 31, 2012, 06:36:20 PM
bahut khoob Tanowar ji.. Usual Smile

ek chhota sa sher ish raat ke liye jarur kehna chahunga...

Mat Poochh Ke Kya Din Aur Kya Raat Aaj Kal.,

Rooh Ko Bhigo De Kaha Aisi Barsaat Aaj Kal...

Koun Kise Kab Chhu Jaye Ya Kab Chhod Jaye Tanha.,

Jane-Anjane Chehro Se Kaha Gayi Woh Baat Aaj Kal..

Shukriya... Usual Smile

wah wah bahut khoob Mohammad Touhid jee
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 11:24:10 PM »
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wah wah, bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2012, 06:18:36 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Tanowar ji... khoobsurat jawaab...!!!


kabhi baarish to kabhi baadal banke aaungaa
main tumhaare aankhon ka kaajal banke aaungaa
nahi duur tumse main ek pal bhi, kareeb hoon
jaanaa, main tumhaaraa aanchal banke sajaaungaa

Quote from: Tanowar Jahan on August 31, 2012, 06:05:39 PM
Bheeg jaye is tarha hum in barishon me,
ke khud har ek bund ban jaye hum..
Tum v ana in badalo me chup kar in khubsurt barish ki tarha,
ke teri mulakato ka silsila ban jaye hum...

thanks hridy ji
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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2012, 06:20:03 AM »
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chaahne ko to hum kuch bhi nahi chaahte magar
ek tumhaaraa saath mil jaaye to kyaa chaahiye... Usual Smile

Quote from: suman59 on August 31, 2012, 08:53:46 PM
geet ko sangeet mil jaye bhala kya chahiye
Aansuwon ko preet mil jaye bhala kya chahiye ?
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bhut bhut shukriya suman ji
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