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yeh jo nasha sa dil per hai chhaa raha
koi bheega sa badal dil ko lute ja raha
cher raha hai aaj mast pawan ka jhonka asie
jaise piya ka sandesha le ke dil per gajab dha raha
meethi si yeh fuhaar mere tan man ko bheego rahi
ek meethi si chuban ka ehesas kyu aaj mere dil mein ho raha
dil karta hai aaj ke bheege mosam mein hum kuch kar jaaye
bas ek ho tu aur ek ho hum ,aaj is barish mein kho ke rah jaaye
dil per ab apne kaabu kaise paaye hum
aaj tere daman se lipat kar bas tujhe mein khone ka sama ho raha
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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2006, 10:56:10 AM » |
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bahut khoob ranjana ji
ye badaloon ki sharat se mujhe darr lagta hai
kahin ye tera bheega badan mujhe madhosh na kar de
kafi hai teri saansein mujhe behkane ke liye
par aaj ye badloon ka karvan mujhe bheega sa manzar kar raha hai
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2006, 10:57:55 AM » |
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yeh jo nasha sa dil per hai chhaa raha
koi bheega sa badal dil ko lute ja raha
cher raha hai aaj mast pawan ka jhonka asie
jaise piya ka sandesha le ke dil per gajab dha raha
meethi si yeh fuhaar mere tan man ko bheego rahi
ek meethi si chuban ka ehesas kyu aaj mere dil mein ho raha
dil karta hai aaj ke bheege mosam mein hum kuch kar jaaye
bas ek ho tu aur ek ho hum ,aaj is barish mein kho ke rah jaaye
dil per ab apne kaabu kaise paaye hum
aaj tere daman se lipat kar bas tujhe mein khone ka sama ho raha Wah kya baat hai Dilli ke masuam chaa gaya  |
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2006, 11:06:11 AM » |
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bahut khub NItiesh
aaj chalo mosam se gujarish ki jaaye
bheegate mosam mein kuch shararat si ki jaaye
khol do aake mere bheege gesuo ko tum
aaj ek nadaani mere aanchal se ki jaaye
keh rahi hai yeh padti si bochaar
kyu na aaj is bheege mosam mein
ek aarzu pyaar ki fir se ki jaaye
chha raha hai sarur kuch aisa hum per
aaj tere seene se lag kar bheege mosam ki thandak kuch kam ki jaaye
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2006, 11:11:17 AM » |
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shukriya Gaurav.......delhi ke mosam asar aap per nahi hua ?bina likhe kyu chale gaye......... :D
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2006, 11:12:02 AM » |
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bahut khoob ranjana ji
lagta hai aaj ye mausam humko ruswa kar dega
har ghadi har manzar mujhe tera muqadar kar dega
na jaane ye boondein kuch saajish si kar rahi hai
mujhe ye khamoshime kuch kehti si lag rahi hai
tum chukar to dekho inn boondon ki thandak ko
ek bijli si pure jism me ye boondein bhar rahi hai
aaj kuch naadani si lagta hai ho kar rahegi
ya tum sharmaogi ya fir sharam pani pani hogi
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«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2006, 11:47:36 AM » |
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too good nitiesh..........
kal bhi barsi thee yeh boonde
per dil per aisa khumar na chhaaya thaa
kal bhi badal ghir ke aaye they
per dil ko itna beqarar na paaya thaa
aaj meri har aada jaise kuch keh jaati hai
raat mera dil tere pyaar mein bheeg aaya thaa
gesu se yeh tapkata sa paani,yeh geela sa mera aanchal
lagta hai mosam ke saath saath in sabne bhi tera hosh udaya thaa
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2006, 12:11:46 PM » |
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very nice ranjana ..........& phoenix ji..........2 gud ....
ye bheega sa mausam ,ye sard hawaye
jaane kaisa manzer tumhe aaj dhiklaye
teri chehre per barasti bundo ki ladiya
sine mai mere kahi shola sa bhadkaye
dil dhadak raha hai joro se aaj mera
kahi koi shararat tumse na kar jaaye
tere bheege bheege gesuo ki uljhan sanam
tujhe chune ka mujhe ek naya bahana de jaaye
ke bharlu tumhe agosh mai main apni
aao tumhe jannat ka zami pe ahsaas karaye
ye bheega sa mausam ye sard hawaye.................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
................@fahi@........................
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2006, 12:32:37 PM » |
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very nice ranju and all.....
bheegi si rut ki baat hai to chup bhi kya rahen
boondon ki dhun hai baj rahi to geet ik bune
sapne sa haseen koi pal hai aane ko
usake intezaar me aa ye khidki khol den
man to bheega aaj hai kuch bheeg jaae tan
baarish ki hain ye boonden hi ki naach utha man....
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«Reply #9 on: June 26, 2006, 02:17:20 AM » |
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very nice fahi and tabassum..........shukriya..........
yeh bheege mosam ka asar ho raha hai
ya mujh per tera ishq jaadu kar raha hai
yeh chand sharma se badali mein chip raha hai
ya tere daman mein chipne ko mera dil taras raha hai
yeh kaale se badal jhum ke baras rahe hain
ya mere gesu khul ke tere kaadhe per bikahr rahe hain
yeh chamakti bijali se sama roshan ho raha hai
ya teri aankho ki chamak mein mera dil kho raha hai
yeh aa gaya hai kya fir se jhum ke sawan
ya aaj tere mere pyaar mein yeh sama madmast ho raha hai
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«Reply #10 on: June 26, 2006, 05:11:08 AM » |
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thanx ranju aur aap to hamesha hi achcha likhati haiin
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«Reply #11 on: June 26, 2006, 05:23:28 AM » |
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shukriya tabassum.....hamesha na na........... :D
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«Reply #12 on: June 26, 2006, 05:28:06 AM » |
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nice.............
dil pe madhoshi ka nashila aalam sa chaaya hai
fizao mai barasta hua phir aisa mausam aaya hai
jhoom rahi hai hawaye bhi ghatayo ke sang-sang
khil uthe hai baag ,har kali ka man muskaaya hai
bhadak rahe hai dil mai chahat se bheege shole
bundo ne is qadar aaj tan man bhigaya hai
har saans ke saath jaag rahi hai nayi umange
is madmast sama ne dhadkan ka saaz bajaya hai
ke tujh bin akele mujhe dasti hai ye mehki vaadiya
ab to aaja aey sanjna ke sawaan ka mahina aaya hai
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«Reply #13 on: June 26, 2006, 05:38:39 AM » |
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thanx ranju and nice one...........
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«Reply #14 on: June 26, 2006, 05:53:19 AM » |
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nice fahi............
raat bhar meh tap-tap tapkata raha
boond-boond tum yaad aate rahe
ek geela sa khawab meri aankho mein chalta raha
kampati rahi main ek sukhe patee ki tarah
tere agaosh ki garmi paane ko dil machalta raha
chand bhi chhip gaya kahi badali mein ja ke
mere dil mein tujhe paane ka sapana palata raha
thaa kuch yeh geeli raat ka alam
ki tum saath they mere har pal
fir bhi na jaane kyu tumhe yeh dil talash karta raha
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