yeh kaisi aag hai jo jala rahi tan mann...

by punam on May 12, 2008, 10:47:41 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 13, 2008, 07:21:27 AM »
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Thanx di bahot acha likha aap ne...
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«Reply #16 on: May 13, 2008, 07:23:59 AM »
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Dil ko khabar hi na thi ki kuch aisa bhi hona hai
bas loota ke apne apko behaal bhi hona hai..
sawalon ki barish me khud ko bhigona hai
woh aag me khud ko jalake misaal bhi hona hai...
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«Reply #17 on: May 13, 2008, 07:33:37 AM »
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Bahoot achhe baadal ji.....achhe ahsaas haiN aapki tehreer maiN....


harash

Quote from: baadal102 on May 12, 2008, 04:16:53 PM
Punam ji N naami ji aap jitna aacha to mai kabhi nahi likh sakta lakin ek koshish ki hai aap ki lines ke saath judne ki,plz galti ho jai to maaf karna.


Tadap mann ki tujhe bataue kaise,
Jalan dil ki tujhe dikhue kaise,

Kya hua hai mujhe ye samjhaue kaise,
Chubhan sine ki batlaue kaise,
Chamkti rangat hai sirf tare liye,
Iss rangat ka rang tujhe dikhue kaise,

Khila khila hai saara jahaan,
ISS jahaan ko apne nazar se tujhe deekhue kaise,
Intzaar kitna hai tera mari aankho mai,
Iss baichani ko tujhe batlaue kaise,

Meetha ahsaas hai jo dard ka sine mai,
Us ahsaas se tera parichay karaue kaise,
Tan-mann mai lagi hai jo aag tare naam ki,
Us aag ke liye sital jal laaue kaise,

Tadap man ki tujhe bataue kaise,
Jalan dil ki tujhe dikhue kaise..............



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«Reply #18 on: May 13, 2008, 12:53:18 PM »
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bahut khoob punam ji ...

ye aag hi aisi hai jo  mann jalate hai.
tanhaayiyaan bhi usi ki yaad late hai
jo waqt beet gaya tha kisi ke saaye mein
aaj kyn wo humko bebas rulate hai...
ye aag hi aisi hai jo mann jalate hai...

kyn kisi ki yaad mein sab kuch bhula dala
is aag mein to humne aapna sab kuch jala dala.
ab phir kisi ke saaye wahan humko bulate hai.
ye aag hi kuch aisi hai jo dil ko jalate hai.
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«Reply #19 on: May 13, 2008, 12:55:09 PM »
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oops ! ssrry topic nhi dikha tha so dard mein lik gaya .
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«Reply #20 on: May 13, 2008, 01:07:46 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 13, 2008, 05:31:39 AM
Bohat khoob dostho ..Really wonderful.. Applause


Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Ek Agan Hai Jo Pigala Deti Hai Tan Mann Main
Chura Liya Hai Daman Aapna Kyun Nahi Deti Ho Vachan Aapna
Kar Deti Hai Iss Dil Ko Ronak Joh Hote Ho Tum Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main

Honeyrose jee,

Aap ki rachna to badi niraali hai, padh kar man jaise uchhal raha hai, ab bas dil bechain ho raha hai, aap ki sudar chhoti si kavita men jo arth hai, woh har koi samjhle badi baat hai.
Mere dil ki baat kar daali hai aapne, honeyrose jee, aisa viyakul kardiya yeh rachna se hum ko sneh arpit ho gaya.
Aap ki kavita mahan hai, iss ki jitni tareef karen kam hai. SubhanAllah
Bas aise hi likhte rahiye, mera aap se nivedan hai.

Shukriya.

S Naami
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«Reply #21 on: May 13, 2008, 03:48:51 PM »
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Superb Punam  Applause

Sabne bahut accha saat diya hai.. Syed ji and Baadal ji... bahut khoob.
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«Reply #22 on: May 13, 2008, 04:14:58 PM »
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Quote from: BHONDU on May 13, 2008, 12:55:09 PM
oops ! ssrry topic nhi dikha tha so dard mein lik gaya .

koi nahi...Bhondu ji..aap ne yehan humare post dekhe padhe reply kiye ..yeh hi bahot hai..thanx ..

syed ji aap jaisa tareef karna mujhe nahi aata..di sach me acha likhti hai...

Roja di thanx ...
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«Reply #23 on: May 13, 2008, 05:10:22 PM »
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Thanks Punam jee aap ne hamare bhawana ko saraha. Thanks
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«Reply #24 on: May 13, 2008, 10:30:54 PM »
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Quote from: BHONDU on May 13, 2008, 12:53:18 PM
bahut khoob punam ji ...

ye aag hi aisi hai jo  mann jalate hai.
tanhaayiyaan bhi usi ki yaad late hai
jo waqt beet gaya tha kisi ke saaye mein
aaj kyn wo humko bebas rulate hai...
ye aag hi aisi hai jo mann jalate hai...

kyn kisi ki yaad mein sab kuch bhula dala
is aag mein to humne aapna sab kuch jala dala.
ab phir kisi ke saaye wahan humko bulate hai.
ye aag hi kuch aisi hai jo dil ko jalate hai.


bahoot khoob Dost Kavi!! App to gayab he ho gaye!! Nice to see you back on Yoindia!! Applause Missed you!!  Crying
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«Reply #25 on: May 14, 2008, 08:22:00 AM »
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Na pucho mujhse koi kya hua hai
kya bataun dil ka kya haal hua hai
kisi ke yaad me khud ko subha sham jalaya hai..

ek pal bhi usse dhur raha nahi jata
paas bhi iss waqt bulaya nahi jata
bas aise hi abhi khud ko jalana hai..

aayegi woh ghadi unse hum bhi milenge
mit jayegi dhuri hum unke aagosh me honge
abhi intezaar mein bas jalna jalana hai....
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«Reply #26 on: May 14, 2008, 08:28:55 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on May 13, 2008, 05:31:39 AM
Bohat khoob dostho ..Really wonderful.. Applause


Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Ek Agan Hai Jo Pigala Deti Hai Tan Mann Main
Chura Liya Hai Daman Aapna Kyun Nahi Deti Ho Vachan Aapna
Kar Deti Hai Iss Dil Ko Ronak Joh Hote Ho Tum Tan Mann Main
Yeh Kaise Aag Hai Jo Jala Rahi Hai Tan Mann Main

Wah Honey dear. bahut pyara kalam likha hai.

Apni haal e dil yu hi na sunaya karo
Ishq ladana aasaan nahi yeh b tum samja karo tongue3
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«Reply #27 on: May 14, 2008, 08:31:07 AM »
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Quote from: BHONDU on May 13, 2008, 12:53:18 PM
bahut khoob punam ji ...

ye aag hi aisi hai jo  mann jalate hai.
tanhaayiyaan bhi usi ki yaad late hai
jo waqt beet gaya tha kisi ke saaye mein
aaj kyn wo humko bebas rulate hai...
ye aag hi aisi hai jo mann jalate hai...

kyn kisi ki yaad mein sab kuch bhula dala
is aag mein to humne aapna sab kuch jala dala.
ab phir kisi ke saaye wahan humko bulate hai.
ye aag hi kuch aisi hai jo dil ko jalate hai.

Bahut khoob Bhondu ji ...bahut dino k baad aapka likha padne ko mila  Applause
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«Reply #28 on: May 14, 2008, 08:37:50 AM »
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Quote from: punam on May 14, 2008, 08:22:00 AM
Na pucho mujhse koi kya hua hai
kya bataun dil ka kya haal hua hai
kisi ke yaad me khud ko subha sham jalaya hai..

ek pal bhi usse dhur raha nahi jata
paas bhi iss waqt bulaya nahi jata
bas aise hi abhi khud ko jalana hai..

aayegi woh ghadi unse hum bhi milenge
mit jayegi dhuri hum unke aagosh me honge
abhi intezaar mein bas jalna jalana hai....


Bahut khoob  Applause

Intezar main unka sapna dekha karo
Dil ko unke hawale kardiya karo
Pyar ke raahon main unka sang chala karo
Meete sapne aankhon main sajaya karo

Aayega woh, yu hi dil ko dukhaya na karo
Intezar ki gadi meeti hoti hai
Meri bhi baat maan liya karo
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«Reply #29 on: May 14, 2008, 03:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: punam on May 14, 2008, 08:22:00 AM
Na pucho mujhse koi kya hua hai
kya bataun dil ka kya haal hua hai
kisi ke yaad me khud ko subha sham jalaya hai..
...............
abhi intezaar mein bas jalna jalana hai....

Arey Punam Saahiba,
Abhi tak yeh aag bujhee nahin kya, iss martaba bhi great likha hai, Bravo!!
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