Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan

by redwhitegang on July 10, 2006, 05:51:00 AM
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Ye mere kuch bohot kareeb doston ke sath  banaya ek haseen tasveer hai jo mai aap sabhi logo ke sath share kar raha hun!...
Mai aapne dosto ke liye unpar kuch lines likha hu in tasveer o me...
hope u like it :D
Aur in hii me se ek ne ye shahyari likh bheji hai is tasveer ke liye... :D

Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan
Toh baat itni bad jaaygi yeh socha na thaa
Dost mile yahan per jab naye naye toh
Dil per bas fir kiska thaa
Chhaa gaya har shaye per yeh nasha kuch aisa
Fir din raat ka hosh yahan bhala kisko thaa
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angel4u
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2006, 06:03:35 AM »
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Hey nice one shahid...
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2006, 06:22:53 AM »
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very nice shahid ji.............bahut hi sunder tarike se pesh kiya hai.
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2006, 06:24:58 AM »
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shukriya Shahid...............   :D
bahut khoob................ Usual Smile

jab jud gaya hai yeh rishta dosti ka hum mein
toh ab yahan kaam nafarto ka nahi
paa lenge hum apni mnzilo ko yahan
ki ab hame rukane aur tutane ki fursat nahi :D
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2006, 06:39:00 AM »
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rakhlo is nafrat ko bhi dil mai apne prem ke sang
 ki kabhi kabhi khote sikke bhi kaam aate hai sanam

...................@fahi@.....................
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«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2006, 06:44:28 AM »
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hum jahan nikalenge woh raha mohabbat ki ho jaayegi
yeh saath hai hamara itna pyaara ki nafarte sang na chal paayegi
hai yadi vishwas aur himmat hamare dil mein bhara hua
toh har raha hame khud manzil tak pahuchhayegi.......... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 10, 2006, 06:51:43 AM »
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naino se nikle hue ishq ke vaar mai
 berfat dodti dhadkano ki raftaar mai
 ek dusra pehlu bhi rehta hai sang
 kyunki nafarte to basti hai pyaar mai .

.....................@fahi@.....................
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«Reply #7 on: July 10, 2006, 07:02:32 AM »
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dosti jeena sikha deti hai
dosti har gum ko bhula deti hai
hai yadi nafart bhi isi pyaar ke saath
toh dosti nafart ko bhi pyaar sikha deti hai
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2006, 04:29:18 AM »
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Quote from: "redwhitegang"

Ye mere kuch bohot kareeb doston ke sath  banaya ek haseen tasveer hai jo mai aap sabhi logo ke sath share kar raha hun!...
Mai aapne dosto ke liye unpar kuch lines likha hu in tasveer o me...
hope you like it :D
Aur in hii me se ek ne ye shahyari likh bheji hai is tasveer ke liye... :D

Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan
Toh baat itni bad jaaygi yeh socha na thaa
Dost mile yahan per jab naye naye toh
Dil per bas fir kiska thaa
Chhaa gaya har shaye per yeh nasha kuch aisa
Fir din raat ka hosh yahan bhala kisko thaa


Suna tha maine ki Khawahishon ki Shaam bhi dhalti hai.....
Jab se paye hai Dost tum jaise....Yahan toh mom bhi Chingari bann Jindagi roshan karti hai......

Kya ho Dukh na koi GUm ho......
Haste rahe sada yeh Chehre aise hee na kabhi Aankhein kisi ki Namm ho......

Ek WaQt ayega jab humsab ko Kareeb layega......
Hoga Ehsaas hume ek duje ka or yoon haste hue sabka Jivan beet jayega.........!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2006, 04:37:09 AM »
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Kya baat hai Shahid ji.....
Everytime u have something new to showcase....

Keep it up....Really nice....
(But we dont know who they are...except one....Naam nahin baataye aapney)
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«Reply #10 on: July 11, 2006, 04:41:27 AM »
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Kya baat hai Shahid ji.....
Everytime you have something new to showcase....

Keep it up....Really nice....
(But we dont know who they are...except one....Naam nahin baataye aapney)
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Top Order me Anushka or Shahid hai....and on Ground Level Me and Ranju :wink: aya samajh me
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2006, 04:46:25 AM »
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Puzzled !  Puzzled ! Thanks Gaurav..... now understood.... Usual Smile [/b]
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2006, 04:48:10 AM »
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bahut khoob Gaurav.........

rahe chahye dur hum ek duje se hamesha
fir bhi sab ek dusare ke diwaane bane

kuch likha gaya jo lafazo mein kahi
wahi lafaz aaj dosti ke taarne bane

dekhe they kuch sunhere khawab meri in aankho ne kabhi
aaj wahi khawab meri haqikat ke fasaane bane.

ek chaha thee dil mein pyaare se rishto ki
aaj tum sab mile toh yah rishte suhaane bane

jaane kabhi zindagi mein mulakat ho ke na ho
aaj is pal mein toh yeh rishte jeene ke bahaane bane
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«Reply #13 on: July 11, 2006, 08:59:06 AM »
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Quote from: "redwhitegang"

Ye mere kuch bohot kareeb doston ke sath  banaya ek haseen tasveer hai jo mai aap sabhi logo ke sath share kar raha hun!...
Mai aapne dosto ke liye unpar kuch lines likha hu in tasveer o me...
hope you like it :D
Aur in hii me se ek ne ye shahyari likh bheji hai is tasveer ke liye... :D

Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan
Toh baat itni bad jaaygi yeh socha na thaa
Dost mile yahan per jab naye naye toh
Dil per bas fir kiska thaa
Chhaa gaya har shaye per yeh nasha kuch aisa
Fir din raat ka hosh yahan bhala kisko thaa



WOW Yeh sirf 4 members hai yoindia kay to agar sab ki picture legaye jai toh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! kay hangama hoga...
Great work Shahid!!! Ranjanji and Gauravji...  oops and Anushkaji :D
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«Reply #14 on: July 11, 2006, 09:13:31 AM »
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Bahut khub Ranjan janu aur Gaurav ab itni gehri dosti.... bahut acha laga kay abhi bhi is zamanay meh itni achi dosti hai aur rehsakti hai..

Isi per ek sher yaad aya

"Andaz-e dosti bhi apki
ek aada hai shamil  is meh
Jisko bhi chaha aapney
woh aap per fida hai
Dil meh basi hai ek
pyari si tesveer aapki
fir kaisay kehdu ke
hum dosto say juda hai"

isko bhedanay meh yeh kuch lines likhi hai
Tu kehi bhii rahay ..chaheh saat semunder paar
Meri dil ki avaaz ayeh gi tumharay kano tak
chahey ayeh koi bhi Taufan
Chahey zindagi gamo say bher bhi jai
teri dosti yakinan hai
Itna eitbaar hai is bandhan per jitna hamay Khuda per hai
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