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«Reply #15 on: July 11, 2006, 12:00:43 PM » |
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bahut khub ANU jaan ......shamaila ji shukriya.......... :D
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«Reply #16 on: July 11, 2006, 06:04:32 PM » |
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Bahut khub Ranjan janu aur Gaurav ab itni gehri dosti.... bahut acha laga kay abhi bhi is zamanay meh itni achi dosti hai aur rehsakti hai.. Isi per ek sher yaad aya "Andaz-e dosti bhi apki ek aada hai shamil is meh Jisko bhi chaha aapney woh aap per fida hai Dil meh basi hai ek pyari si tesveer aapki fir kaisay kehdu ke hum dosto say juda hai" Yeh hai hamaray dosto keliyeh jo yaha yeh hamari khatir pesh kiya Shahid, Ranjan janu and gaurav this is for you guys Love always  isko bhedanay meh yeh kuch lines likhi hai Tu kehi bhii rahay ..chaheh saat semunder paar Meri dil ki avaaz ayeh gi tumharay kano tak chahey ayeh koi bhi Taufan Chahey zindagi gamo say bher bhi jai teri dosti yakinan hai Itna eitbaar hai is bandhan per jitna hamay Khuda per hai |
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #17 on: July 11, 2006, 07:27:37 PM » |
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Kya baat hai Shahid ji.....
Everytime you have something new to showcase....
Keep it up....Really nice....
(But we dont know who they are...except one....Naam nahin baataye aapney)
[/b] Bohot shukriya shikha ji! ke aap ko hamara likha aur tarika dono pasand aaya...........waise jo sawal apne hamse pucha tha gaurav ne to uska aapnahi andaz se jabab de hii diya hai [  ]......... |
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«Reply #18 on: July 11, 2006, 07:30:09 PM » |
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 Ye mere kuch bohot kareeb doston ke sath banaya ek haseen tasveer hai jo mai aap sabhi logo ke sath share kar raha hun!...
Mai aapne dosto ke liye unpar kuch lines likha hu in tasveer o me...
hope you like it :D
Aur in hii me se ek ne ye shahyari likh bheji hai is tasveer ke liye... :D Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan
Toh baat itni bad jaaygi yeh socha na thaa
Dost mile yahan per jab naye naye toh
Dil per bas fir kiska thaa
Chhaa gaya har shaye per yeh nasha kuch aisa
Fir din raat ka hosh yahan bhala kisko thaaSuna tha maine ki Khawahishon ki Shaam bhi dhalti hai..... Jab se paye hai Dost tum jaise....Yahan toh mom bhi Chingari bann Jindagi roshan karti hai...... Kya ho Dukh na koi GUm ho...... Haste rahe sada yeh Chehre aise hee na kabhi Aankhein kisi ki Namm ho...... Ek WaQt ayega jab humsab ko Kareeb layega...... Hoga Ehsaas hume ek duje ka or yoon haste hue sabka Jivan beet jayega.........!!!!!!!! bohot khub likha hai gaurav dear.....teri shayari ka jabab nahi aur legpull ka bhi[ ]....jo tumne mujhe puche huwe sawal par jabab diya hai na dear usike baare me bol raha hu! :wink: |
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Aryaan
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«Reply #19 on: July 11, 2006, 07:43:28 PM » |
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Bohat khoob Shahid & All... |
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #20 on: July 11, 2006, 08:08:53 PM » |
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Bahut khub Ranjan janu aur Gaurav ab itni gehri dosti.... bahut acha laga kay abhi bhi is zamanay meh itni achi dosti hai aur rehsakti hai..
Isi per ek sher yaad aya
"Andaz-e dosti bhi apki
ek aada hai shamil is meh
Jisko bhi chaha aapney
woh aap per fida hai
Dil meh basi hai ek
pyari si tesveer aapki
fir kaisay kehdu ke
hum dosto say juda hai"
isko bhedanay meh yeh kuch lines likhi hai
Tu kehi bhii rahay ..chaheh saat semunder paar
Meri dil ki avaaz ayeh gi tumharay kano tak
chahey ayeh koi bhi Taufan
Chahey zindagi gamo say bher bhi jai
teri dosti yakinan hai
Itna eitbaar hai is bandhan per jitna hamay Khuda per hai So sweet anushka dear..too good! Teri inhii aadon pe ham marte hain
Sapna ban kar teri palko me baste hai
Teri gam me aansu ban kar baraste hai
Tujh se milne ko kab se ham tarste hai
Teri yaadon me khud ko bhulaya hamne
Jo tu haasti hai to tere sath hambhi haste hai |
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«Reply #21 on: July 11, 2006, 08:15:18 PM » |
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very nice shahid ji.............bahut hi sunder tarike se pesh kiya hai. shukriya Shahid...............
bahut khoob................
jab jud gaya hai yeh rishta dosti ka hum mein
toh ab yahan kaam nafarto ka nahi
paa lenge hum apni mnzilo ko yahan
ki ab hame rukane aur tutane ki fursat nahi Thnx ranz-na dear :D ..aur fahi bhai aap ka kya kehna........aapni post me aapko pa kar to hamme kitna khusi hoti hai bayan nahi kar sakte :D And Angel4u ji aur shamaila ji aaplogo ka bhi bohot shukriya :D |
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ranjana
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«Reply #22 on: July 12, 2006, 01:40:11 AM » |
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bahut khoob .....shahid...shukriya ..
badalte hain mausam ,din aur raat
magar pyaar bhare dil badalte kahan hai
jab se juda se dil unse mera
ab dil unke bina lagta kahan hai
yeh zinadgi ek safar hi toh hai dosto
sab saath mil ke chale toh rasta mushkil kahan hai
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«Reply #23 on: July 12, 2006, 04:04:44 AM » |
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Ye mere kuch bohot kareeb doston ke sath banaya ek haseen tasveer hai jo mai aap sabhi logo ke sath share kar raha hun!...
Mai aapne dosto ke liye unpar kuch lines likha hu in tasveer o me...
hope you like it :D
Aur in hii me se ek ne ye shahyari likh bheji hai is tasveer ke liye... :D Yeh safar jab shuru kiya thaa hamne yahan
Toh baat itni bad jaaygi yeh socha na thaa
Dost mile yahan per jab naye naye toh
Dil per bas fir kiska thaa
Chhaa gaya har shaye per yeh nasha kuch aisa
Fir din raat ka hosh yahan bhala kisko thaa bahut hi acha likha hai Anushka,Shahid, Ranjana and Gaurav |
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«Reply #24 on: July 12, 2006, 05:50:09 PM » |
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thnx aaramish ji!...aur yoindia me aap ka hardik swagat hai :D
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«Reply #25 on: July 13, 2006, 09:23:32 AM » |
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Thx Aaramish n welcome to Yoindia!
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«Reply #26 on: July 13, 2006, 03:38:29 PM » |
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Thnx araamish jii
Jab tak chalengi saanse.....
Bandhan tum logo se na toot payega......
Rah Jayega harr Zakhm mera peeche......
Aur Badnaam tum takk aane ka raste taye karta ayega......
Kya kaha jaye ab Khuda ke Farishton ke baare me......
JO kabhi ki roshni tumhari Tasveer ke aage......
Tumhare Pyar se poora Jahan Roshan ho jayega......!!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #27 on: July 14, 2006, 01:20:38 PM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav....
shuru kiya thaa jab yeh safar toh kisko maalum thaa
woh ban jayenge dil ki jubaan aur har lafaz unke naam hoga
chhaa jayega unki baato ka khumar kuch aisa
ki dil har pal bas geet unke hi gaayega
ek roshni jal jayagi hamari andhari si raha mein
aur har rasata jaise khud manzil ban jayega
khuda hamari dosti ko yun hi bas meffuz rakhe
nazar na lage kisi ki aur yeh pyaar ki tasveer bas yun hi har pal saje
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«Reply #28 on: July 17, 2006, 06:38:48 PM » |
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bahut khoob gaurav....
shuru kiya thaa jab yeh safar toh kisko maalum thaa
woh ban jayenge dil ki jubaan aur har lafaz unke naam hoga
chhaa jayega unki baato ka khumar kuch aisa
ki dil har pal bas geet unke hi gaayega
ek roshni jal jayagi hamari andhari si raha mein
aur har rasata jaise khud manzil ban jayega
khuda hamari dosti ko yun hi bas meffuz rakhe
nazar na lage kisi ki aur yeh pyaar ki tasveer bas yun hi har pal saje kya baat hai rnz-na ..bohot khub :D |
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«Reply #29 on: July 17, 2006, 06:58:45 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai, good job by all!!
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