yoo bhi muje chood jana tha

by Matrix Guy on August 30, 2010, 08:23:52 AM
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YE RUSWAYI YE JAGDA TO EK BAHANA THA
USSAY TO YOO BHI MUJE CHOOR JANA THA

HUM USKE GHAR KO APNA SAMAJTE RAHE
LEKIN USKA TO HAR MOR PAR ASHIYANA THA

YE USKA DOSH NAHI WO MAJBOOR THI SHAYAD
KE USKI FITRAT ME HI DIL DUKHANA THA

MUJKO TALAB THI FAQAT USKI CHAHAT KI
OUR USKI CHAHAT HI SARA ZAMANA THA

USKI CHAHAT ME HUMNE LAHU TAK BAHA DIYA
PAR USE NAMANJUUR EK ASHK TAK BAHANA THA

SARE ZAMANE KE KHAT MILTEY HE ROJ MUJE
KAMBHAKT EK USKA HI KHAT KABHI NA ANA THA.....
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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2010, 09:32:07 AM »
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Hats off to you!

aapki shayari me baat hi kuch alag hai janaab... aashiq banaa diya aapne humein apni shayari ka ..... !!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2010, 01:40:25 PM »
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MG ji.......kuch likha hai ji...hope u like it this time...

Dard se mera rishta bada purana tha
Tu to sirf uska bana ek naya bahana tha

Tere dar pe aate rahe hum iss umeed pe
Humne suna tha k tu kabhi mera deewana tha

Na ban sake tere  humsafar hum sanam
Kya karte ek taraf tu ek taraf zaalim zamana tha

Tum tadapte rahe hamare liye aur sanam
Humari khwaish wo aasmaan ka ujlaa sitara tha

Hamari chahut me tum ho gaye fanaa sanam
Samjhe jab thokron me apna dil humne paaya tha

Sara zamana jab hua deewana tumhare kalaam ka
Tab jaake samjha humne kya khubb mera ye deewana tha…!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2010, 01:44:47 PM »
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wowwwwwwwwww.........kasak ji ........

kya baat kahi he .........its superb ..........

bht khubsurat jawab he..........last stanja bht cute he......

wese apki tariif karne ki koi jarurt to he nahi fir bhi kar li mene.....bcoz u r the best
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«Reply #4 on: August 31, 2010, 01:13:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob MG Ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 31, 2010, 02:12:24 PM »
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Naa tumse koi jhagda tha naa ruswayi thee
Ye tou usne kismet hamaari aajmaayi thee

Naa tu bewaffa tha naa mein he thee
Ye tou rah he hamaari alag-alag thee

Majboor tou hum dono they zamaane k haathon
Dil dukhaanaa naa tujhe manjoor tha naa mujhe

Khat tou meine bhi likhe they anginat
Bas likh likh kay phaad diye jaane kyu

Teri yaad me ashq anginat bahaaye they humne
Ye aur baat hai ke tujhse chhupaye they humne
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«Reply #6 on: August 31, 2010, 02:30:46 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 31, 2010, 02:12:24 PM
Naa tumse koi jhagda tha naa ruswayi thee
Ye tou usne kismet hamaari aajmaayi thee

Naa tu bewaffa tha naa mein he thee
Ye tou rah he hamaari alag-alag thee

Majboor tou hum dono they zamaane k haathon
Dil dukhaanaa naa tujhe manjoor tha naa mujhe

Khat tou meine bhi likhe they anginat
Bas likh likh kay phaad diye jaane kyu

Teri yaad me ashq anginat bahaaye they humne
Ye aur baat hai ke tujhse chhupaye they humne


haalat e dil bayaan kar gai teri ye gazal...bht pyara likha hai koyal tumne....
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 05:52:21 PM »
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Nice poem Matrix-guy ji.....good response Kasak ji and koyal ji....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Guy ji aapka naam bataaiye....Ye Matrix jara daad dene mai ajeeb lagta hai.....

Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 30, 2010, 08:23:52 AM


YE RUSWAYI YE JAGDA TO EK BAHANA THA
USSAY TO YOO BHI MUJE CHOOR JANA THA

HUM USKE GHAR KO APNA SAMAJTE RAHE
LEKIN USKA TO HAR MOR PAR ASHIYANA THA

YE USKA DOSH NAHI WO MAJBOOR THI SHAYAD
KE USKI FITRAT ME HI DIL DUKHANA THA

MUJKO TALAB THI FAQAT USKI CHAHAT KI
OUR USKI CHAHAT HI SARA ZAMANA THA

USKI CHAHAT ME HUMNE LAHU TAK BAHA DIYA
PAR USE NAMANJUUR EK ASHK TAK BAHANA THA

SARE ZAMANE KE KHAT MILTEY HE ROJ MUJE
KAMBHAKT EK USKA HI KHAT KABHI NA ANA THA.....
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«Reply #8 on: August 31, 2010, 06:41:29 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on August 30, 2010, 08:23:52 AM


YE RUSWAYI YE JAGDA TO EK BAHANA THA
USSAY TO YOO BHI MUJE CHOOR JANA THA

HUM USKE GHAR KO APNA SAMAJTE RAHE
LEKIN USKA TO HAR MOR PAR ASHIYANA THA

YE USKA DOSH NAHI WO MAJBOOR THI SHAYAD
KE USKI FITRAT ME HI DIL DUKHANA THA

MUJKO TALAB THI FAQAT USKI CHAHAT KI
OUR USKI CHAHAT HI SARA ZAMANA THA

USKI CHAHAT ME HUMNE LAHU TAK BAHA DIYA
PAR USE NAMANJUUR EK ASHK TAK BAHANA THA

SARE ZAMANE KE KHAT MILTEY HE ROJ MUJE
KAMBHAKT EK USKA HI KHAT KABHI NA ANA THA.....





BAHUT ACHCHA TAKLEEF KO BAYAAN KIYA HAI MATRIX JI AAPNE
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2011, 03:40:00 PM »
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thx u all for liking my effort..........thx a lot
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