*Yu Bhi Jane Ki Zid Na Karo*

by Roja on February 23, 2008, 02:54:32 AM
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Yu bhi jane ki zid na karo jaan-e-mann
Dekh to lo yu hi kaisi shakl-e-chaman

Baad muddat ke aaye ho teher zara
Rok bhi lo sanam aaj apne yeh kadam

Minnate aur kitni mai karti hu
Be-sabab rootna ab to choro sanam

Kitne armaan dil me sulagne lage
Khaak ker de na mujh ko kahi ye jalan

Mast mausam bhi hai aur dastoor bhi
Ab laga lo gale tum ko meri kasam

Noor hi noor hai jis taraf dekh lo
Aur sajde mein hai taaron ki anjuman

Kaun jane "Roja" ki ho maut kab
Kya pata ho dubara hamara milan
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2008, 02:57:08 AM »
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Waah ! bohot khoob Roja ....
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Pankhuri2
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2008, 02:59:14 AM »
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wowow bahoot khoob roja
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zakhmola
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2008, 09:10:11 AM »
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Har Baar Teri Zid
meri jaan leiti hai
tu jab bhi jaan leiti hai
main tab he jaan deita hun...
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2008, 10:24:31 AM »
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roji ji bahoot khoob Usual Smile



Baadal
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2008, 10:50:56 AM »
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Yu bhi jane ki zid na karo jaan-e-mann
Dekh to lo yu hi kaisi shakl-e-chaman

Baad muddat ke aaye ho teher zara
Rok bhi lo sanam aaj apne yeh kadam

Minnate aur kitni mai karti hu
Be-sabab rootna ab to choro sanam

Kitne armaan dil me sulagne lage
Khaak ker de na mujh ko kahi ye jalan

Mast mausam bhi hai aur dastoor bhi
Ab laga lo gale tum ko meri kasam

Noor hi noor hai jis taraf dekh lo
Aur sajde mein hai taaron ki anjuman

Kaun jane "Roja" ki ho maut kab
Kya pata ho dubara hamara milan


wow di bahot acha likhi ho ...
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2008, 01:59:57 PM »
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Bohat acha likha hai Roja .. Usual Smile
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aankhain
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«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2008, 03:28:55 PM »
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kya bat ha . Usual Smile bohat acha likha ap ny. Usual Smile
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riyaz106
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«Reply #8 on: January 06, 2010, 03:49:57 AM »
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Bahut achhi ghazal hai Roja Ji. Bas zara behr par bhi dhyan dene zarurat hai.

Baad muddat ke aaye ho teher zara
Rok bhi lo sanam aaj apne yeh kadam
Kaun jane "Roja" ki ho maut kab
Kya pata ho dubara hamara milan

In shers ko agar is tarah kar len shayad behtar lage:

Baad muddat ke aaye ho thehro zara
Rok bhi lo sanam aaj apne kadam
Kisko maloom kab "Roja" ki maut ho
Kya pata ho na ho phir hamara milan

Thanks
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