Yuhn Humse................

by palkhi on March 29, 2008, 12:41:43 AM
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Yuhn Humse Nazrai Milla Kai Tuhne Choorayi Kayun,
Yuhn Ankein Jhook Kai Tuhne Iss Dil Mein Aagh Lagai Kayun,
Aagh Laga Kai Tuh Isse Bhoojanai Na Aayi Kayun,
Tujko Kaya Paatha Kai Teri Woh Sharaam Se Jhukthi Palkein Kis Kadar GHayal Kar Gayi Mujko,
Humko Tho Teri Ek Hi Jhalaak Nai Tera Deewana Bana Diya,
Kahin Teri Doosri Jhalaak Humko Maar Hi Na Deh.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 29, 2008, 01:39:51 AM »
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nice palkhi
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«Reply #2 on: March 29, 2008, 06:15:20 AM »
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bahut badhiya Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2008, 05:21:27 PM »
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Teinku Sarthika nd Mehhekkk!! :-D
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«Reply #4 on: March 30, 2008, 03:13:01 AM »
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Palki ji is khoobsoorat bazm maiN maiN aapka sawagat kerta hooN...our khushaamdiid kehte hue umeed kerta hooN ki aapka izafa yahaaN hammare liye soodmand saabit hoga....our yakeenana aapke funn se yahaaN ki rounaq badegi....

Aapki ye tehreer bahoot hi oomda likhi hai...aise hi likhte rahiye....

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Yuhn Humse Nazrai Milla Kai Tuhne Choorayi Kayun,
Yuhn Ankein Jhook Kai Tuhne Iss Dil Mein Aagh Lagai Kayun,
Aagh Laga Kai Tuh Isse Bhoojanai Na Aayi Kayun,
Tujko Kaya Paatha Kai Teri Woh Sharaam Se Jhukthi Palkein Kis Kadar GHayal Kar Gayi Mujko,
Humko Tho Teri Ek Hi Jhalaak Nai Tera Deewana Bana Diya,
Kahin Teri Doosri Jhalaak Humko Maar Hi Na Deh.........



Jab yahaaN aake tumne milna nahi tha toh yahaN aayii kyuiN
Jab aa hi gayi,milne se pehle,dosti ki baat failaayii kyuiN
Tumeh jaane kyuiN chinta hai apne sharam-saar palkoN ki ab
Aag jo lagi thi diloN maiN be-shaq, phir bhujhane ayii kyuiN.

Harash
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«Reply #5 on: March 30, 2008, 05:53:06 PM »
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Quote from: Harash Mahajan on March 30, 2008, 03:13:01 AM
Palki ji is khoobsoorat bazm maiN maiN aapka sawagat kerta hooN...our khushaamdiid kehte hue umeed kerta hooN ki aapka izafa yahaaN hammare liye soodmand saabit hoga....our yakeenana aapke funn se yahaaN ki rounaq badegi....

Aapki ye tehreer bahoot hi oomda likhi hai...aise hi likhte rahiye....

Palki wrote:-

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Yuhn Humse Nazrai Milla Kai Tuhne Choorayi Kayun,
Yuhn Ankein Jhook Kai Tuhne Iss Dil Mein Aagh Lagai Kayun,
Aagh Laga Kai Tuh Isse Bhoojanai Na Aayi Kayun,
Tujko Kaya Paatha Kai Teri Woh Sharaam Se Jhukthi Palkein Kis Kadar GHayal Kar Gayi Mujko,
Humko Tho Teri Ek Hi Jhalaak Nai Tera Deewana Bana Diya,
Kahin Teri Doosri Jhalaak Humko Maar Hi Na Deh.........



Jab yahaaN aake tumne milna nahi tha toh yahaN aayii kyuiN
Jab aa hi gayi,milne se pehle,dosti ki baat failaayii kyuiN
Tumeh jaane kyuiN chinta hai apne sharam-saar palkoN ki ab
Aag jo lagi thi diloN maiN be-shaq, phir bhujhane ayii kyuiN.

Harash


   Teinku Harash Bhai...nice reply!! :-D

Hum Tho Kissi Or Ki Baraat Mein Dholi Mein Bait Kai Ayai, Tho Tujhe Batha The Kaise??.....
Humari Palkhon Pai Tho Kissi Or Ka Raaj Hai, Hum Tho Bas Ek Khalona Hai.....
Hum Tho Kissi Or Ki Imanaath Hai, Tho Terai Dil Ki Aagh Kaise Bhoojao??....
Hum Tho Abb Bas Naam Ka Hi Jee Rahein Hai, Humme Tho Kabka Uss Dewanai Ne Maar Diya Or Usse Patha Bhi Na Chala.....

     .......Pari..... tongue3
   
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2008, 06:29:19 AM »
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Bohat acha likha hai palu..
Harash ji bohat acha jawab diya hai ..Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 01, 2008, 07:00:49 AM »
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Shukriya honey
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«Reply #9 on: April 01, 2008, 07:02:56 AM »
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Very Beautifully Written Palkhi and
A Lovely Reply Harsh...
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«Reply #10 on: April 01, 2008, 07:40:43 AM »
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Thanks Mahiyaa
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2008, 12:34:55 AM »
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Teinku Talat Appi nd Gulab Di!! tongue3 Grin
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