YuiN na Ulzhi Meri ZulfoN se O sanam

by harashmahajan on August 05, 2007, 08:10:32 AM
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YuiN na Ulzho meri ZulfoN se O sanam, Pech-o-kham inke pal maiN sulazh jayeiNge,
Samjhoge tum kabhi meri dhadken ko jab, khud-b-khud dil se dil bhi ulazh jayeiNge.


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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2007, 09:36:52 AM »
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abhi tak toh wah !
magar ..
Pech-o-kham ka matlab batayen ?

Samajh na aya isliye pooch liya.
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2007, 10:10:26 AM »
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nice............
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2007, 11:01:11 AM »
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sahiba ji ...aapka mere is thred maiN bahoot bahoot swagat hai...aapke qustion ka mool roop se meri Ghazal ki zunbaaN se hai...our Ghazalki ZubaaN hamesha metaphoric hi hoti hai...our ye pech-o-kham ...toh ek aam sa lafz hai....ki latoN ki uljhan direct meaning kaheiN toh lekin yahaan metaphiric hai..kinazreiN aaki ZulfoN maiN hi ulajh gayieN........aage aap khud samajhdaar haiN...

Lekin kabhibhi Ghazal kosamjhaya nahi ja sakta...
ise khud dil maiN hi utarna hota...


Umeed hai ap is naacheez ki explaination samajh gaye honge..


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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2007, 11:11:45 AM »
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Good 1 Harash ji..

Ab khushbu chaman ki kya kijiyega
Woh zulphein hawa main udaye huye hai

Chaman ne bhi dekha, hikarat se unhe
Sajdaj ke itna, wo aaye huye hai

Jism aisa ki bas na poocho "Harash"
Jaise dhood main lahoo, milaye huye hai..!!

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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2007, 11:18:26 AM »
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nice............



Shukriya


Harash
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2007, 06:45:11 PM »
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Roja G
kya khoob likha hai apne.

Harash G
pech-o-Kham samajh aa gaya matlab ki balo ki uljhan
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2007, 06:44:58 AM »
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harsh its a gud one ..
keep writing ... hope to read more from u

best wishes
Divya
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2007, 05:42:21 PM »
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harsh its a gud one ..
keep writing ... hope to read more from u

best wishes
Divya



Shukriya Divya ji.....
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2007, 05:47:38 PM »
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Jab DEkhta hooN sochta hooN dum sa Ghut.ta hai
Ye mere apne haiN apnoN se der sa lagta hai
Dushman hoNge, dushmani maiN kareNge be-shaq,
Na jaane apnoN se dushmani ka der sa kyuiN lagta hai.


Harash
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2007, 12:48:37 AM »
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Jab DEkhta hooN sochta hooN dum sa Ghut.ta hai
Ye mere apne haiN apnoN se der sa lagta hai
Dushman hoNge, dushmani maiN kareNge be-shaq,
Na jaane apnoN se dushmani ka der sa kyuiN lagta hai.


Harash


Nice 1

Apnon se dushmani kaise?
Apne to apne hote hai, paraya kyu samjhe?
Pyar to pyar hota hai,
Apna paraya dekhkar pyar hota nahi..
Sambal apne aapko "Harash"
Bahut farak hota hai Apne aur Paraye main..
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2007, 02:09:53 AM »
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Mila hooN khaak meiN aksar ye rooh bhi kaanp jaati hai,
Tanha chhorh Tu GairoN maiN yuiN hi jab muskraati hai


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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2007, 02:22:37 AM »
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Meri aahon main dham na tha, per aisa nahi sanam
Ki tera gam na tha....!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2007, 04:23:06 PM »
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Na chhero mere ZakhmoN ko,mera hai inse yaraana,
Ye mere dard ke sahil, GiraaN keemat nageene se.


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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2007, 05:08:16 PM »
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Bahut aasan hai "Harash", tokkar marna kisii ko

Bada dushwar hai lekin, gir jaye to utana...

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