ZARRAA - nazm : mohabbat ke 3 raNg

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dostoN...aadaab...is baar ek alag koshish ... nazm hai, mohabbat ki, mukhtasar si ...


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kaha tha maaNg teri taaroN se saja deNge
kaha tha sar pe tere aasmaaN udha deNge
agar falak na ye ut'rega tere aaNgan meiN
zameeN se arsh talak rahguzar bana deNge

(arsh = sky, rahguzar = road)


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zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kahaaN hua karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta use kiya karti

(jabeen = forehead, yakta = unique)


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wafa meiN ahed-e-wafa to zaroor ho jaata
tawakko jis se magar rak’kho door ho jaata
gunaah-gaar naheeN kaun “zarraa” ulfat meiN
bhala hi karne ko nik'lo kasoor ho jaata

(tawakko = expectations)


- ZARRAA

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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2013, 01:27:55 AM »
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Ek bahut achhi koshish hai zarraa sahab..bahut khoob..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2013, 01:28:18 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut hi khoobsoorat nazm hai, dili daad qubool kareiN.
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2013, 01:34:39 AM »
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hmmmmmmmmm interesting, zarra saaheb ye naya rang kaun sa hai...?? par jo bhi ho, hai bada gaadha aur jabardast, apaki ye kosish bahut pasand aayi, umeed karta huN yuNhi aage bhi aapke kalam ke aur bhi rang dekhne ko mileNge hume...
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2013, 01:38:46 AM »
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waahhhhhh zarraa ji bade din baad aapko padha lekin sach maza aagaya ye aapki nazm padhkar ... behad dilchasp aur mahobbat se sarabor rahi aapki peshkash.... yunhi mehfil ki ronak bane rahiye.....
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2013, 03:36:20 AM »
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dostoN...aadaab...is baar ek alag koshish ... nazm hai, mohabbat ki, mukhtasar si ...


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kaha tha maaNg teri taaroN se saja deNge
kaha tha sar pe tere aasmaaN udha deNge
agar falak na ye ut'rega tere aaNgan meiN
zameeN se arsh talak rahguzar bana deNge

(arsh = sky, rahguzar = road)


2
zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kahaaN hua karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta use kiya karti

(jabeen = forehead, yakta = unique)


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wafa meiN ahed-e-wafa to zaroor ho jaata
tawakko jis se magar rak’kho door ho jaata
gunaah-gaar naheeN kaun “zarraa” ulfat meiN
bhala hi karne ko nik'lo kasoor ho jaata

(tawakko = expectations)


- ZARRAA




wah wah wah......!
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Ek bahut achhi koshish hai zarraa sahab..bahut khoob..happy9

Nashwani ji, pasand karne ka shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2013, 10:50:20 AM »
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waah waah aapkee mehnat kaamyaab ho
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2013, 11:27:22 AM »
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waah waah waah, bahut hi khoobsoorat nazm hai, dili daad qubool kareiN.


Iftakahar ji .... Is zarranawazee ka shukriya mere dost
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2013, 12:14:17 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmm interesting, zarra saaheb ye naya rang kaun sa hai...?? par jo bhi ho, hai bada gaadha aur jabardast, apaki ye kosish bahut pasand aayi, umeed karta huN yuNhi aage bhi aapke kalam ke aur bhi rang dekhne ko mileNge hume...
Haan bhai ... Waqt aur umr ke saath saath sabhi rangon se dosti bana kar rakhni chaahiye, kyunki jaise Ghalib ka misra hai " aata hai abhi dekhiye kya kya mere aage" ... :)Bhai phir se itni mohabbat se padhne ka aur dariyadilee se daad dene ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Taish bhai
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mohabbat se bhari bahut hi khoobsurat nazm pesh ki hai aapne zarraa ji. Is khoobsurat kalaam par hamari hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega.
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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2013, 12:18:53 PM »
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dostoN...aadaab...is baar ek alag koshish ... nazm hai, mohabbat ki, mukhtasar si ...


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kaha tha maaNg teri taaroN se saja deNge
kaha tha sar pe tere aasmaaN udha deNge
agar falak na ye ut'rega tere aaNgan meiN
zameeN se arsh talak rahguzar bana deNge

(arsh = sky, rahguzar = road)


2
zabaan ishq ke muNh meiN kahaaN hua karti
bas ik jabeen hi hoti hai jo jhuka karti
khata bhi yaar ki lagti hai jaise shokh ada
kami bhi yaar ki yakta use kiya karti

(jabeen = forehead, yakta = unique)


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wafa meiN ahed-e-wafa to zaroor ho jaata
tawakko jis se magar rak’kho door ho jaata
gunaah-gaar naheeN kaun “zarraa” ulfat meiN
bhala hi karne ko nik'lo kasoor ho jaata

(tawakko = expectations)


- ZARRAA




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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2013, 02:11:29 PM »
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waahhhhhh zarraa ji bade din baad aapko padha lekin sach maza aagaya ye aapki nazm padhkar ... behad dilchasp aur mahobbat se sarabor rahi aapki peshkash.... yunhi mehfil ki ronak bane rahiye.....

Kasak ji ... Achchha laga apka reply dekh kar ... Ji inaayat apne is nazm ko pasand karne ki ... Shukriya
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WAAH ZARAA JI
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wah wah wah......!


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