zinda rah paana hai mushkil

by Pooja on April 06, 2009, 04:39:28 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 07, 2009, 08:36:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 04:39:28 PM
Dil ke haal batana hai mushkil
ab tujhse door rah paana hai mushkil

chalte chalte lo mil he gaye hum tum
kaise beeta tujh bin safar, yah haal sunana hai mushkil

hans do jo tum, to khil jaaye jeevan yah mera
teri udaasi ko smbhaal paana hai mushkil

Liya hai hatho main hath, to chalna umar bhar sung sung
Is baar tujhse bichar kar, zinda rah paana hai mushkil



wah POOJA, wah,

jasbir singh
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«Reply #16 on: April 07, 2009, 08:37:04 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 06, 2009, 04:55:31 PM
wah wah pooja... bohaat khoob.. jaldi se reply likhi hai... shayad apko pasand aaye...
dil ki baat aaj jo tere inn lubho pe aayi hai
badi mud'dat se yeh gadi mere naseeb mein aayi hai

roshan hua hai teri dhadkan sun ke mera amavas
iss qadar chandni tere naino se maine payi hai

shadon se tera yu andaz-e-tadap sunana zalim
ek umang si payar ki mere dil mein uth aayi hai

betab ho raha hai "arjun" tera pard ke fasana
haye yeh kaisi agan tumne abhi abhi jalai hai




wah Arjun, bahut khoob reply dia,

jasbir singh
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«Reply #17 on: April 07, 2009, 08:38:18 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 05:04:49 PM
wow too good Arjun, app bahoot acha likhte hai.. pahle bhi apko parra hai...Nice to see you back...

dil ke baat juban per badi mushkil se aai hai
na jaane kis tarah armaano ne li agraai hai

Teri roshani se hai mera jahan Roshan
kyun itani se baat teri samjh nahi aai hai

Teri her ek umang per, yah dil qurbaan
tere andaz-e-bayan ne ek halchal muchai hai

Betabi per teri, muskura utha yah dil mera
Pooja ki dhadkane bhi, bekaabu ho aai hai

wah wah, bahut khoob mehfil sajayi hai

jasbir singh
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«Reply #18 on: April 07, 2009, 03:59:13 PM »
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thanks celmira, angel, roy, roja, sajid and jasbir ji

apka shukria jo apne mera likha pasand kiya..

Janasheen ji... aapko acha bura jo mann mein aata woh comment dete.. par sirf ek shayar ki poem par comment karna kayunki woh apki didi hai. mujhe acha nahi laga.. mafi chahunga aaise behavior se... lekin new members ko supprt karna chahiye.. ignore nahi
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«Reply #19 on: April 08, 2009, 04:49:53 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 07, 2009, 03:59:13 PM
thanks celmira, angel, roy, roja, sajid and jasbir ji

apka shukria jo apne mera likha pasand kiya..

Janasheen ji... aapko acha bura jo mann mein aata woh comment dete.. par sirf ek shayar ki poem par comment karna kayunki woh apki didi hai. mujhe acha nahi laga.. mafi chahunga aaise behavior se... lekin new members ko supprt karna chahiye.. ignore nahi

Arey Arjun Dil chota nahi karte, Meri bas yeh guzarish hain ke tum sirf aur sirf apni khushi ke liye likho. And ignore the fact kaun dad deta hain kaun nahi deta hain, u just enjoy ur own work.

Aur waise bhi jiski post thi usne to tumhe dad di aur pehli dad to sab unhe hi dege na jiski post hain. Kabhi kabhi to kisi thread me itne kalam ho jate hain ke samajh me bhi nahi aata ke kisne kaha likha hain.

Aur logho ko dad dene me unka encouragement karne me Azeem to sabse aage rehta hain. Uske bare me aisa kehna bhi theek nahi, he is always there for everyone. Agar tumhari post hoti aur agar tumhara kalam kabile tareef hota to first 5 tareef karne walo me Azeem definately hota.

Ab yeh sab batein chodo and keep up the good work........

Chalo isi baat pe koi achcha sa sher sunao.......
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«Reply #20 on: April 08, 2009, 04:56:01 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 04:39:28 PM
Dil ke haal batana hai mushkil
ab tujhse door rah paana hai mushkil

chalte chalte lo mil he gaye hum tum
kaise beeta tujh bin safar, yah haal sunana hai mushkil

hans do jo tum, to khil jaaye jeevan yah mera
teri udaasi ko smbhaal paana hai mushkil

Liya hai hatho main hath, to chalna umar bhar sung sung
Is baar tujhse bichar kar, zinda rah paana hai mushkil


Quote from: Arjun_ on April 06, 2009, 04:55:31 PM
wah wah pooja... bohaat khoob.. jaldi se reply likhi hai... shayad apko pasand aaye...
dil ki baat aaj jo tere inn lubho pe aayi hai
badi mud'dat se yeh gadi mere naseeb mein aayi hai

roshan hua hai teri dhadkan sun ke mera amavas
iss qadar chandni tere naino se maine payi hai

shadon se tera yu andaz-e-tadap sunana zalim
ek umang si payar ki mere dil mein uth aayi hai

betab ho raha hai "arjun" tera pard ke fasana
haye yeh kaisi agan tumne abhi abhi jalai hai




Bahut khoob Pooja Ji N Arjun Ji
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«Reply #21 on: April 08, 2009, 03:02:19 PM »
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shukaria Rajesh ji and Jas ji~~
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«Reply #22 on: April 13, 2009, 11:55:38 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 07, 2009, 03:59:13 PM
thanks celmira, angel, roy, roja, sajid and jasbir ji

apka shukria jo apne mera likha pasand kiya..

Janasheen ji... aapko acha bura jo mann mein aata woh comment dete.. par sirf ek shayar ki poem par comment karna kayunki woh apki didi hai. mujhe acha nahi laga.. mafi chahunga aaise behavior se... lekin new members ko supprt karna chahiye.. ignore nahi



Hello Arjun ji, U r writing decent poetry but writing such comments was unfortunate coz I believe here on Yoindia that all participants are write as a team member on Yo. Please carry on your good writing on Yo.
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«Reply #23 on: April 13, 2009, 12:22:14 PM »
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POOJA JI & ARJUN Mere Dost..... Bahut Hi Khubsoorat Alfaaz Likhe hain aap Dono ne..!!yunhi aap Dono Likhte Rahiye.. Taki Hum is Jugalbandi ka Lutf Le Saken.... Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #24 on: April 22, 2009, 04:33:01 AM »
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Thanks MANN ji, waise apki kalam ko kaya hua hai....
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«Reply #25 on: April 23, 2009, 06:27:01 AM »
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Na jane Aapki Shikaayaten Kab Khatam Hongi..!! Khuda Khair Kare.. Hahahahaha  Winking Winking


Na Pooch Ke Meri Qalam Ko, Kya hua E-Sanam,
Bas Teri hi Tamanna Me Deewani Hui Jati Hai..

Jab Likhne Baith-ta Hoon, Haal-e-Dil Apna,
Teri TAsveer Kagaz Pe, Khud-b-khud Ban Jati hai..!!!


Ab Aap Hi Bataaiye Pooja Ji.. Aise Haalaat me Insaan Kya kare..?? icon_scratch icon_scratch


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #26 on: April 23, 2009, 07:34:16 AM »
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Quote from: Arjun_ on April 07, 2009, 03:59:13 PM
thanks celmira, angel, roy, roja, sajid and jasbir ji

apka shukria jo apne mera likha pasand kiya..

Janasheen ji... aapko acha bura jo mann mein aata woh comment dete.. par sirf ek shayar ki poem par comment karna kayunki woh apki didi hai. mujhe acha nahi laga.. mafi chahunga aaise behavior se... lekin new members ko supprt karna chahiye.. ignore nahi




Arjun Mere Dost Mere Bhai, Mujhe Maaf kardo yaar,. Actually Na Maine Sirf pehli Post Par hi Nazar daali, Jaise Ke Sajid Bhai ne Kaha Hai Tumhe, Maine To Tumhaare post par nazar nahi Daali Ye Meri Galti hui,.

Lekin Ab Tumhaare Comments ke Baad Jo Maine Tumhaari Shayari Ko Padha to Mujhe Sachchi Bohat Avchcha Laga, ke Hamare Naye Members Bhi, Yoindia Ki Pehchaan Banege, Yunhi Likhte Rehna Arjun Bhai,. May Allah Bless You,.
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«Reply #27 on: April 23, 2009, 07:35:44 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 23, 2009, 06:27:01 AM
Na jane Aapki Shikaayaten Kab Khatam Hongi..!! Khuda Khair Kare.. Hahahahaha  Winking Winking


Na Pooch Ke Meri Qalam Ko, Kya hua E-Sanam,
Bas Teri hi Tamanna Me Deewani Hui Jati Hai..

Jab Likhne Baith-ta Hoon, Haal-e-Dil Apna,
Teri TAsveer Kagaz Pe, Khud-b-khud Ban Jati hai..!!!


Ab Aap Hi Bataaiye Pooja Ji.. Aise Haalaat me Insaan Kya kare..?? icon_scratch icon_scratch


**~** Mann **~**

Waah maan Bhai Kya Khoob Kaha Hai,.
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«Reply #28 on: April 23, 2009, 02:03:50 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 23, 2009, 06:27:01 AM
Na jane Aapki Shikaayaten Kab Khatam Hongi..!! Khuda Khair Kare.. Hahahahaha  Winking Winking


Na Pooch Ke Meri Qalam Ko, Kya hua E-Sanam,
Bas Teri hi Tamanna Me Deewani Hui Jati Hai..

Jab Likhne Baith-ta Hoon, Haal-e-Dil Apna,
Teri TAsveer Kagaz Pe, Khud-b-khud Ban Jati hai..!!!


Ab Aap Hi Bataaiye Pooja Ji.. Aise Haalaat me Insaan Kya kare..?? icon_scratch icon_scratch


**~** Mann **~**

Kasam khuda ki app sa koi ashiq na ho
roti ki jagah meri tasveer mujhe khilaoge

jab bhi jaoge karne koi kaam baher
lagta hai mera he naam gungunaoge....


Sorry Vicky ji... pata hai yah apki lines ka jawab nahi hai.... magar ajj kal kuch ka kuch likha ja raha hai.... filhaal yahi lines aai man mai .... jalad he kuch aor likhne ki koshish karugi agar likh saki,...
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«Reply #29 on: April 23, 2009, 05:25:14 PM »
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Shukriya Azeem Bhai...... Usual Smile Usual Smile

Aur Pooja Ji.. aap Har Baar Accha likhti Hain...... Aur is baaar Bhi Bahut accha likha Hai.. Sorry wali kaunsi baat hai isme? mujhe to yeh Baat samajh nahi aai..!!


Tera Naam meri Zubaan Pe, Thirakta Rahata Hai,
Neend Me Aksar Labon Ko Mere Choomta Rahata Hai..

Yeh Aur Baat Hai Ki Tujhe Yakin Nahi Mohabbat Ka,
Par Tere Naam se Hi Dharkano Ka Yeh Silsila Chalta hai..!!


**~** Mann **~**
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