zinda rah paana hai mushkil

by Pooja on April 06, 2009, 04:39:28 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 21, 2009, 08:19:20 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on November 21, 2009, 08:11:47 AM
YOU R MOST WELCOME MANN JI,WAISE KAFI DINO SE AAPNE KUCH LIKHA NAHI. sad11

Lijiye Madhu Ji aapki Shikayat Door Kar di.. Usual Smile


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #46 on: November 21, 2009, 08:34:23 AM »
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OOYE MANN JI.kuch likha hi nahi aur kahete ho shikayat dhoor kardi.. NaNaNa
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«Reply #47 on: November 21, 2009, 08:39:12 AM »
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Oho Madhu Ji Peeche Dekho Na.. Dekha bhi Nahi aapne to..!! tongue3


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #48 on: November 21, 2009, 08:48:27 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Mann ji,lovely n romantic creation excellent.great work ,keep it up. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Usual Smile
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«Reply #49 on: November 21, 2009, 09:02:55 AM »
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Khayal o tasavvur ki udaan unchi hai  magar misrey behr(meter) mein nahi hai. Koshish karein mushkil nahi hai.
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«Reply #50 on: November 27, 2009, 08:36:41 PM »
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Quote from: Mann on November 21, 2009, 08:17:43 AM
Shukra hai Jawab to aaya.. aur Bhi Itna Khubsoorat.. Bahut Khoob Likha hai pooja ji..!! Applause Applause


Hum Teri Hi Yaadon Me, Kuch Is Tarah So Jate Hain,
Khwaab-o-Khayaalon Me Bhi Aapke Hi Ho Jate Hain...

Phir Kaise Na Karen Hum Ishq Me Mar Mitne Ki Baat,
Neend Toot-te Hi Baahon Se Teri Alag Jo Ho Jate Hain..!!



**~** Mann **~**

Mann ji punjabi main kahte hai.. Mar jawan Gurr kha ke.... magar Yoindia main likhna padega.. mar jawa twadi shayri parr ke.. :p too good...

Juda hote hai khawab se, khayalo se nahi
khuli ankhon main bhi ab to app he baste ho

bahoot chaha ki na chale tere raste per hum
magar chale jidhar bhi, ussi raste per bas ab app he app dikhte ho
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«Reply #51 on: November 30, 2009, 04:26:46 AM »
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Pooja Ji... Bahut Khoob Likha Hain Aapne... Aur Namaste...
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«Reply #52 on: December 06, 2009, 04:51:55 PM »
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Virah aur milan ko darshati aapki ye najm kabile tarriff hai Pooja-di... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Padh k ye najm aapki chup rehna hai mushkil
Par kuchh likh paana tou aur bhi hai mushkil

Mila he nahi ab tak koi saathi kaisi hai ye mushkil
Kab bichhd ke, kab fir milenge ye kehna hai mushkil

Quote from: Pooja on April 06, 2009, 04:39:28 PM
Dil ke haal batana hai mushkil
ab tujhse door rah paana hai mushkil

chalte chalte lo mil he gaye hum tum
kaise beeta tujh bin safar, yah haal sunana hai mushkil

hans do jo tum, to khil jaaye jeevan yah mera
teri udaasi ko smbhaal paana hai mushkil

Liya hai hatho main hath, to chalna umar bhar sung sung
Is baar tujhse bichar kar, zinda rah paana hai mushkil
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«Reply #53 on: December 08, 2009, 06:38:08 PM »
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Quote from: mrkotians on November 30, 2009, 04:26:46 AM
Pooja Ji... Bahut Khoob Likha Hain Aapne... Aur Namaste...

bahoot bahoot shukaria mrkotians  ji
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«Reply #54 on: December 08, 2009, 06:40:22 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 06, 2009, 04:51:55 PM
Virah aur milan ko darshati aapki ye najm kabile tarriff hai Pooja-di... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause

Padh k ye najm aapki chup rehna hai mushkil
Par kuchh likh paana tou aur bhi hai mushkil

Mila he nahi ab tak koi saathi kaisi hai ye mushkil
Kab bichhd ke, kab fir milenge ye kehna hai mushkil


Koyal,
 app shayad mere juda hone ka arth alag roop se le gai hai... jab nind khulati hai to khwab khatam ho jaate hai aor us khawab mai anna wala khwabo se hat jaata hai.. maine yah Khumar-e-Ishaq mai he likha hai... payar se bhara hua...

magar nind ke khulne aor nind mai ane wale khwab ke alag ho jaane ka koi asar nahi hai... kyun ki jis se pyar hai wo to khuli ankh se bhi charo taraf najar atta hai !!

Hope ab app is kavita ki line ka arth samjh gai hogi...

jab tak koi na mile.. tab tak khayalo ka Rajkumar kaisa rahega  NaNaNa
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«Reply #55 on: December 08, 2009, 07:18:08 PM »
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Pooja-di aap ka bahoot bahoot aabhaar....
Main tou kaavya manch ki nayi-nayi bahoot kachhi khiladi hu.....
Abhi tak tou main "Khumar-e-Ishq" aur "Judayee-e-Ishq" mai farq he nahi samajh payee hu....Likhte waqt ye khayaal he nahi rehta ki kalpana mai likh rahi hu ya hakikat bayaan kar rahi hu....bas thoda rhym ho jaaye yahi khayaal rehta hai...
Sach poochho tou....mujhe Gazal,Najhm aur kavita sab ek he lagte hain...
Kitni kam knowledge hai mujhe soch kar dukh hota hai....
Ab koshish karungi..kuchh seekh saku....Tahe dil se aapka dhanaywaad Pooja-di.

Ek baat puchhti hu agar ye same lines "Khumar" mai nahi likhi hoti tou kya maine jo arth lagaya wo sahi hai..?

Khayalo ka Rajkumar Dene k liye aapko ek jadoo ki Jhappi.... Winking Winking Winking Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle

Quote from: Pooja on December 08, 2009, 06:40:22 PM
Koyal,
 app shayad mere juda hone ka arth alag roop se le gai hai... jab nind khulati hai to khwab khatam ho jaate hai aor us khawab mai anna wala khwabo se hat jaata hai.. maine yah Khumar-e-Ishaq mai he likha hai... payar se bhara hua...

magar nind ke khulne aor nind mai ane wale khwab ke alag ho jaane ka koi asar nahi hai... kyun ki jis se pyar hai wo to khuli ankh se bhi charo taraf najar atta hai !!

Hope ab app is kavita ki line ka arth samjh gai hogi...

jab tak koi na mile.. tab tak khayalo ka Rajkumar kaisa rahega  NaNaNa
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«Reply #56 on: December 20, 2009, 05:40:44 PM »
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koyal... Ansoo khumar mai ayye to pyar se bhara hua hai... wo he ansoo Judai mai ayye to juda hone ke dard se bhara hoga.... wo he ansoo dard mai ayye to kai tarah ke dard bhare arth ho sakte hai....

shayad apko apke sawal ka jawab mil jaaye ab...

jaadu ki jhappi ke liye bahoot bahoot shukaria... I really need this jappy these days....

hugs!!!
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«Reply #57 on: December 20, 2009, 08:18:50 PM »
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ek dam tou nahi par kuchh kuchh samajh rahi hu Pooja-di....
thanks alot for explaining in detail....Esi baat par ek aur Jadoo ki jhappy di......

Quote from: Pooja on December 20, 2009, 05:40:44 PM
koyal... Ansoo khumar mai ayye to pyar se bhara hua hai... wo he ansoo Judai mai ayye to juda hone ke dard se bhara hoga.... wo he ansoo dard mai ayye to kai tarah ke dard bhare arth ho sakte hai....

shayad apko apke sawal ka jawab mil jaaye ab...

jaadu ki jhappi ke liye bahoot bahoot shukaria... I really need this jappy these days....

hugs!!!
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