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Mere bina ae mere habib kaho tum
ki apni zindagi kaise bitaoge...
Din ko tanha baith jaaoge aur
raat ko neend se bhi jaag jaaoge
Jab koi poonchega tumhari tanhaai ka sabab
tab kya tum bataoge aur kya chupaoge...
Nam hongi yeh palkein tumhari
jab bhi khul ke muskuraoge...
Meri yaadein bechain karengi tumhe
jab bhi baarish mein bheeg jaaoge
Zara mehsoos karke to dekho tum
har jagah mera wajood paaoge...
Mere bina ae mere habib kaho tum
ki apni zindagi kaise bitaoge...
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 10:42:04 AM » |
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Bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai kasish Ji. Ek sher(NM)arz hai
Moti Hon To Apne Daman Mein Piro Lo
Ansu Hon To Palkon Se Gira Kyun Nahi Detey
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2010, 10:54:13 AM » |
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Shukriya Riyaz Sahab
kamaal likha hai aapne bhi...
kuch arz hai aapke likhe sher par
zara gaur kijiyega
Yeh aansu bhi mujhe itne azeez hain
kam nahin hai motiyon se wajood bhi inka
Saugat yeh tumhari chahat ke hain
thikaana hai meri nazar inka
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2010, 10:58:05 AM » |
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Shukriya Riyaz Sahab
kamaal likha hai aapne bhi...
kuch arz hai aapke likhe sher par
zara gaur kijiyega
Yeh aansu bhi mujhe itne azeez hain
kam nahin hai motiyon se wajood bhi inka
Saugat yeh tumhari chahat ke hain
thikaana hai meri nazar inka
Wah wah Kashish Ji aapne to kamaal ki poetry create ki hai. Zaroor aap ek din badi shayara banengi. |
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kashish ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2010, 12:01:34 PM » |
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bohat Qoob likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2010, 12:39:18 PM » |
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Waah bahoot khoob Kashish !
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2010, 12:56:26 PM » |
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wah! kashish ji boho accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2010, 02:51:04 PM » |
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Bahut Khub Kashish JI
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2010, 03:30:43 PM » |
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wah wah kyakhoob likha hai aap logon ne
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2010, 06:02:55 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2010, 06:43:35 AM » |
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KYA BAAT HAI KASHIH JI....
MERE BIN ZINDAGI KAISE JEE BITAOGE....
IK PAL TOH NAHIN RAHE PAAYE HO MERE BIN
YEH TOH BATAO..
MERE BIN ZINDAGI KAISE JEE BITAOGE..
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2010, 10:24:58 AM » |
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waah waah bahot khoob likha hai aapne Kashish ji
awesome
Shukriya kaash ji |
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2010, 10:28:04 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Likha Hai Gudiya Rani
ALLAH Pak Tumhe Har Ranjo Gahm Se Mehfuz Rakhe Ameen
Khush Raho
bahut bahut shukriya Majid Bhai  |
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