Zindagi Kho Gai

by Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 07:12:23 AM
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             GHAZAL
Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2012, 07:49:32 AM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 07:12:23 AM
             GHAZAL

Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2012, 10:46:44 AM »
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Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai Applause Applause hajaro daad is khayaal par vaah

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai Applause Applause

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai Applause Applause bahut umda

Riyaz 'Ashna'
bahut khoob Riyaz saheb
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 22, 2012, 11:49:27 AM »
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            GHAZAL

Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai
acha sher hai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai


bahut khoob.....!
Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

 bahut khoob.....!

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bahut khoob riyaz sahab................!
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2012, 12:13:03 PM »
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Riyaz sahab aadaab o salaam!

janab behad khub aur umda kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...

sabhi aashaar masha allah behad khub aur umdaa rahe...

puri kalaam par humari dili daad o mubarakbad kabul kijiye...

likhte rahiye, aate rahiye khush o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez...
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2012, 01:01:26 PM »
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boht khoob riyaz ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2012, 03:59:16 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on January 22, 2012, 07:49:32 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Adil Sahab pasand farmane ka bahot shukriya.
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2012, 04:20:46 PM »
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bahut khoob Riyaz saheb
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
mkv ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri hausla afzaari ki.
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2012, 04:36:44 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 07:12:23 AM
             GHAZAL

Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'
Bahut badhiya kalaam hai Riyaz Saheb.
Waah!  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2012, 04:44:45 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on January 22, 2012, 11:49:27 AM

bahut khoob riyaz sahab................!
Sheba ji main tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya adda karta hun ke aapne meri is adna si koshsh ko pasand farmaya. Khush rahiye.
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2012, 05:22:05 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on January 22, 2012, 12:13:03 PM
Riyaz sahab aadaab o salaam!

janab behad khub aur umda kalaam pesh ki hai aapne...

sabhi aashaar masha allah behad khub aur umdaa rahe...

puri kalaam par humari dili daad o mubarakbad kabul kijiye...

likhte rahiye, aate rahiye khush o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez...

Parwaz sahab aapka mashkoor hun ke aapne meri koshish ko pasand farmaya. Aapka pasand farmane ka andaaz bahot pasand aaya. Koshish karunga Yo par musalsal aata rahun. Kush Rhiye.
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2012, 05:46:06 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on January 22, 2012, 01:01:26 PM
boht khoob riyaz ji
Saahill ji, pasand farmane bahot bahot shukriya. Ummed aainda bhi nazr-e-inayat bani rahegi.
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2012, 06:09:19 PM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on January 22, 2012, 04:36:44 PM
Bahut badhiya kalaam hai Riyaz Saheb.
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Usha ji aapka behad shukriya ke aapne meri is koshish ko pasand farmaya aur hausla afazaai ki.
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2012, 06:57:49 PM »
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Bahot khoob Riyaz Sahab,
Muddaton baad aapki ghazal padhne ko mili dil khush ho gaya..kya kalaam pesh kiya hai dard se labreez har sher apne aap me naayab hai..!!

Aapse mikar bekhudi chha gai,
Jaise sahra men zindgi aa gai.

Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 07:12:23 AM
            GHAZAL
Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2012, 02:34:10 AM »
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Quote from: drpandey on January 22, 2012, 06:57:49 PM
Bahot khoob Riyaz Sahab,
Muddaton baad aapki ghazal padhne ko mili dil khush ho gaya..kya kalaam pesh kiya hai dard se labreez har sher apne aap me naayab hai..!!

Aapse mikar bekhudi chha gai,
Jaise sahra men zindgi aa gai.
 
Pandey sahab apki zarranawazi hai hai ke aapne ghazal ko pasand farmaya aur hausla afzai ki. Ye sahi hai ke muddat ke bad hazir hua hun. Ab regular rahne ki koshish karunga. Aaka kalam bhi bahot achha laga.
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