Zindagi Kho Gai

by Riyaz Ashna on January 22, 2012, 07:12:23 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 23, 2012, 04:20:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob riyaz saheb
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«Reply #16 on: January 23, 2012, 08:55:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob riyaz saheb
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Bahot bahot shukriya Saini Sahab ke aapne meri koshish ko pasand farmaya. Aainda bhi aapse hausla afzaai ki ummeed ragegi.
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«Reply #17 on: January 23, 2012, 02:55:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Riaz saheb . Khubsurat ashaar hain , khaas taur se akhiri sher bahut achha laga.mubarak ho. Hasan
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«Reply #18 on: January 23, 2012, 04:41:46 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Riaz saheb . Khubsurat ashaar hain , khaas taur se akhiri sher bahut achha laga.mubarak ho. Hasan
Hasan sahab aapka mamnoon hun ke aapne mere ashaar pasand farma kar meri hausla afazaai ki. Aap jo ashaar kahte hain wo behad umda, bamaani aur lutfandoz hote hai. Aapka phir se shukriya.
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«Reply #19 on: January 23, 2012, 04:50:45 PM »
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Kya khoob Ghazal tumne ata ki hai aashna
Wallah qawaid se wafa ki hai aashan

Mahutram RIyaz sahab ,, salam

Ghazal shahkaar hai ,, parhke suroor ata hai ,, Wahhhhhhhhhhh ,, Dad behad ho hisab Ba Awaz-e-buland ,, khubool Kare.N ,, Allah apko khoob Nawaze ..


Dua go

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«Reply #20 on: January 23, 2012, 05:14:47 PM »
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Kya khoob Ghazal tumne ata ki hai aashna
Wallah qawaid se wafa ki hai aashan

Mahutram RIyaz sahab ,, salam

Ghazal shahkaar hai ,, parhke suroor ata hai ,, Wahhhhhhhhhhh ,, Dad behad ho hisab Ba Awaz-e-buland ,, khubool Kare.N ,, Allah apko khoob Nawaze ..


Dua go

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Janab Abdul Qadeer sahab kin alfaaz mein aapka shukriya adaa karun. Ghazal ki pasandidgi aur uske izhar karne ki adaa se bahot khushi hui. Aapki daad se beshak meri hausla afzaai hui. Main apka tah-e-dil se shukr guzaar hun, Allah aapko shad-o-abaad rakhe.
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«Reply #21 on: December 24, 2012, 09:13:08 AM »
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             GHAZAL
Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'



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«Reply #22 on: December 24, 2012, 12:37:48 PM »
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             GHAZAL
Hasratein mit gaeen, har khushi kho gai
Tum gaye to meri zindagi kho gai

Meri qismat me sahra tha so mil gaya
Haaye wo husn ki ik nadi kho gai

Paas mere khizaan, duur hai wo bahar
Phool murjha gaya, taazgi kho gai

Yaadon ki aag mein jism-o-jaan jal rahe
Kaise paaun sukun, chaandni kho gai

Main khatawaar hun bakhsh de ae khuda
Ishq ki raah mein bandagi kho gai

Riyaz 'Ashna'

waah bohat khoob ,......bohat c daad,.........
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