<>*Zindagi mod naye liye jati hai*<>

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<>*Zindagi mod naye liye jati hai*<>

Meri garm saanson se aanch tujh tak aati hai
Kuch to hai jo tujhe mujh tak har bat liye aati hai

Aake chhup ja mere aanchal me tu kuch iss tarah
K tujhe meri baahein ab paas apne bulati hain

Sun le jo gunj raha hai iss sannate me har taraf
Meri dhadkan ab ye geet naye tujhe sunati hai

Na rakhna ab tu khud ko kabhi qaid kisiki yaadon me
K teri siskiyon ki awaaz hume bhi aksar rula jati hai

Labon ki khamoshi ko akasarlub hi samjh lete hain
Suno gaur se ye labon ki harkat kya sur naye sajati hai

Ehsaason k samandar me doobte utarte hue hi dekho
Ye lambi kathin zindagi kuch palon me hi beet jati hai

Reh reh k uthti rehti hai jo kasak tere dil me kahin
Usi k ehsaas se dekho zindagi mod naye liye jati hai…!!!
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2010, 07:12:13 PM »
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is wakt ke liye bas itna hi ki kaafi Khubsurat andaaz aur ehsaas hai jo likha hai aapne kya kahe... lekin Intezar karna Intezar ke comments ka abhi baaki hai bahut kuch...

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«Reply #2 on: November 23, 2010, 07:16:52 PM »
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haan ji intezar ji..
kasak ko intezar k reply ka intezar rahega.....
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 09:11:33 PM »
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<>*Zindagi mod naye liye jati hai*<>

Meri garm saanson se aanch tujh tak aati hai
Kuch to hai jo tujhe mujh tak har bat liye aati hai

Aake chhup ja mere aanchal me tu kuch iss tarah
K tujhe meri baahein ab paas apne bulati hain

Sun le jo gunj raha hai iss sannate me har taraf
Meri dhadkan ab ye geet naye tujhe sunati hai

Na rakhna ab tu khud ko kabhi qaid kisiki yaadon me
K teri siskiyon ki awaaz hume bhi aksar rula jati hai

Labon ki khamoshi ko akasarlub hi samjh lete hain
Suno gaur se ye labon ki harkat kya sur naye sajati hai

Ehsaason k samandar me doobte utarte hue hi dekho
Ye lambi kathin zindagi kuch palon me hi beet jati hai

Reh reh k uthti rehti hai jo kasak tere dil me kahin
Usi k ehsaas se dekho zindagi mod naye liye jati hai…!!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2010, 09:38:20 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob hai ji.... bahut din baad aaya hoon aaj yo pe aur aapka likha hua post har baar ki tarha is baar bhi mujhe majboor kar gaya likhne ke liye... chal hi padi meri jang lagi hui kalam....


main tumhaari baahon me na sahi tumhaari chaahon me rehta hoon,
chaahe tumse meelon duur hoon par tumhaari yaadon me rehta hoon,

mehek tumhaare saanson ki aaj bhi mere saanson ko mehkaati hai,
kya hua agar tumhaare saamne nahi, tumhaari dhadkano me rehta hoon,

tumhaare har ek geet me main hi rehta hoon ye hai pata mujhe,
yaaron ki mehfil me main bas tumhaaare hi geet sunaata hoon,

jaanta hoon kya betaabi hai tumhaare dil ki, kyun paagal ho tum,
main kisi aur ki nahi bas tumhaare yaadon ki qaid me rehta hoon,

lab khaamosh hai tumhaare aaj, uski wajah bhi jaanta hoon main,
samajhta hoon sab par nasamajh ban main ab bas chup rehta hoon,

har shaam yaadon ka aake chhedna kisi toofaan se kam nahi hota,
main ek bikhra hua tinka, toofaan se har pal ladta rehta hoon,

kasak to aaj bhi uth_ti hai is hriday me tumhaare pyaar ki,
par main, haar ke apni zindagi, is zindagi ko jeeta rehta hoon....
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2010, 04:02:58 AM »
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Thanx a lot kapil ji…
aapne apne busy schedule se kuch waqt hume diya aur iss rachna ko padha, saraha aur reply bhi diya…..
aur aapka reply dekh jo khushi hui hai wo mujhe shayad kehne ki zarurat nahin ..
aap samjh sakte hain…..
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Wakai me aapki likhne me gazab ka nikhaar aaya hai..
kaun kehta hai k aapki kalam ko jung laga gaya hai….
aaj bhi wahi taazgi, wahi feelings k sath likhte hain aap..
bas shayad likhna nahin chahte..
khair jane dijiye ye sab to aapke apne man ki baat hai..
par aapne ye bht hi mastam mast likha hai…..
reallyyyyy zabardasttttttttttttt…….
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Duur hokar bhi tu har pal mere aaspaas hota hai
Chahe ho kahin bhi tu meri saanson me mehakta hai

Andhere me jaise apna saaya humme hi kahin chhup jata hai
Usi tarah tu nazar nahin aata par mujhme hi samaya rehta hai

Har lafz har geet har gazal meri ab gungunati hai tujhe
Tumera shringaar banke ab to mujhe nihaara karta hai

Kahun ya na kahun tumse kuch bhi iske mayne nahin koi
Tu mere dil k har kahe -ankahe raaz sor jazbaat samjhta hai

Kasak k dil me ab bhi whi maasumiyat basti hai bachchon si
Kyun fir bhi har insaan use ek matlabi yaar hi samjhta hai…!!!
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2010, 04:08:44 AM »
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thnx rahim for these claps
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2010, 06:08:29 AM »
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hmm bahut badhiya hai anu ji...

dher saari daaad khaaj khujli....


kapil ji bahut mast likha he aapne..

apko bhi dher saaari daad`
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«Reply #8 on: November 30, 2010, 08:26:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Abhi ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 30, 2010, 08:28:37 AM »
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Kasak ji aapne bahut bhaari bhaari sa taarif kar diya hai hamaare liye.. aisi koi khaas baat nahi thi shayad is post me mere.. par aapne pasand kiya iske liye bahut bahut shukriya... aur aapke jawaab k baare me kya kahun.. as usual always the best....!!!

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na kaho aisa ki tumhe matlabi kaha hai humne,
matlabi to hum hain jo saath chhod gaye majdhaar me,

duniya mein kai chaahne waale mile kai gaye,
badte rahe hum apni zindagi me aur tum rahe kataar me,

ek aur dil toda hai humne jaane anjaane me hi sahi,
chaaha tumne humein par dagaa diya hai humne pyaar me,

kya kahen tumse ye samajh k baahar hai hamaare,
aajaayen kareeb tumhaare ya bitaane de tumhe ghadiyaan intezaar me.....
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«Reply #10 on: October 30, 2012, 06:05:26 PM »
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hmm bahut badhiya hai anu ji...

dher saari daaad khaaj khujli....


kapil ji bahut mast likha he aapne..

apko bhi dher saaari daad`

oyee abhi ... kidhar kho gaye ho aajkal tum... kahin nazar nahin aate..... ye thanx ki potli uthane jaldi se aajao...
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2012, 06:06:49 PM »
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Kasak ji aapne bahut bhaari bhaari sa taarif kar diya hai hamaare liye.. aisi koi khaas baat nahi thi shayad is post me mere.. par aapne pasand kiya iske liye bahut bahut shukriya... aur aapke jawaab k baare me kya kahun.. as usual always the best....!!!

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na kaho aisa ki tumhe matlabi kaha hai humne,
matlabi to hum hain jo saath chhod gaye majdhaar me,

duniya mein kai chaahne waale mile kai gaye,
badte rahe hum apni zindagi me aur tum rahe kataar me,

ek aur dil toda hai humne jaane anjaane me hi sahi,
chaaha tumne humein par dagaa diya hai humne pyaar me,

kya kahen tumse ye samajh k baahar hai hamaare,
aajaayen kareeb tumhaare ya bitaane de tumhe ghadiyaan intezaar me.....

wowwwwww kp mastam reply hai lekin ab iss feel pe nahin likha jayega.......
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«Reply #12 on: October 30, 2012, 06:19:02 PM »
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to kuch nayaaa hi likh do... Usual Smile

wowwwwww kp mastam reply hai lekin ab iss feel pe nahin likha jayega.......
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«Reply #13 on: October 30, 2012, 06:43:55 PM »
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<>*Zindagi mod naye liye jati hai*<>

Meri garm saanson se aanch tujh tak aati hai
Kuch to hai jo tujhe mujh tak har bat liye aati hai

Aake chhup ja mere aanchal me tu kuch iss tarah
K tujhe meri baahein ab paas apne bulati hain

Sun le jo gunj raha hai iss sannate me har taraf
Meri dhadkan ab ye geet naye tujhe sunati hai

Na rakhna ab tu khud ko kabhi qaid kisiki yaadon me
K teri siskiyon ki awaaz hume bhi aksar rula jati hai

Labon ki khamoshi ko akasarlub hi samjh lete hain
Suno gaur se ye labon ki harkat kya sur naye sajati hai

Ehsaason k samandar me doobte utarte hue hi dekho
Ye lambi kathin zindagi kuch palon me hi beet jati hai

Reh reh k uthti rehti hai jo kasak tere dil me kahin
Usi k ehsaas se dekho zindagi mod naye liye jati hai…!!!
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«Reply #14 on: October 30, 2012, 09:29:43 PM »
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<>*Zindagi mod naye liye jati hai*<>

Meri garm saanson se aanch tujh tak aati hai
Kuch to hai jo tujhe mujh tak har bat liye aati hai

Aake chhup ja mere aanchal me tu kuch iss tarah
K tujhe meri baahein ab paas apne bulati hain

Sun le jo gunj raha hai iss sannate me har taraf
Meri dhadkan ab ye geet naye tujhe sunati hai

Na rakhna ab tu khud ko kabhi qaid kisiki yaadon me
K teri siskiyon ki awaaz hume bhi aksar rula jati hai

Labon ki khamoshi ko akasarlub hi samjh lete hain
Suno gaur se ye labon ki harkat kya sur naye sajati hai

Ehsaason k samandar me doobte utarte hue hi dekho
Ye lambi kathin zindagi kuch palon me hi beet jati hai

Reh reh k uthti rehti hai jo kasak tere dil me kahin
Usi k ehsaas se dekho zindagi mod naye liye jati hai…!!!

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