***zindagi teri amanat si lagti hai***

by jannatjahan on June 09, 2009, 08:43:44 AM
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Is riste ke aage har riste ki gaanth kamjor si lagti hai,
teri mohabbat kali raat ke baad ki bhor si lagti hai.....

is duniya is kaaynaat me nahi tujh sa koi pyara hai,
teri mohabbat kaanton ki chubhan ke baad phulon ke sparsh si lagti hai.....

har jarre har najare me teri wafa ki khusbu hai,
teri mohabbat pehli barish me mitti ke mehak si lagti hai.......

tere bin bechainiyon bhara din raatein zehrili hoti hai,
teri mohabbat haasil hai to duniya apni si lagti hai....

meri saans aur har dhadkan par teri hukumat hai,
teri mohabbat ka karam hai ye,ab to apni zindagi bhi teri amanat si lagti hai.....
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 12:05:36 PM »
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waah, shweta di, kya baat hai ji! waise hum aapse behud aur bahor naraaz hain
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 12:32:04 PM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on June 09, 2009, 08:43:44 AM
Is riste ke aage har riste ki gaanth kamjor si lagti hai,
teri mohabbat kali raat ke baad ki bhor si lagti hai.....

is duniya is kaaynaat me nahi tujh sa koi pyara hai,
teri mohabbat kaanton ki chubhan ke baad phulon ke sparsh si lagti hai.....

har jarre har najare me teri wafa ki khusbu hai,
teri mohabbat pehli barish me mitti ke mehak si lagti hai.......

tere bin bechainiyon bhara din raatein zehrili hoti hai,
teri mohabbat haasil hai to duniya apni si lagti hai....

meri saans aur har dhadkan par teri hukumat hai,
teri mohabbat ka karam hai ye,ab to apni zindagi bhi teri amanat si lagti hai.....
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Mere khyalon ko aapne badi khoobsoorati se lafjo main bayan kar diya. 
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 12:41:11 PM »
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Waah Jannat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob dear.
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 05:23:52 PM »
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Bahut khoob Jannat Ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 11:09:35 PM »
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Very very nice Jannat ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 11:25:37 PM »
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Ms. Jannatjahan Good work, good wording.
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«Reply #7 on: June 10, 2009, 01:57:38 AM »
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Quote from: jannatjahan on June 09, 2009, 08:43:44 AM
Is riste ke aage har riste ki gaanth kamjor si lagti hai,
teri mohabbat kali raat ke baad ki bhor si lagti hai.....

is duniya is kaaynaat me nahi tujh sa koi pyara hai,
teri mohabbat kaanton ki chubhan ke baad phulon ke sparsh si lagti hai.....

har jarre har najare me teri wafa ki khusbu hai,
teri mohabbat pehli barish me mitti ke mehak si lagti hai.......

tere bin bechainiyon bhara din raatein zehrili hoti hai,
teri mohabbat haasil hai to duniya apni si lagti hai....

meri saans aur har dhadkan par teri hukumat hai,
teri mohabbat ka karam hai ye,ab to apni zindagi bhi teri amanat si lagti hai.....
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Wah wah Shweta dear..... Bahut bahut accha likha hai.

"teri mohabbat ka karam hai ye,ab to apni zindagi bhi teri amanat si lagti hai."

Bahut khoob dear Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 10, 2009, 07:56:33 AM »
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Nice work JJ..
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«Reply #9 on: June 10, 2009, 07:57:48 AM »
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NIce One Shweta,.
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«Reply #10 on: June 10, 2009, 09:11:22 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 09, 2009, 12:05:36 PM
waah, shweta di, kya baat hai ji! waise hum aapse behud aur bahor naraaz hain
Thanks My Sweet lil sis...magar kya baat hai Dear...narajgi ki wajah to batao..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 09:16:07 AM »
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Quote from: sanjaytiwari on June 09, 2009, 12:32:04 PM

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Mere khyalon ko aapne badi khoobsoorati se lafjo main bayan kar diya. 

Thanks Sanjay ji.....waise khayal to mere hi the...dont say aap bhi inhi khayalon me rahte hain.... tongue3
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Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2009, 12:41:11 PM
Waah Jannat  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bohot Khoob dear.
Thanks Dear Celmira... Usual Smile
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 09, 2009, 05:23:52 PM
Bahut khoob Jannat Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
Shukriyaa Rastogi ji.... Usual Smile
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Quote from: jannatjahan on June 10, 2009, 09:16:07 AM
Thanks Sanjay ji.....waise khayal to mere hi the...dont say aap bhi inhi khayalon me rahte hain.... tongue3


Tab to hum yahi kahenge ki. Har pyar karane wale ke khyal ek jaise hi hote hain.  Khas taur se jo itani shiddat ke sath mohabbat karate hon.

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