Zindgi tere naam likh dete hain

by mistufer on March 19, 2008, 09:17:34 PM
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Zindgi tere naam likh dete hain

Meri raaton ki neend udhate ho
Aake haule haule kaano mein
Kuch baat kah jate ho
Kabhi chand toh kabhi
Mahtaab bulate ho
Haulle se pyaar jatate ho

Taron ki raat mein
Chaa.tt par bulate ho
Chandni ki chanv main
Bharke aagosh mein
Thapki se sulate ho
Haul.le se pyaar kar jate ho

Kannte ne chube panv mein
Phool bikher dete ho
Rang surkh rahe gallon par
Halke se choom lete ho
Nazaar naa lage kisiki
Kajal ankhon main
Sajaa dete ho
Jaane kya kya karte ho

Aao aaj hum bhi kuch
Kah dete hain.
Apne haaton ki likron mein
Naam tumhara likh dete hain
Bharke mangh apni tere haaton se
Zindgi tere naam likh dete hain
Dheerese aaj waada kar lete hain

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2008, 09:32:25 PM »
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Nira

Bahut achche Applause

Khumar se bharpoor aap ka yeh kalam hai !

Keep going  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2008, 09:42:17 PM »
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Rajbir ji

aapko pasand aaye pyaar ke yeh rang, shukriya yunhi yahan saath dete rahiyega, muje acha lagega.

take care

nira
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2008, 09:49:10 PM »
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Bohot hi khoob...bohot khoobsurat creation hai aapki Nira Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2008, 09:51:54 PM »
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Tallu

PhD kar ke tumhari nazar kamzor ho gayi hai Is it SO!

Neera nahi Nira NaNaNa
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2008, 09:58:53 PM »
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Sorry..theek kar diya....Keep going Nira...Its really great to see Original Work...and Thank Goodness there are few poets here which stick to it.
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«Reply #6 on: March 19, 2008, 10:01:11 PM »
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Bohot hi khoob...bohot khoobsurat creation hai aapki Nira Applause

talat ji

shukriyaaaaaaaaaaa aapko pasand aaye ehsaas

nira
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«Reply #7 on: March 19, 2008, 10:04:56 PM »
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Sorry..theek kar diya....Keep going Nira...Its really great to see Original Work...and Thank Goodness there are few poets here which stick to it.

talat ji
koi baat nahi plz sorry naa bolain

hum shikaar ho jate hain shikar nahi karte, so importance of originally is very important to me.
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«Reply #8 on: March 19, 2008, 10:07:04 PM »
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Tallu

PhD kar ke tumhari nazar kamzor ho gayi hai Is it SO!

Neera nahi Nira NaNaNa

koi nahi ho jata hai kabhi rajbir ji.
and btw main canada hon aor  yahan shaam hai

nira
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«Reply #9 on: March 20, 2008, 09:31:38 AM »
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nice creation nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #10 on: March 20, 2008, 09:48:03 AM »
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nice creation nira

khushi ji
aapka shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira
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«Reply #11 on: March 20, 2008, 10:05:50 AM »
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Nira bohat acha shayari likha hai  Applause

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«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2008, 03:18:23 PM »
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Nira bohat acha shayari likha hai  Applause



honeyrose ji

aapka bahut bahut shukriya aapko poem pasand aayi
nira
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«Reply #13 on: September 24, 2009, 05:14:46 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Nira ji,really touching n mindblowing creationm,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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