"zmane ki nazar karne do"

by aaina on May 09, 2009, 06:54:42 AM
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pal do pal qatro.n mai basar karne do
mujhko in jheel nigaho.n ka safr karne do

ey meri jaan takhyyul ho tum mera
ye khyaal mujhko zamane ki nazr karne do

yahan barosa nhi kya jata sabka
kaam na mumkin sa hai khair, magr krne ho

ya to waado.n pe tum hamere bharosa kar lo
ya phir ashqo.n ko qataaro.n ka safr krne do

mujhko maloom hai wo doda chala ayega
bas ilaalat ki mujhay usko khabr karne do

kiy.u kehte ho ke mujhya yaad kiya na karo
tum na sahi yaad ko to dil mai ghr karne do
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2009, 07:24:58 AM »
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Nice one Aaina Ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 09, 2009, 03:47:00 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 09, 2009, 06:54:42 AM
pal do pal qatro.n mai basar karne do
mujhko in jheel nigaho.n ka safr karne do

ey meri jaan takhyyul ho tum mera
ye khyaal mujhko zamane ki nazr karne do

yahan barosa nhi kya jata sabka
kaam na mumkin sa hai khair, magr krne ho

ya to waado.n pe tum hamere bharosa kar lo
ya phir ashqo.n ko qataaro.n ka safr krne do

mujhko maloom hai wo doda chala ayega
bas ilaalat ki mujhay usko khabr karne do

kiy.u kehte ho ke mujhya yaad kiya na karo
tum na sahi yaad ko to dil mai ghr karne do

Wah wah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji... Applause Applause
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2009, 03:58:02 PM »
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vERY GOOD AAINA JI
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2009, 10:13:03 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 09, 2009, 07:24:58 AM
Nice one Aaina Ji

thnxxxxx rajesh ji...........
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«Reply #5 on: May 10, 2009, 10:14:00 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 09, 2009, 03:47:00 PM

Wah wah... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji... Applause Applause

thnxxxxx so much roja dear.....
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«Reply #6 on: May 10, 2009, 10:14:48 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 09, 2009, 03:58:02 PM
vERY GOOD AAINA JI
SARVESH RASTOGI

bhut shukriya sarvesh ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2009, 04:12:36 AM »
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Wah Aslam wah Khumar-e-Ishq ke sath poora poora insaf kiya hain tumhare is kalam ne. Nihayat hi khoobsurat peshkash  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ibadat ho meri tum meri pooja ho

Zindagi apni mujhe moatbar karne do...

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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2009, 04:55:14 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 11, 2009, 04:12:36 AM
Wah Aslam wah Khumar-e-Ishq ke sath poora poora insaf kiya hain tumhare is kalam ne. Nihayat hi khoobsurat peshkash  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ibadat ho meri tum meri pooja ho

Zindagi apni mujhe moatbar karne do...

-SG-

bhut khoob sajid sahab...........bhut hi acha sher hai
thnxxx so much for ur compliment........................
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2009, 06:50:03 AM »
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bhoot bahoot khoob Aslam ji.
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2009, 12:04:52 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 09, 2009, 06:54:42 AM
pal do pal qatro.n mai basar karne do
mujhko in jheel nigaho.n ka safr karne do

ey meri jaan takhyyul ho tum mera
ye khyaal mujhko zamane ki nazr karne do

yahan barosa nhi kya jata sabka
kaam na mumkin sa hai khair, magr krne ho

ya to waado.n pe tum hamere bharosa kar lo
ya phir ashqo.n ko qataaro.n ka safr krne do

mujhko maloom hai wo doda chala ayega
bas ilaalat ki mujhay usko khabr karne do

kiy.u kehte ho ke mujhya yaad kiya na karo
tum na sahi yaad ko to dil mai ghr karne do

 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji....Khumar ke rang main halka sa ek chhupa hua dard bhi mehsoos hua....Ho sakta hai mera ye nazariya galat ho, ko mehsoos hua wo likha hai....!
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2009, 08:41:01 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 11, 2009, 06:50:03 AM
bhoot bahoot khoob Aslam ji.

shukiya sophi ji....................
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2009, 08:41:51 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 11, 2009, 12:04:52 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji....Khumar ke rang main halka sa ek chhupa hua dard bhi mehsoos hua....Ho sakta hai mera ye nazariya galat ho, ko mehsoos hua wo likha hai....!

thnxxxxxx so much celmira ji........
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2009, 09:44:55 PM »
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bahut khoob aslam ji aur sajid ji,mindblowing.
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 11:15:39 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 11, 2009, 09:44:55 PM
bahut khoob aslam ji aur sajid ji,mindblowing.

thnxxxx madhuwesh ji............
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