zoothi

by sanglikar on March 16, 2010, 02:32:04 PM
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Tu zoothi hai,
tera har wada zootha hai.
Kal tak jo dil salamat tha,
aaj har jagah tuta hai.
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SURESH SANGWAN
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2010, 03:50:36 PM »
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WAH JI WAH BAHUT KHOOB. Applause Applause Applause Applause
KITNE BOLD HAIN AAP.

APNI MOHABBAT KO KABHI YUN NAHIN KEHATE.
KUCH GALATFEHMI RAHI HOGI USSE GUFTGU KARTE.
KUCH TO HONGI MAZBOORIYAN USKI BHI VERNA.
AAJ DIL JALAAKE NA WO DHUAN DHUAN HARSOO KARTE.

Tu zoothi hai,
tera har wada zootha hai.
Kal tak jo dil salamat tha,
aaj har jagah tuta hai.
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«Reply #2 on: March 16, 2010, 04:38:51 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khub....

kal tak ek duje se kiye kai waade honge,
socha hoga ki jarur wo poore honge,
jhooti na wo hogi, jhoote na waade honge,
jaroor kisi mazboori me toote wo iraade honge...
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2010, 08:14:47 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khub....

kal tak ek duje se kiye kai waade honge,
socha hoga ki jarur wo poore honge,
jhooti na wo hogi, jhoote na waade honge,
jaroor kisi mazboori me toote wo iraade honge...


Nice one Klaskar Ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2010, 12:04:40 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob likha aap sabhi ne,Sanglikar ji,Suresh ji,Klaskar ji.beautiful work. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: March 24, 2010, 04:09:49 PM »
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Shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!


Nice one Klaskar Ji
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«Reply #6 on: March 24, 2010, 04:10:51 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji...!!!

Bahut hi khoob likha aap sabhi ne,Sanglikar ji,Suresh ji,Klaskar ji.beautiful work. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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