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tere chehre pe hasee.n khaab ki surat nazar aaunga
zulf sanwar kar jo khulegi to bikhar jaanunga
ye teri madhosh nighaho.n ke surkh doorey
inke zariye teri rag rag mein utar jaunga
mujkho tu aawaaz day ke na day ey waqt lakin
tujhko har lamha na jiyunga to mar jaunga
mein to samjha akele bhi safar katt_ta hai
kiya khbr thi ke andhero se bhi dar junga
ye teri tishna labi ka khaab na poora hone dunga
aankh se chulkunga agr mein kabhi bhar jaunga
mein jo aslam apni wafaa.n ka kabhi zikr karu.n
ba_khuda khud apni hi nazaro.n se uthr jaunga |
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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2009, 06:31:31 AM » |
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Bahoot hi pyar bhari shayari likhi hai Aaina. keep writing dear.
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2009, 06:50:29 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji, Keep Writing !
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2009, 08:06:58 AM » |
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Subhan_allah par makhte me itna shikwa apne aapse......Bohat khoob Aslam.
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2009, 10:13:29 AM » |
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tere chehre pe hasee.n khaab ki surat nazar aaunga
zulf sanwar kar jo khulegi to bikhar jaanunga
ye teri madhosh nighaho.n ke surkh doorey
inke zariye teri rag rag mein utar jaunga
mujkho tu aawaaz day ke na day ey waqt lakin
tujhko har lamha na jiyunga to mar jaunga
mein to samjha akele bhi safar katt_ta hai
kiya khbr thi ke andhero se bhi dar junga
ye teri tishna labi ka khaab na poora hone dunga
aankh se chulkunga agr mein kabhi bhar jaunga
mein jo aslam apni wafaa.n ka kabhi zikr karu.n
ba_khuda khud apni hi nazaro.n se uthr jaunga Waah..Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji waqi khoobsurat kaha hai !! |
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aaina
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«Reply #5 on: April 09, 2009, 06:48:24 AM » |
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Bahoot hi pyar bhari shayari likhi hai Aaina. keep writing dear.
thnxxxxx so much sophi ke aapne meri ghazal ko itna pasnd kia................ |
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«Reply #6 on: April 09, 2009, 06:49:19 AM » |
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Bahut Khoob Aaina Ji, Keep Writing !
shukriya karndhar sahab............... |
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«Reply #7 on: April 09, 2009, 06:54:03 AM » |
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Good Job Aania Ji Keep It Up....
thnxx shihab....................... |
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«Reply #8 on: April 09, 2009, 06:59:10 AM » |
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Subhan_allah par makhte me itna shikwa apne aapse......Bohat khoob Aslam.
e naseeb sajid sahab aapka guzar to hua is tarf bhi........bhut bhut skhuriya dear....ab shikway aur shikayato.n mai jo lutf hai mere bhai wo aur kahan..zindagi ke zakhmo pe marham ka sa kaam karte hain ye shikway aur shikayatai.n, |
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«Reply #9 on: April 09, 2009, 07:04:24 AM » |
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Waah..Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji waqi khoobsurat kaha hai !!
bhut bhut shukriya cemira ji................ |
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«Reply #10 on: April 09, 2009, 07:18:34 AM » |
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tere chehre pe hasee.n khaab ki surat nazar aaunga
zulf sanwar kar jo khulegi to bikhar jaanunga
ye teri madhosh nighaho.n ke surkh doorey
inke zariye teri rag rag mein utar jaunga
mujkho tu aawaaz day ke na day ey waqt lakin
tujhko har lamha na jiyunga to mar jaunga
mein to samjha akele bhi safar katt_ta hai
kiya khbr thi ke andhero se bhi dar junga
ye teri tishna labi ka khaab na poora hone dunga
aankh se chulkunga agr mein kabhi bhar jaunga
mein jo aslam apni wafaa.n ka kabhi zikr karu.n
ba_khuda khud apni hi nazaro.n se uthr jaunga Teri tishna labi .... Wala sher mujhe bahut pasand aya. |
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2009, 03:44:22 PM » |
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tere chehre pe hasee.n khaab ki surat nazar aaunga
zulf sanwar kar jo khulegi to bikhar jaanunga
ye teri madhosh nighaho.n ke surkh doorey
inke zariye teri rag rag mein utar jaunga
mujkho tu aawaaz day ke na day ey waqt lakin
tujhko har lamha na jiyunga to mar jaunga
mein to samjha akele bhi safar katt_ta hai
kiya khbr thi ke andhero se bhi dar junga
ye teri tishna labi ka khaab na poora hone dunga
aankh se chulkunga agr mein kabhi bhar jaunga
mein jo aslam apni wafaa.n ka kabhi zikr karu.n
ba_khuda khud apni hi nazaro.n se uthr jaunga  |
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«Reply #12 on: April 09, 2009, 05:55:26 PM » |
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Teri tishna labi ....
Wala sher mujhe bahut pasand aya.
shukriya dost........................ |
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