अब लौट आ सनम... " ऋषि "

by Rishi Agarwal on August 06, 2013, 01:00:58 AM
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नमस्कार मित्रो, आज में अपने जीवन की एक ऐसी कविता लिखी हैं जिसमें मेरी मोहब्बत की दास्ताँ हैं, हम दोनों की मुलाकात सोशल साईट पे हुई थी.. बातों ही बातों में मुझे उनसे प्यार हो गया..पर एक दिन उसने मुझे भुला दिया और मुझे तन्हा छोड़ दिया.. कभी में उसका अपना होता था आज तो में उसे पसंद तक नहीं..उसे खूब सारे मेसेज करने पे भी जवाब नही आता.. ना जाने क्या कसूर हैं मेरा की सच्ची मोहब्बत करके भी रोता हूँ अक्सर.. अगर आपको मेरी कविता में थोड़ा सा भी प्यार नजर आये तो जरुर दुआ करना वो मेरे पास लौट आये.. बाबु लौट आओcrybaby2 crybaby2


में लिख रहा हूँ आज अपनी मोहब्बत के नगमें,
एक अधूरी दास्ताँ, तन्हा कटते सफर की बातें..

सोच रहा था कोई हो मेरा अपना, सजाये सपना,
चंद लम्हों में बस जाये रूह में हो कोई ऐसा अपना..

सुनी खुदा ने फरियाद, आई वो जिसका था इंतज़ार,
हुई ही थी कुछ पल बातें, खो गया था मेरा चैन करार..

भोली भाली उसकी बातें, उसकी नटखट भरी शरारते,
"ऋषि" के दिल को छूने लगी, उसकी हर प्यारी बातें..

एक दुसरे को समझाते, छोटी -2 बातों पे लड़ जाते थे,
थी वो मासूम बहुत, उनकी नाराजगी सह नही पाते थे..

चन्द लम्हों में वो, मेरे धडकती साँसों में समाने लगी,
उसकी छोटी सी नाराजगी, मुझे अब पसंद आने लगी..

रह जाती वो मेरे बिन, रह नही पाते थे हम उनके बिन,
ना हो उनसे अगर बातें, ना कटती रातें न कटते थे दिन..

हो गई थी उनसे मोहब्बत, ये मेरी धड़कने बताने लगी,
कर दिया उन्हें इजहार, ना हो इनकार, आँखे रोने लगी..

बिन देखे कैसे की मोहब्बत, ये आया था उनका जवाब,
जब सुनी मैंने ये दास्ताँ, टूटने लगे थे मेरे हर ख्वाब..

उनकी बेरुखी सताने लगी, आँखों से मोती पिरोने लगी,
झुखी नजरे, रुकी साँसे, उनकी हर पल याद आने लगी..

चन्द लम्हों पहले मिले थे, बन बैठे अजनबी जैसे हालात,
रोती आँखे, तन्हा यादें, बच गई वो प्यार भरी मुलाकात..

ना जाने क्या कसूर था, किस बात का दिया मुझे गम,
लिखते लिखते हो गई आँखे नम, अब लौट आ सनम..

@ ऋषि अग्रवाल




Namskar Mitro, Aaj Mein Apne Jeevan Ki Ek Aisi Kavita Likhi Hain Jisme Meri Mohbbat Ki Dastan Hain, Hum Dono Ki Mulakat Social Site Pe Hui Thi.. Baaton Hi Baton Mein Mujhe Unse Pyar Ho Gaya.. Par Ek Din Usne Mujhe Bhula Diya Aur Mujhe Tnha Akela Chhod Diya.. Kabhi Mein Uska Apna HOta Tha Aaj To Mein Use Pasand Tak Nahin.. Use Khub Message Karne Pe Bhi Jawab Nahi Aata.. Na Jane Kya Kasoor Hain Mera Ki Sacchi Mohbbat Karke Bhi Rota Hoon Aksar.. Agar Aapko Meri Kavita Mein Thoda Sa Bhi Pyar Najar Aaye To Jarur Duaa Karna Wo Mere Pass Laut Aaye..Babu Laut Aao crybaby2 crybaby2


Mein Likh Rha Hoon, Aaj Apni Mohbbt Ke Nagame,
Ek Adhoori Dastan, Tnha Kate Safar Ki Baatein..

Soch Raha Tha Koi Ho Mera Apna, Sajaye Sapna,
Chand Lamhon Mein Bas Jaye Rooh Mein Ho Kio Aisa Apna..

Suni Khuda Ne Fariyaad, Aai Wo Jiska Tha Intezaar,
Hui Hi Thi Kuchh Pal Batein, Kho Gya Tha Mera Chain Karar..

Bholi Bhali Uski Batein, Uski Natkhat Bhari Shararten,
"Rishi" Ke Dil Ko Chhune Lagi, Uski Har Pyari Baatein..

Ek Dusre Ko Samjhate, Chhoti-2 Baton Pe Lad Jate The,
Thi Wo Masoom Bahut, Unki Narajgi Sah Nahi Pate The..

Chand Lamho Mein Wo, Mere Dhadkti Sanso Mein Samane Lagi,
Uski Chhoti Si Narajgi, Mujhe Ab Pasand Aane Lagi..


Rah Jati Wo Mere Bin, Rah Nahi Pate The Hum Unke Bin,
Na Ho Unse Agar Batein, Na Katati Ratein N Katte The Din..

Ho Gai Thi Unse Mohbbat, Ye Meri Dhadkane Batane Lagi,
Kar Diya Unhe Ijhaar, Na Ho Inkaar, Aankhen Rone Lagi..

Bin Dekhe Kaise Ki Mohbbat, Ye Aaya Tha Unka Jawab,
Jab Suni Maine Ye Dastan, Tutne Lage The Mere Har Khawab..

Unki Berukhi Stane Lagi, Aankho Se Moti Pirone Lagi,
Jhukhi Najare, Ruki Saanse, Unki Har Pal Yaad Aane Lagi..

Chand Lamhon Pahle Mile The, Ban Baithe Ajnabi Jaise Halat,
Roti Aankhe, Tanha Yadein, Bach Gai Wo Pyar Bhari Mulakat..

Na Jane Kya Kasoor Tha, Kis Baat Ka Diya Mujhe Gum,
Likhte Likhte Ho Gai Aankhe Nam, Ab Laut Aa Sanam..



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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 02:14:26 AM »
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Bahut pyaar bhara likha hai!
i hope if she is reading,she will come back!
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 02:18:53 AM »
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Bahut pyaar bhara likha hai!
i hope if she is reading,she will come back!

Dhanywaad Akash Ji Kash Aisa Hi Ho... Aapki Duaa Kabool Ho Jaye
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 02:39:08 AM »
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will pray for u rishi..... hope she undersands ur love.....

dil ko chhu gai tumhri daastaan.....
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 03:11:08 AM »
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will pray for u rishi..... hope she undersands ur love.....

dil ko chhu gai tumhri daastaan.....

Thnx Kasak Ji.. Aapse Kahunga KI Aap Duaa Karna Wo Aa Jaye.. Bus Mere Saath Khub Baten Kare.. Chahe Naa Mile Mujhse Kabhi Bas Apna Pyar De De..
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Dil se likha hai rishi bhai..Aur ekdum dil tak pahuncha hai..happy9

I really hope n pray ki aapki aarzoo poori ho jae..happy9
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Dil se likha hai rishi bhai..Aur ekdum dil tak pahuncha hai..happy9

I really hope n pray ki aapki aarzoo poori ho jae..happy9


Thnx Nashwani Ji.. I Hope U Will Pray For Me
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 07:25:27 AM »
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Bahot khooob shandar...
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2013, 08:42:04 AM »
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bahut khoob, isse padhkar vo aapki humdum avashya laut aayegi, all the best.
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 09:07:02 AM »
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bahut khoob.......all the best dost wo jarur aayegi kyu ki tere pyaar sacha hai...... Thumbs UP love9 love9
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bhai yeh sab keh rahein ise padhkar wo jarur aayegi... par pehle yeh to jaan lein ki wo yoindia par ise padhne bhi aayegi ya nahi..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!



rahi qalaam ki baat to isse behatar apne dil ko koi nahi rakh sakta..behad khbsurat dhung se lkha hai aappne bahut hee pyar bhara dard bhara nagama gaya hai......Kash wo ek bar ise jarur padhe taki aapke dil kaa haal us tak jarur pahunchein....


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Bahot khooob shandar...

Dhanywaad Iqtedar Ji
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bahut khoob, isse padhkar vo aapki humdum avashya laut aayegi, all the best.

Dhanywaad Nandbahu Ji... Aasha Karta Hu Ki Wo Laut Aaye.. Bas Wish Karo Uske Dil Ko Chhuve Mere Ye Shbd.. Uske Kathor Dil Mein Ehsaas Ho Mere Pyar Ka..
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bahut khoob.......all the best dost wo jarur aayegi kyu ki tere pyaar sacha hai...... Thumbs UP love9 love9

Dhanywad Miraz Ji.. Kash Aisa Hi Ho Jaye
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bhai yeh sab keh rahein ise padhkar wo jarur aayegi... par pehle yeh to jaan lein ki wo yoindia par ise padhne bhi aayegi ya nahi..... Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!



rahi qalaam ki baat to isse behatar apne dil ko koi nahi rakh sakta..behad khbsurat dhung se lkha hai aappne bahut hee pyar bhara dard bhara nagama gaya hai......Kash wo ek bar ise jarur padhe taki aapke dil kaa haal us tak jarur pahunchein....


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Dhanywaad Saudagar Ji Aapko Mere Dil Ka Haal Pasand Aaya..

Mitr Unhe Pta Hain Hum Yaha Pe Likhte Hain.. Isliye Wo Aati Hain.. Aur Padhti Bhi Hain Par Ab Ye Nahi Pta Unke DiL Mein Mere Lafzo Ka Koi Ehsaas Hoga Ya Nahin.. Plz Pray For Me Ki She Come Back Again
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