आँखें बता रही हैं की जागे हो रात भर...

by mixie on September 17, 2014, 05:25:53 PM
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आँखें बता रही हैं की जागे हो रात भर
पलकों की हर ज़ुबाँ पर दिल का सवाल है

बरसाओ तीर जितने भी पर ये तो जान लो
पहलु में दिल है दिल में तुम्हारा ख्याल है

कह दो ये ज़रा उनसे 'मीना' की मरना नहीं कमाल
हिज्र-ए-यार में हर पल मर के जीना कमाल है
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2014, 05:51:29 PM »
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Meena Jee aadaab...!

Waah jee waah kia kahne behad khoobsurat sher kahe haiN aapne ...
Bahut khoob jee ... in khoob sher par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...

HaaN ho sake toH chaNd sher aur jodiye khoob kalaam ho jayegi ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2014, 07:15:12 PM »
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waaaaaaaah Meena Jee nihaayat umdah sher hai, dheron daad.
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2014, 07:37:15 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOOOOOOOOOOOOB....
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«Reply #4 on: September 18, 2014, 05:15:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah, bahut khoob,...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 18, 2014, 06:54:54 AM »
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वाह....बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #6 on: September 18, 2014, 07:20:34 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause 

baahut khub meenaji
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«Reply #7 on: September 18, 2014, 08:23:14 AM »
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आँखें बता रही हैं की जागे हो रात भर
पलकों की हर ज़ुबाँ पर दिल का सवाल है

बरसाओ तीर जितने भी पर ये तो जान लो
पहलु में दिल है दिल में तुम्हारा ख्याल है

कह दो ये ज़रा उनसे 'मीना' की मरना नहीं कमाल
हिज्र-ए-यार में हर पल मर के जीना कमाल है



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«Reply #8 on: September 18, 2014, 10:20:11 AM »
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Bahut Khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: September 18, 2014, 11:00:42 AM »
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bahut khub...
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