एक कविता तुम पर

by ritika senrit on September 01, 2016, 02:26:41 PM
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तुम पर एक कविता लिखूंगी,
हाँ तुम्ही पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही,जैसी भोर लिखती है,#चाँद पर,
जैसी तपिश लिखती है,#सांझ पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही जैसी ओस लिखती है,#पत्तों पर,
जैसी तितली लिखती है,#फूलों पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही,जैसी बसंत लिखता है,#पतझड़ पर,
जैसी सावन लिखता है,#जेठ पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही,जैसी नदिया लिखती है,#पहाड़ पर,
जैसी बारिश लिखती है,#उजाड़ पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही,जैसी दुख लिखता है,#पलकों पर,
जैसी सुख लिखता है,#होठों पर,

बिलकुल वैसी ही,जैसी मन लिखता है,#जीवन पर,
जैसी तन लिखता है,#संगम पर,

एक सुन्दर कविता
वैसी ही, तुम पर, हाँ तुम्ही पर.... #रितिका
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bahot acha hai
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2016, 07:18:53 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut hee khoobsurat ehsaas hai.
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«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2016, 09:18:06 AM »
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WAAH KYA BAAT HAI BOHUT KHUB RITIKA JI
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2016, 09:29:18 AM »
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Beautiful...nice writing style....nice comparisons...very nice!
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