खवाइश है (CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on December 22, 2019, 10:17:38 PM
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खवाइश है  कुछ तुम्हारे लिए  भी करू 
तुम्हे पाया ही कहा है जो खोने से डरु 
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2019, 01:51:20 AM »
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खवाइश है  कुछ तुम्हारे लिए  भी करू
तुम्हे पाया ही कहा है जो खोने से डरु

bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
perhaps you need to tune it like this.
Khwaahish hai kuchh tumhaare liye abb karun
Barhey yatan se paa kar khoney se abb darun
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2019, 06:14:25 AM »
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bahut khoob. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
perhaps you need to tune it like this.
Khwaahish hai kuchh tumhaare liye abb karun
Barhey yatan se paa kar khoney se abb darun

thx
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«Reply #3 on: December 23, 2019, 06:15:12 AM »
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Barhey  means bhai ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 23, 2019, 12:50:34 PM »
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वाह वाह अति सुंदर |
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«Reply #5 on: December 23, 2019, 06:17:52 PM »
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thx

You are welcome Manoj Jee.
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2019, 09:23:36 AM »
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वाह वाह अति सुंदर |
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