चाँद को बदली की आगोश में

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उनका आरिज़ तकिये पे मचलते देखा,
चाँद को डूबते सूरज को निकलते देखा,

जुल्फ क्या आ गयी उनके चेहरे पे "बेताब",
चाँद को बदली की आगोश में सिमटते देखा.

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«Reply #1 on: July 27, 2013, 11:42:50 PM »
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Waah Waah,
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bahut khoob Betab ji, khubsurat qata hai. bahut mubarakbad.
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2013, 01:24:56 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 27, 2013, 11:42:50 PM
Waah Waah,
Shukria Ravi Ji.
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 28, 2013, 01:13:55 AM
bahut khoob Betab ji, khubsurat qata hai. bahut mubarakbad.

Shukria Siddiqui Sahab for your precious comments.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause gud
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Quote from: SaniyaS on July 28, 2013, 07:44:10 PM
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Thanks Saniya ji for your comments.
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thanks Nanbhau ji.
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