जवां होते ही - By "Betaab".

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जवां होते ही वो दिल की पतंग उड़ाने लगे,
गैरों के साथ साथ अपनों से भी पेंच लड़ाने लगे.

परवाह नहीं कि कटी पतंग कौन लूट लेगा,
जो भी सामने आया उस पर ही दाव आज़माने लगे.

दिल की पतंग को इतनी लापरवाही से न उड़ाओ "बेताब",
ऐसा न हो पतंग के साथ साथ डोर भी लूटी जाने लगे.

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वाह....वाह.....
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Nayaab,,,,BehtreeN......!!
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वाह....वाह.....

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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on May 06, 2014, 05:18:03 PM
जवां होते ही वो दिल की पतंग उड़ाने लगे,
गैरों के साथ साथ अपनों से भी पेंच लड़ाने लगे.

परवाह नहीं कि कटी पतंग कौन लूट लेगा,
जो भी सामने आया उस पर ही दाव आज़माने लगे.

दिल की पतंग को इतनी लापरवाही से न उड़ाओ "बेताब",
ऐसा न हो पतंग के साथ साथ डोर भी लूटी जाने लगे.

   Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".


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