तुमसे मोह्हबत की अब तो इन्तहा हो गयी

by satay on March 24, 2012, 10:13:51 AM
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तुमसे मोह्हबत की अब तो इन्तहा हो गयी

जबसे नफरत में भी मोह्हबत नज़र हमको आने लगी

दिल-फेंक  आशिक तो हम तेरे पहले ही थे

अब तो रातो की नींदे  भी तू चुराने लगी.....BY SPT

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Tumse mohhabat ki ab to intha ho gyi

jabse nafart mein bhi mohhabat nazar hamko aane lagi

Dil fenk aashiq to ham tere pehle hee they

Aab to raatoi ki neende bhi tu churane  lagi.....BY SPT
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2012, 10:30:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob, only "मोहब्बत" needs correction
तुमसे मोह्हबत की अब तो इन्तहा हो गयी

जबसे नफरत में भी मोह्हबत नज़र हमको आने लगी

दिल-फेंक  आशिक तो हम तेरे पहले ही थे

अब तो रातो की नींदे  भी तू चुराने लगी.....BY SPT

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Tumse mohhabat ki ab to intha ho gyi

jabse nafart mein bhi mohhabat nazar hamko aane lagi

Dil fenk aashiq to ham tere pehle hee they

Aab to raatoi ki neende bhi tu churane  lagi.....BY SPT

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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2012, 11:04:52 AM »
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Hmm..sahi kha apne..shukriya
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