दिल करता है....अमित प्रकाश "मीत"

by amit_prakash_meet on May 17, 2012, 05:26:28 AM
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जहाँ पर मिले थे हम तुम पहली बार
वहीँ पर ही जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ बनाया था दिल का ये मंदिर
वहीँ पर सदका करने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर कुरेदे थे तेरे नाम के हिज्जे    
उन्हीं खंडरों पे जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर लुटी थी "मीत" दिल की दुनिया
वहीँ पर कब्र बनाने को दिल करता है
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2012, 05:33:15 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2012, 05:40:32 AM »
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Wah Meet Bhai wah bahut khoob rahi aapki ye peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2012, 06:04:02 AM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on May 17, 2012, 05:26:28 AM
जहाँ पर मिले थे हम तुम पहली बार
वहीँ पर ही जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ बनाया था दिल का ये मंदिर
वहीँ पर सदका करने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर कुरेदे थे तेरे नाम के हिज्जे   
उन्हीं खंडरों पे जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर लुटी थी "मीत" दिल की दुनिया
वहीँ पर कब्र बनाने को दिल करता है



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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2012, 06:52:36 AM »
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Thank you Saini Ji
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bahut khoob...ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2012, 07:38:16 AM »
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Thanks a lot Pramod Ji
Quote from: Pramod singh on May 17, 2012, 05:40:32 AM
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2012, 10:57:15 AM »
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Bahut hi umda khyaal hain Meet Ji, unhi khandaron pe jaane ka dil karta hai waah....
Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on May 17, 2012, 05:26:28 AM
जहाँ पर मिले थे हम तुम पहली बार
वहीँ पर ही जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ बनाया था दिल का ये मंदिर
वहीँ पर सदका करने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर कुरेदे थे तेरे नाम के हिज्जे   
उन्हीं खंडरों पे जाने को दिल करता है

जहाँ पर लुटी थी "मीत" दिल की दुनिया
वहीँ पर कब्र बनाने को दिल करता है

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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2012, 04:14:23 AM »
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Thanks a lot Qalb Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2012, 07:23:05 AM »
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Thanks a lot Dolly Ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2012, 06:34:22 PM »
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Thank you very much Goldy Ji
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Bahut hi umda khyaal hain Meet Ji, unhi khandaron pe jaane ka dil karta hai waah....
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