दिल में तमन्ना सी रही जाग कोई

by charanjit chandwal on February 18, 2013, 02:27:13 PM
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है कहीं दिल में तमन्ना सी रही जाग कोई,
मिलें जो तुमसे निगाहें लगे सुराग कोई।

जरा सी छूके तरब दिल की कोई देख सनम,
प्यार का तेरे मेरे फ़िर से छिडे राग कोई।

रुके हुए हैं इन आँखो में जो बादल से कई ,
बरसने दो कि ग़म का धुलेगा दाग़ कोई।  

उधर गिला ये कि इसरारे मोहब्बत न किया,
यहाँ पे डर न बुझे उम्मीद का चराग़ कोई।

समझ के राख़ का इक ढेर कुरेदे ‘चंदन’,
हो न इसमें दबी अभी भी कहीं आग कोई।
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 03:25:21 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 04:13:34 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 06:27:02 PM »
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Charanjeet Jee Aadaab!


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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2013, 12:58:44 AM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2013, 02:13:54 AM »
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kya baat hai

bahut khoob..khoobsurat ghazal
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bhut khub ji
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bahut bahut khoob ji
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what a gr8 poem, congrats!
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«Reply #9 on: February 20, 2013, 11:09:20 AM »
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bahut khoob
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