दीवानी चली है...................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 17, 2013, 05:15:05 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 17, 2013, 10:02:14 PM »
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Waaaaaaah suru ji... aapke likhne ka andaaz bahut hi alag aur bahut hi pyaara hai.. is khoob kalaam par dheron dheron daaaad..
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«Reply #16 on: October 18, 2013, 01:26:51 AM »
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Kagaj ki zameen par lafz utarne
‘Saru’ki kalam deewani chali hai


Bahut Khub Suresh Jee


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #17 on: October 18, 2013, 01:35:44 AM »
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waah waah bahut bahut khoob Suresh jee.
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waah bahut khoob likha hai..

dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #19 on: October 18, 2013, 03:13:35 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah..........Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #20 on: October 18, 2013, 03:59:05 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 17, 2013, 05:15:05 PM

मोहब्बत  की  तुमसे  रवानी चली  है
अब  जाके  मिरि  जिंदगानी  चली है

मसला हमसफ़र का हो या मंज़िल का
बात  वही  फिर  से  पुरानी  चली  है

लाई  कहाँ   से   हौसले   समेटकर
कज़ा  से  उलझने  आसानी  चली है

तुम्हारे शहर की  गलियों से तुम तक
मेरी  भी  अब  तो  कहानी चली  है

ये किसके दिल-ए-गुलशन से महककर
हवाओं   की   मेहरबानी   चली   है

दीये  आज   लेकर   आसमानों   में
उठके  तारों  की  जवानी   चली  है

काग़ज़  की  ज़मीं  पर  लफ्ज़  उतारने
हाँ 'सरु' की  कलम  दीवानी चली  है





Mohabbat ki tumse rawani chali hai
Ab jake meri jindgani chali hai

Masla humsafar ka ho ya manjil ka
Baat wahi fir se poorani chali hai

Lai  kahan se hausle  sametkar
kazaN se ulajhne aasani chali hai

Tumhare shahar ki galiyon se tum tak
Meri bhi ab to kahaani chali hai

ye kiske dil-e-gulshan se mehakkar
Hawaaon ki meharbaani chali hai

Deeye aaj lekar aasmano mein
Uthke taaron ki jawaani chali hai

Kagaj ki zameen par lafz utarne
‘Saru’ki kalam deewani chali hai



Waaaaaaah Waaaaaah Waaaaaah

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Suresh ji...


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«Reply #21 on: October 18, 2013, 09:14:25 AM »
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wah wah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #22 on: October 18, 2013, 02:11:26 PM »
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«Reply #23 on: October 19, 2013, 12:20:55 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aqsh ji
Quote from: aqsh on October 17, 2013, 10:02:14 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Waaaaaaah suru ji... aapke likhne ka andaaz bahut hi alag aur bahut hi pyaara hai.. is khoob kalaam par dheron dheron daaaad..
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«Reply #24 on: October 19, 2013, 12:22:26 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 18, 2013, 01:26:51 AM
Kagaj ki zameen par lafz utarne
‘Saru’ki kalam deewani chali hai


Bahut Khub Suresh Jee


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab
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«Reply #25 on: October 19, 2013, 12:23:19 AM »
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Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile :)bahut bahut shukriya iftakhar ji
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waah waah bahut bahut khoob Suresh jee.
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«Reply #26 on: October 19, 2013, 12:25:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwahish on October 18, 2013, 03:59:05 AM

Waaaaaaah Waaaaaah Waaaaaah

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Suresh ji...


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«Reply #27 on: October 19, 2013, 12:25:55 AM »
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Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile :)bahut bahut shukriya shireen ji
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«Reply #28 on: October 19, 2013, 12:26:53 AM »
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Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile :)bahut bahut dhanyawaad nashwani ji
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waah bahut khoob likha hai..

dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #29 on: October 19, 2013, 07:14:11 PM »
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thanks kittoo ji
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Applause Applause Applause Applause very nice
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